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Its great so far hope theres more update soon

Hope she does get Tashas help to get out of the house to see Jack because she doesn`t belong with that Alec he`s trying to keep her prisoner and not let have any friends or if he does only the friends he chooses her she wants to be free see places shes never seen before and make new friends thats why she likes Jack so much so I think should leave that creep Alec and be the guy she wants so she can live the life she wants aswell update soon

That was great I loved it and nicely carried on from the other 1

Yeah I think that would be great if a follow up was done of Lily in the future missing her parents cause this 1s been great so if you do a follow up I can`t wait to read it

Its been great so far can`t wait for your next chapter update soon

Great so far but when Jack was on about the sunrise to Lily he could not have only said that when she hears that he will be there but her real mum aswell cause shes lost 2 of her parents to cancer so this might give her sum comfort.Hope your gonna continue with this cause its great update soon

I can`t believe Ash why could he just them alone like Martha asked him to and to let her tell Jack.Hope what Ash has done doesn`t ruin their chance of being together cause they are so great together just hope what Ash has done doesn`t spoil it now update soon

Hope they get together soon and she gets rid of that guy whose her fiance cause he treats her as a prisoner where as when shes with Jack she can be free and do what she wants so please let them get together and dump that alec who treats her so babdly update soon

Can`t wait for the next chapter it sounds great update soon

Ash is gonna feel so great now that hes told Jack what happened between him & Martha ages now it will probably split J&M up because of what hes done update soon

Hope they get back together then that aaron that shes with can go take a hike shes never really loved him deep down shes always loved Jack & she always will she even said so update soon