Gorgeous four chapters Miranda and thanks for your appreciation, it's my pleasure to support a fellow writer who capture my imagination.
The way you portray Ceri's shyness around Leah and vice versa is priceless. I enjoy reading the suspenseful "will they/won't they" act upon their feelings scenarios - it keeps me on the edge of my seat.
I can't imagine Ceri being a Jones though, I like Ceri Pritchard much better.
When I read the above quote, it really stood out for me... or am I reading waaaay toooo much into it?
Please update soon and I'm enjoying the journey that you are taking us on with Ceri and finding out about his past.