QUIET ACHIEVER

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I have added the Index Form to your first post. All you need to do is press the three dots on the right hand side of your first post and find Edit. Your window will then open and you are able to make changes to your Index Form.

There isn't a Lance Smart character/actor discussion thread but please feel free to start one.

This first chapter is definitely too short - it's just one hundred words but there's no clearly defined beginning, middle or end to this chapter. There's only two paragraphs too when clearly there should be more than three to justify a beginning, a middle and an end. The conversations need to be spaced out and not all written together - a new line for each character that is speaking would be a good start. What I'd like to see out of this fiction would be longer chapters and some kind of plot. If you are looking for inspiration or how to write a chapter then there are plenty of great writers on this forum - both past and present - where you can get some inspiration from. "The best form of writing fan fictions are to read fan fictions!" - QA There's also a Writers Etiquette thread with tutorials and tips on writing.

When starting a new fiction, one's first chapter needs to be merged with the first post (ie the Index Form) otherwise it is classified as a Promotion Fic and will earn a warning - according to Rule 3 in the Official Fan Fiction Section Rules and Guidelines see here.

Please be careful when posting comments in this thread about Kyle Braxton - especially since this character has left on Australian television screens. Spoiler tags need to be used if any new information comes to hand... but it would be preferable to post those comments in the appropriate Spoiler thread(s). Thanks.

This thread is open again for business.... If anyone needs any help with their fiction whether it be ideas etc then please feel free to post in here.

Librarian Edit: For those members who are reading this fiction, Prologue Part 1 has now been added to the first post.

Librarian Note: Please do not post about characters and/or storylines that have not been seen on Australian screens. Any spoilers should be posted in the Spoiler thread or be posted with spoiler tags.

Amazing icons Jen. Lovely use of croppings and colourings.

Librarian Note: This fiction has been moved to the Vault because it has been exactly five (5) months since the author has last posted a chapter for this fiction. Five months is sufficient time for all authors to post the next chapter in one's fiction. If an author is having troubles with this concept then maybe one has published too many fictions on this forum in order to keep up with the continuing demands of updating one's fictions? Might it be an idea to make note of all the fictions one has published and add to them within the five months time frame of when one has last posted their last chapter... and refrain from publishing new fictions until one has completed the majority of ongoing fictions already published.

Please note that if an event or an upcoming storyline that hasn't been seen on Australian television screens, then it is classified as a spoiler. One must either refrain from posting spoilers in this thread or make sure that spoiler tags are added to the spoilers within one's post. Please remember this in future.