This fic is so brilliant, I absolutely love it. I've just read the whole thing in one sitting!! It's so refreshing to see a fic about Leah and you provide such a great insight into her life and why she is the way that she is. These days people are way too quick to say that she's just bitter, boring and naggy. It doesn't seem to have occured to anyone that she's still heartbroken and trying to cope with a million things at once.
I love your writing and how you've incorporated the rest of the cast into the story. Although I really have no idea what's going on with Jazz. Ceri's great, and your picture looks almost exactly like I imagined him!
Can't wait to read the rest, and the Rachel/Hugh mentions have inspired me to go and read your other fic which I adored. Keep up the great work.