Over the past couple of weeks we have given potential entrants the opportunity to ask Bevan Lee, Seven Network's Script Executive and the man who wrote the original episodes of the show, any questions they had about writing a scene.
A huge thanks to Bevan for taking the time out to answer your questions!What makes a successful scene and what are the most important factors to consider when writing a scene?Know
what the scene is about and write with focus and depth to communicate
what you want from the scene. Do not ramble all over the place with
unnecessary dialogue that does not service your dramatic intention.
What are the obvious pitfalls to avoid when writing a standalone scene?Do
not try to make it about so many things that the scene ultimately
becomes about nothing. And focus those things you want from the scene
via a well-constructed through line.
My problem is coming up with original ideas; do you have any tips for this?You
have to find your own creative juice for a scene. No one can supply it
for you. Write about something you want to write about or else the
scene will have no heart and soul.
One of the things I
struggle most with when it comes to writing is editing - I get into a
flow of dialogue and although it doesn't constitute exposition,
feedback I've received before would indicate that scenes I write are
too long. How does one go about selecting "the best of" the dialogue in
order to get a succinct but still emotionally deep scene?A good
scene is not just a whole lot of stuff you think is good squeezed in to
a minute and a half. It should all be appropriate to the scene and be
ordered in a way that progresses the scene in an interesting, forward
thrusting manner. So cut out anything, no matter how good, that does
not do this. Keep a scrapbook of these discards. Save them up for a
time when you can use them to more point and effect in some other scene
you are writing.
When I have seen interviews with cast
members they have mentioned the big print in the script, and Coral has
mentioned it in her guide, but what exactly is it, when do you use it,
and how much is too much or too little? How much description is too
much? Should the story be carried more by the dialogue, or by the
settings and actions written into the script?Description(aka
big print) should be used to communicate setting, totally necessary
action, mood and states of mind that are not communicated by the
dialogue. You must ask the question of all description (big print) -
does the scene work without it? If the answer is yes, cut it. There is
nothing more defocussing and clumsy in a scene than unnecessary big
print.
2008 saw a high cast turn over for the show and
consequently some potential entrants may feel they do not "know" the
characters as well some of the more established characters present
during the last competition. How would you approach writing for a
character that has not yet had a large amount of screen time in which
the audience has gotten to fully "know" them?Don't write for
them. Construct scenes around characters you do know. You cannot write
effectively for characters you don't know.
I have tried
writing a few scripts, and one of my problems is making the characters
consistent, how could I prevent straying from the original
personalities of the characters?You must concentrate. There is
no answer to this other than to say if you can write consistently for
the characters then you can do it, if you can't write consistently then
you can't. There is actually no answer to your question other than -
focus and concentrate, draft and redraft your work until you get the
characters right.
What do you think is the best way to get inside the head of the character for which you are writing?Feel them inside you. Do not write from outside them, write by feeling their truth inside yourself.
What is the most important factor in writing a character?Truth and honesty to them and their story.
We
have in the past had a number of entries where people have demonstrated
an ability to write dialogue but where the scenes they have submitted
have not really "gone anywhere". How would you suggest they remedy this?They
have to focus. Scriptwriting is only partially about dialogue. It is
much more about focus, structure and honesty to the story material. If
they can't get that part right as well then, no matter how good their
dialogue, they don't have what it takes to be a scriptwriter.
How do you ensure that dramatic moments retain their integrity without crossing the line into melodrama?You
find the truth in the story material and then write from inside that
truth rather than writing from outside it. You write so the characters
live the moment rather than pretend living it. You feel that truth in
your soul as you write it. That is why good scriptwriters have lived
full and varied lives. They have the life experience to be able to
feel, and therefore write, the script moments truthfully.
Our entrants have to create a 90 - 100 second scene with a dramatic ending, what are your top tips for building up tension?Don't blow your dramatic firepower right up front in the scene. If you do, you have nowhere to go. Pace and shape your drama.
How do you deal with writers block when you have been given a scene to write?If
anyone has writers block when all they have to do is write one scene,
give up. Writers block is only allowable for someone who has been
writing for a long time. Anyone who has it at this point is not a
writer.
What general tips would you give to a first time writer thinking about entering this competition?Don't
think it is easy. We make it look easy on the show, but huge amounts of
hard work go in to what you see, writing and rewriting and crafting for
all of the scenes to get them just right. If you toss something off the
top of your head and don't work and rework and hone it to get it as
good as possible, then you have no chance whatsoever. Writing is hard
work. Unless you are prepared to put in that hard work, don't even
bother starting.