Anaya

I've said this before & I'll say it again, your colouring is good enough to eat. So gorgeous & always reminds me of sweets & candyfloss. So many stunning updates, loving all the different styles & textures you use. My favs are the Leah icons, the b&w Matilda one, the Ruby one & every single JPC one. Awwww I miss them (not that I watch HO anymore ), but I still miss them. Thank god for YT!

I've missed so many updates, Barbara. I love all the different colourings that you use. Just gorgeous. My favs are the Leah icon from your previous update, the 4th Niff icon & all the Indi ones. Awesome stuff.

Love all your TWIP updates, Sarah. Gorgeous colouring & cropping on all. Awww. That is so cute. I miss Ollie.

BY CHARACTER Multi Character Stories (Numerical + A - K) 2007 (Gag) 20/20 Vision 5 Weeks Later 72 Hours A Big Mistake! A Brit In The Bay A Case Of The Munchies A Cat For The Flat A Christmas Story A Forgotten Love A Haunted Mystery A Little Less Conversation, A Little More Action A Love That Never Stops A Love to Last a Lifetime A Mothers Love A Much Needed Holiday A Path Of Heartbreak A Perfect Match A Second Chance A Shared Passion A Summer Bay Wedding A Summer Bay Wedding II A Summer in Salem with a Lot of Bay A Target For Love A Time To Love A Voice in My Ear A Year Later Above and Beyond After The Fire All of Me All Shook Up Alone Alternates Always Mine An Unlikely Couple And Just Like That - Everything Changes Angelo and Nicole Make Lunch Anonymous Another Chance Another Side of Him Another You, Another Me, Another Now Anzac Day Remembrance Ash Baby Braxton Baby Chapman Baby Daddy Baby Evie Back To The Future Bad Moon Rising Battles and Secrets Bay Wars Beachside Dining Beautiful Nightmare Becoming A Family Before I Die Before The Gang Believe (In Love After Life) Birthday Surprises Birthday's Start Disasters Blades Of Skye !!!! Blind Sided Blood Ties Bonds of Blood and Water Boom Boom Pow Bound By Blood Bound By Fear, Rescued By Love Brash Breaking Point Bring Out The Best In Me And In You Broken Broken Hearts and Last Goodbyes Brothers In Arms Brothers On The Run Burn For You Busy Making Other Plans Caged Can I Go Through It Again? Can't Believe He's Gone Can't Stand From Falling Down Cash, Rose and Jasmine - Love Triangle Chaos Charlie & Ruby Charlie and Ruby Charlie's Life Is Far From Happy Cheating Hearts and Psychotic Affections Chimera Classic Twisted Tales Cockle Shells Cold Summer Coming Undone Complicated Desires, Forbidden Meetings Complications Confusion Conjugal Charms Connection Then Love Connections Couple Of The Year Crazy Bitch Crossover Dark Tunnels Dating Madness Deadly Reunion December Mourning Distance and Time Don't Put Your Face Into Your Hands DRAHNRAE Dreams Come True Ella and Jaden Elliot's Return Escape Even Love's Got to Have it's Limits Everybody God Dam Chillax Everything Happens For A Reason Everything To Me Evil Lurks at Check In Exposure of the Beast Fallin' For You! Falling In Love Family Family Matters Fate Final Destination - Summer Bay Find A Way To See This Straight Find My Way Back To You Finders Keepers Fear First Into Mother Now Into Son Follow Your Heart For The Rest Of The Night For You Are the One Forbidden Forbidden Attractions Forbidden Fruit Forbidden Love Forever and Always Forever Yours Forgiveness Four Funerals And A Wedding Four Seasons In One Day Freaky Summer Bay Friends Or Lovers? Friends Reunited Friends With (Unwanted) Benefits Full Circle Funny Bits Gasping For Life Ghost Sight Goodbye And Godspeed Goodbye, Summer Bay Growing Pains Guardian Angel Happy Birthday To Me Happy Ever After Harder Than You Think Harmony Hero His Life, Her Life, Theirs Combined History Seems To Repeat Itself H&A Script Home and Away Season Finale Homecoming Homecoming Part 2 Homecoming Part 3 Homecoming Part 4 Homecoming Part 5 Home is Where the Heart Heals Home Sweet Home Hope Humans And Animals Hunted Hunter and Ryder as River Boys I Almost Do I Am Not Dead I Didn't Have A Choice I Do What I Do For My Family I Only Wanted to be Popular I Shouldn't Love You. But I Do! I Want You I Will Be I'll Always Be Here I'll Be Here For You I'll Be With You Until The End I'll Love You Forever I'm A Believer... Right? I'm Ok If I Could.... If There's Only One Side Fighting If You Don't Wanna Love Me If You Love Someone You Tell Them If You Text It I'll Delete It In the Adult World In the Line of Sight Is This Friendship or Love? It's A Love Hate Kinda Thing It's A Wonderful Charles Dickens Type Of Christmas It's Feeding Time Down The Hatch Jack and Martha, A Love Given Jealous Eyes Jealously Jealously and Love Jodi + Wine Johnny's Family Joining Our Lives Together Just Moved Here Just The Once Just When... Keep On Keeping On Kidnapped Killing Me Softly KISS the girl Krystal Clear Kyle Returns Kyle's Past

