FINALLY, I have managed to catch up and wow, I can't believe I stayed away so long!! I think it's great you've brought her Dad back into her life - sort of anyway - I felt so sorry for Tony when she was annoyed with him but then I can see that her Dad would be a very emotional thing to be surprised with. The whole chapter was written to absolute perfection.
And hooray for the return of Brad!!
I loved that line!
I don't know why but there was something really poignant about that line - just the irrational angry thoughts you have when you're grieving I guess. Poor Martha, she's so lost. That part made my arm go all floppy, I'm so squeamish! But it was sooo well described, horrible but beautiful.
Leah and Hugo were cute And the Brad and Rachel scene was great, it explained so much and I love that you recreated their close sibling bond so perfectly. And the Tachel fluff was cutteee!!
And last but not least the awesomeness that was the arrival of baby Tachel The first bit was sooo funny. Tony's such an idiot, but a loveable one! And the rest of the chapter was so lovely, really really beautiful.
I feel like I've left out loads more that I wanted to say! But to sum up I love this fic, you're a brilliant writer and I can't wait for the next installment.