ScreamingQueen2006

Hey Steve. Sorry I haven't commented you or your stories in a while. I just caught this and I must say it's brillant. You write so well. Will be keeping an eye out for the next chapter.

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Plus, she has had a tough and difficult life so she's like this and quite grown up for that reason. Well said Shelly.

Congrats on your reply from Ray. Not sure about how long it's taking these days as not written to any of the cast in a real long time. I guess they may just be really busy with things.

Same here. There's too much hate being said about the relationship and how they're going too fast. I don't see the problem, it's only a show at the end of the day.

What the heck? She hasn't been around long enough to have developed as a fully fledged character yet. Give it some time.

Great chapter Zetti. I really enjoyed that. I second what Sarah said Rocco is cute, ubberly cute. I'm glad Casey will get to spend time at Rocco's party. I think the Braxton brothers need some time to chill with each other without fights. They deserve that much right now. Look forward to the next chapter. Update again soon.

Awesome chapter Red. I enjoyed that. I loved the scene between VJ and Pippa. You write the characters so well, just like they are in the show. I could picture VJ's interactions and everything he said during that. I think those two may been getting into a bit of puppy love. It would be nice and cute. I felt very sorry for Dex last chapter, but he seems to be picking up and I'm happy that he's seeking solace in Leah. I have a feeling that something may happen between him and Leah, although I could be wrong. I guess I'll just wait and see on that front. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Growing up sounds cool. Summer Bay Teens Growing Up Or Teens of Summer Bay Growing Up or just Growing up or Growing Up in Summer Bay

Great chapter. Really nice chat between Dex and Xavier there. I'm seeing sparks flying between Sally and Liam too. I wonder if anything will happen with them. Update again soon.

Great chapter, really enjoyed that. I felt sorry for the little girl who saw Ruby, but at the same time I wanted to laugh. I'm sure that's not the last time that family will be talking about this incident. I can imagine it now. "Mummy?" "Yes darling." "Will we see any other people with their clothes off?" "No, normal people don't do that. I'm sure it was only in Summer Bay." "But mummy. Why did that girl that her top off?" Hahaha. Jett. You naughty boy. Having feeling for Ruby, just keep them to yourself, but I have a feeling you won't. lol. As for the pictures I think it's very apt of his character to want to sell them. I wonder if Gina will see Sasha topless now. Oh my gosh at the ending there. Can't believe Charlie wants Ruby arrested. I know it was indecent, but still. She's her daughter after all. Look forward to more soon.

I think he'll begin a relationship with Tamara and struggle with the guys in jail who try to make fights with him.

I really hate it when girls do that.

Great chapter. Very intense there with Sasha and Ruby taking glances at each other during the count down, to see who will go through with the plan. It's all getting exciting now they're all at the beach. I have to say, I find Billy quite an understanding guy given that his girlfriend is about to expose herself to everyone. Loved this line as well. Update again soon.

Pippa's turned into a pretty smart kid. I liked the scene at the beginning there with her, Miles, Sally and Irene. I wonder if Pippa and VJ will become friends. Poor Dex, he can't catch a break at all and I felt for him when he found the letter. I understand how Dallas must be feeling too, but that wasn't the most tactful way of doing it. I hope they both have a talk soon and sort things out for the boys. Update again soon.

I agree with Casey, they should let their hair down and enjoy the rollercoaster while not with the kids. Upate again soon.

You're welcome, and yes, dead on the money. As for the chapter, as always another great update. I laughed at Billy and Ruby getting caught by Charlie, typicial Charlie not to like anyone else having any fun, but I can understand as it is under her roof. And typicial Bianca liking the passion between the two teens. Looking forward to see what happens next.

Great start to this fic. I'm enjoying it so far. Not sure I like Dallas with her attitude but to be fair she's probably really stressed with all the chores and the tiredness the kids are putting her through, and needs a break. I do feel sorry for Dex a bit though, glad he could talk to Leah. Nice seeing Sally, I liked her scene with Alf and his "welcome home Sal." Look forward to more.

Pretty sure she is as she is still filming. Cool. Thanks.

I'm really intrigued about Tamara. Looking forward to learning more about her and her past. Does anyone know if she's sticking around?

Great chapter. Those outfits are so Sasha and Ruby. Looking forward to the next update and seeing how Billy reacts as well.

Great chapter. Ruby having a body guard and that moment with Billy at the beginning. More soon please.

Chapter 4 is fully written but it's just a case of typing it up and parts of Chapter 5 are done. So there will be an update soon.

Sorry I haven't commented on the last few chapters. I really like Billy and Ruby. But uh oh at the end there. I'm wondering what Ruby will say to Billy's question. I hope she doesn't put her foot in it or anything. Update again soon.

That's nice that Ruby has finally decided to give Casey a chance to be in his daughter's life. I know it took for her to see Nicole trying with Romeo, but all the same it's a great improvement in her character from her hitting him. Looking forward to seeing how it goes when he heads over to the Buckton's. Update again soon.