^ Well apparently not happening. It's been denied by an EE spokesperson.

^That!!! Yes I reiterate. I come back in to this thread with caution, expecting to find what I don't want to see. But instead I get more happy stuff. And lots & lots & lots of it. Also more communication. This isn't right! Hmmm... . Either you're giving us so much amazing, gorgeous, loving, happy scenes to make up in advance for the most heinous acts that we're going to be subjected to in the not too distant future. Or someone's abducted Tele & we've got this fraud in her place. Anyway I hope the latter is not the case. 'Cos happiness is overrated!!! That's right I actually said that. Especially when you have no heartache/anguish to compare it against. So i'll be bold & say it. Give me some angsty, drama-filled, tragic, emotional, black stuff. And a bit of action man Roman I wouldn't say no to either. Also what is the significance of this Leona b*tch woman getting mentioned/being searched for? Is she going to be making an appearance, or is that just a bit of randomness added in with no other intentions? Also, are Rola ever going to find/get in touch with their daughter again. I’d like that so I hope they do. Now that I've commented, am I in for an update soonish? Hehe! I thought those type of names were only restricted to mechanical devices! I guess the soldier hits all the right spots on & off the battlefield.

Eh? Am I in the right place... hmmm... Yes?! Anaya's asking the same question. Not one or two but like a gazillion happy chapters all one after the other. I can't believe my eyes. Lilly is Roman's, I'll take credit for that with my last demand comment. 'Cos knowing Tele the outcome would have been more likely to be the bad option otherwise. Lol! Communication! There's never, ever been so much Rola communication. I'm loving it. As am I loving all the fluff, cute moments, family scenes and the getting intimate. Frolicing in the swimming pool no less. Although I must admit I wasn't expecting the return of the 'at it like Rabbits' stage. Not that I'm complaining, in fact more please. This is way too happy for this fic. I'm going to buy myself a stab proof vest & start wearing it before I ever enter this fic again. Going overboard you might ask? I don't think so & I advise others to do the same. I have every faith that I'm going to be stabbed right through my heart very soon. And this poor little soul cannot take any more heartache. It's coming, right Tele? This many happy scenes can only spell one thing, bad things are going to happen to good people very soon. The return of your saddistic side. I want him gone permanently too. But I don't want my Roman behind bars, onscreen is bad enough, not in fic land too. Please. Can't we just have some Elliot being tortured by Roman scenes? & that way it can all be brushed under the carpet once he's handed in to the cops. Roman can just deny... deny everything. And then we can return to that happy place once again in the next sequel of yours. Which. I. Will. Get.

Miles&Roman bonding scenes? Check. A bit of Jacko thrown in too? Check. Racy Rola fluff included? Check. Cute Rola & kids family interaction? Check. Anaya in heaven? Check. Now I've just got Rambo Roman flexing muscles in the jungle, kicking some Elliot butt to look forward to. That'll be next update then. Gorgeous well written chapters full of happy scenes, which makes a welcome change, especially in this fic. And yay for Miles being Godfather, could it be any other way? Ofcourse not . I wonder if El will have the hypnosis, it could help & as for that paternity test outcome. Lilly. Will. Be. Roman's. Comprende, Tele?

