JacknMartha

That is very good and descriptive. The best bit was this I loved the one shot and maybe you could add more to it :) Loved the title, very inventive

Lovely chapters Tash loves Jack Jack and Martha

I love every chapter. Jack and Martha rock They are so cute together and I hope to see more soon

I am good, tired but good. you?

I am good, tired but good. you?

I dont think you will though Anywayz that was cute. Kind of cuter than present day JM.

Am here!!

10 I hate about you.

Tell us already! Please

Lol you all love Adam! I know who she kills off. You may be surprised.

Just caught up and you are really good. more soon xxx

I agree with Puja You cant hurt them at all. Lewis has to be Jacks!

Cam! I hate him with a passion. You better not do what I think you are. Update now soon

Becky if you knew the personal reasons, you will know what is going on. Ask Zetti

Tash this was a really hard chapter for Zetti to write for personal reasons, maybe she will tell you but I thought you should know. Great chapter xxx

SuperJack!

Good idea sis. Personal issues in a fic seems to be a good idea. More please xxx

Good the shooting is done! Becky

Zetti is gonna make you all angry in her chapter! She has gone into hiding. Update soon

This is really good. Becky leave already!