N'aawwwwwwwww!! They had a baby girl. Gorgeous little Lilly Alyssa Alyssia (now? ) and he named her after his mother, so cute. Are we going to learn more about Roman's family... is that why you've hinted at it. Or am I barking up the wrong tree & it's just a one off. 'Cos I'd like that actually. Anyway OMG!!! Not only do you finally give me that double update, but they find Mike, get to Ella in time, I get lovely all male bonding scenes (Roman, Aden, Mike, Geoff) at the hospital (where was Miles ), they have a gorgeous baby girl, El herself survives it all & comes through fighting fit, I find myself another cute chapter featuring Rola & the family. Had they tortured caught Elliot aswell then I would have been on cloud nine (well that or some sexy Rola fluff ). But I've got both of those things to look forward to in the next update, right? These three chapters were awesome, the tension, the urgency, the drama was all written spot on. And as if that wasn't enough there were some amazing interaction scenes between lots of different character, one on one, or altogether. Plus some good little references to previous stuff, as well as funny/witty moments. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! *does a little happy dance*

Yay... so I go awol for a little while (damn real life for winning that battle ), but on the plus side I come back to find two updates to catch up on. No thanks to you Tele! Well technically it would be to you, seeing as you wrote them both, but it's not like you posted them in quick succession to constitute the double update I requested. Yet I still got just that... so woop! But I'm still expecting that double update next time. Anyway on to the actual fic. Poor El, all alone, in the dark, in that room, in that warehouse, a reminder of such painful/horrific memories, and in the onset of labour, tied up right next to a live bomb that could explode anytime soon. Could you be anymore EVIL?? Oh yes you can… then have Elliot send Roman some lovely pictures of that said situation El finds herself in as well. Me & Jacko both. Loved that whole part with the Ella mini-me Sophie & Roman. So cute & sad & heartbreaking. Glad Mike’s plotting away trying to find a way out, well until he became unconscious. I do have a tiny constructive criticism of that chapter, if I can be honest. I know you were in an uninspired headspace at the time, but it felt it was a little disjointed. Lots of things happened, but then at the same time it felt like not much or too many separate individual things happened, so it lost a bit of the flow to the story. Still a great read though. With chapter 35 you got your magic touch back, it was brilliant. I loved the Jacko/Roman exchanges, still no substitute my Miles/Roman fix, so I hope I’ve got that to look forward to in the future. Also Roman/Sophie part 2 was my favourite again. It was moving, sweet & perfect. She really does take after Ella, complete with slamming doors. Lol! More importantly in the middle of the chapter there, I was wondering why you decided to do a Roman character assassination, when he actually chose between El & Mike. Something felt wrong, but then I knew there had to be more. Finally the noble, selfless Roman returned, glad Jacko cottoned on to his real intentions... the self-sacrifice & they all managed to get him to agree to go with him. Lastly go Mike; I knew you’d have him manage to find a way out of that room. That intelligence & training had to come in handy somewhere. So happy about that at least. Now for that double update…

So Tele, remember that time when I said that Elliot/Mike stuff felt too obvious, well I wasn’t just talking about Elliot likely to be suss, I meant the reverse too. You’d think that Mike would have been on guard/more cautious around Elliot & wouldn’t fall into his trap that easily. And now it’s all gone wrong. Damn it! I’d say this is the cue for the Romanator to unleash his wrath. Come on Roman, channel that inner all action, muscle-flexing Rambo within you. You know the one… () If ever there was a time that El would like to witness ‘Hero Husband’ in all his glory… it’d be now. And El what are you waiting for? Start calling, we need the “Spookiest sh*t I ever saw” connection to be happening now. The contractions have started, the danger is rife, they should be sensing each other. And trust you, oh amazing writer thats links in continuity wherever possible, to have kidnapping #2 take place at that same warehouse. El's emotions weren't on the top of your list at that time. On second thoughts I'm sure they were, you just get pleasure from torturing her & us. Lol. Now update, update, update! Don't just leave us hanging, like Elliot did with Roman on that cliff. I don't have Roman's strength... I need my fix (double) now.

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Now that Prison Doctor is brilliant isn't she just?! A stroke of genius her idea of making Geoff & Aden cellies, I mean naive little Geoff needed protecting from the big bad inmates of the prison, and who better to look out for him then Aden. All for the poor boy's safety, ofcourse. That whole update featuring Gaden was just awesome. Loved it & the usual non-corruptive shower scenes. Lol! Only one objection, what the hell are you doing with my boys Wentworth & Roman, huh? No, no, no.... there's no room for any thing more there. I'm happy to sacrifice Aden for Geoffrey, but they're not going to turn aswell. I think it's about time the Prison Doctor had her dance lesson with Roman. And if Roman's after a massage, it's the Prison Doctor's he needs to see. Also Wentworth hasn't paid the good Doctor a visit yet, I think that needs to be corrected, and make sure he doesn't forget that origami flower he's made for her. Geez... you miss a couple of updates & the whole story takes a turn for the worse. Just can't seem to get the writers these days. Kidding Tele, totally hilarious fic, loved the condom machine in the elevator & the return of voiceover man. Enjoying reading this, more soon please.

Ditto. Here's me all excited at the fact that I have tons of chapters to catch up on, only for it to end with that. Rola can't break up again. Not fair. I know you're just misleading me at the end there, it's all going to be sorted by the next chapter, right? Right?!! ^Well that was what I was about to comment yesterday but I was too sad to actually do it. And what do I find today... exactly what I had hoped for. Yay! Tele did good and Anaya's all smiles. I really need to stop typing about myself in the third person . Well I've missed so many updates... a quick comment on some of the highlights for me : -The Geoff/Nic labour scene. 'Twas funny. Lol! I could totally imagine it, what I can't imagine is Nic staying true to her celibacy threats. Hehehe. Baby Mira, the name, it's meaning to them, so cute. And them offering to take in El's baby was so touching. Ofcourse never an option though. - Elliot/Mike scene, glad there was follow up, as prior to that, it all felt way too obvious. - SB cops staying true to form & unable to solve any mysteries. Glad to know Roman/Jacko & crew did their homework & the bigamy issue was sorted. Liked Jacko being curious about CaR being together at one stage, at the station, it was funny. Love Jacko... but I want my Miles fix. Some scenes soonish maybe? - The night interaction after Meggy was sick was too cute. Loved the kids wanting to hear their stories & the way El recalled them. Awww the kids are sweeties. - Danni/El heart to heart was lovely. And I too want them to find Gabriel. Anytime soon? Oh and Danni's working her way through the family with her crushes. Lol! - Loved sneaky Roman pushing all the right buttons to get El all riled up. Even if she'd cottoned on to his intentions in the end, it worked. They know each other too well. Anyway happy to see Superwoman had returned & enjoyed her confronting Elliot. Loved, loved, loved the Rola cuteness that followed. - Jacko/Pete/James... how could they? Not only do they get him blind drunk & shove him in the direction of a cheap Ella imitation, but then they go and tell him about it. Well atleast they had the balls to speak up eventually, not sure if Jacko's left with any now. Go Ella. My poor baby Roman. Nice to see El comforting him though. - The cemetry scene was so moving. Leaving the rings behind with Francesca was a nice touch & happy that they were able to get some closure from it. - The family all plotting together to get Niff sorted was lovely. And I enjoyed El getting all racy with Roman, almost as much as he did. What?! It's been too long. - Roman's nonchalance when dealing with Elliot was perfect, especially considering Elliot really thrives on getting a reaction from Roman. - The bugging device scenes were awesome. First the pretence at tension between Mike/Roman & then the whole loud music, dancing, TV & noisiness to get at Elliot. It was wonderful to see them all relax & have fun after so long. Just Rola & the kids. Perfect family. - Lastly them paying Elliot a visit & messing with his head was brilliant. Somehow, like El, I don't think it's enough to get him off their backs. But I appreciated Roman trying & I have faith in Roman's words that he'll take care of them. Okay so that's my quick comment, that sort of changed in to a long rant along the way, done. Now seeing as I was so kind, are we in for a double update from you tonight? *sends Tele some yummy Roman shaped cookies & smiles angelically*

So I was like double update... Yay! Only to realise you like to give with one hand, and take back with the other. But I'll forgive you because of the gorgeousness of Ch. 13 alone. At last there communication between Roman & El. Without any games, without any holding back, without any sex/love making diversions (although I do love those ), and lastly without one of them walking out (running away). Woop. Woop! It was mature, they were fully honest with each other & they confronted each & every issue hurting them. It was sweet & emotional & cute & real & just perfect. Well written, Tele. And well bubbles have to burst sometime so I guess I should have expected Elliot to resurface again soon. Look forward to see where it all goes. I knew Charlie had a reason (Elliot) to go in there like that and arrest El in such a harsh manner in front of her children. Liked their exchange at the end though, it was funny. So can we look forward to double updates all the time from now on?

The Roman/Aden/Geoff interaction was funny in this chapter. And the quick kisses between Gaden were adorable. Oh & it didn't take long for Geoffrey to fall under Roman's spell... not that it's hard. More soon please & maybe the next update will include Roman dealing with Irene. I'd like to see that.

Phew! Finally caught up. Ch. 9 had a real familiarity to it. What with Roman/Jacko & crew all plotting away to get the latest bad guy, Ella being out of the loop but inevitably finding out, getting upset, slamming doors (or not in this case ) and then Roman having to make up by being all cute. Good times. Even though the plan to trap Elliot felt a little too obvious & with any other bad guy I'd find it hard to believe that they would find the Roman/Mike act so believable. Yet Elliot, with his tunnel vision when it comes to seeking revenge on Roman, makes it easy to believe that he would fall in to the trap & that he'd only see what he wants to see. Not sure if any of that made sense, but you're getting it anyway. Lol! Also Roman's declaration/non-confession of love for Ella to Mike/Jacko was so gorgeous. And Sammy is such a sweetie. N'awwww! Loved the humour that was dotted about in that chapter too, you write it well. Unlike Ella, I loved that last part of Ch 10. Yeah he is the strong guy, always there, supportive & protective, Hardcore, hero husband. And he may not always express it, but he does have feelings/emotions of his own too, and it's about time someone reached out to him. So well done Rachel, even though it meant El getting the wrong idea. Loved the Rola fluff early on in that chapter. And Roman with more muscles... Anaya wants one. I'm glad you had Ella bring up the Rachel issue straightaway & didn't drag it out. I liked the chat they had about her jealousy/insecurities and again loved the fluff that followed. Humourous parts were enjoyable to read too like the Jacko/chapel story & the Grandpa references. The family scene with the kids was too cute. Lastly Ch. 12 was my absoloute favourite. Not because I'm a sadistic type that likes watching Rola fighting, then El in pain and the kids so upset. Just that the making up & sweet interaction between them all was perfect in amongst all the drama. The kids were so great & cute when supporting each other & Ella when she was in pain. And well this part: Aww... soul mates.

Caught, maybe? Yes maybe. So I predicted correctly, although Annie already saw them (which is a shame as I was hoping for another PDA ). Speaking of Annie, why oh why did she have to appear in this? And that too in a recreation of the very reason I despised her. Damn that GoodLittleBibleGirl for getting trashed on alcohol all by herself and then to be helped by Aden even though he didn't have to, only for him to have all sorts of accusations thrown at him for no reason whatsoever. He shouldn't have bothered, he should have just walked straight past her. She better start spilling the truth soon or I really won't be happy. Otherwise I'm thinking Geoffrey's going to have to step up & talk secrets. And it seems she has a crush on Aden, hands off he's Geoff's, although I've always wondered how Annie/Aden would turn out (but not in this fic). Thank god for Roman, my baby, and his amazing non-judgemental, supportive nature. That guy rocks & I'm glad Aden has him in his life. Not only did you write Annie in to this, but then also Belle (who I just love as an individual character but I don't want her as a third wheel in Gaden) & then there's Nic still to come. What are you trying to do to me? I want all those cute Gaden moments from the early chapters again.

I loved how El wanted Roman near her at the hospital when she felt scared. It was as though she knew she'd be safe with him even though she hadn't regained her memory. And I loved Roman being gentle & protective, it all felt so sweet & easy. The closeness felt comfortable yet at the same time there was that butterflies feeling & nervousness that you'd normally get from a relationship in it's inception. A tiny part of me had wished she'd never get her memory back so things could stay like this... almost uncomplicated. But then in the next chapter when most of her memory returns after the hypnosis, I was just ecstatic for two reason alone, that gorgeous reunion scene with the kids & that last exchange with Roman. Cute. I hate Elliot even more (if that's possible) after finding out what his intentions were for El as a result of the baby's positioning. Thankfully they found her before she gave birth & now they know I hope everything works out just right. Although I'm sure Elliot's got something else up his sleeve... Now how about an update to make up for being so nasty to me (disguised as El) when I was sad & only seeking comfort the last time I was here.

This thing that they've got going on is really playing havoc with both their emotions. Now it's Geoff's turn it seems. I liked that first part of this chapter with Geoff & the run/swim. It helped to understand where Geoff's head's at. He's still not sure about things but it seems the swim helped him release some of his pent up emotion. Which I'm happy about as it led to a cute holding hands moment and that too in public. And that next part at Irene's was just . All these PDA's and not being able to keep their hands off each other has me thinking they're going to be caught by someone soon, maybe? And I'm happy that Geoff's relaxing & Aden's traits and other parts ( ) are rubbing off on him. That's his sense of humour & cheeky side, not the agressive, angry young man side ofcourse.