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grt story but abit sad cant believe all them people making marthas/jacks life hell especially jacks ex girlfriend she knows that their friend is dying so y is she doing this

fab story cant wait 4 more

brilliant chapter cant wait 4 more update soon

hopefully they get bk 2gether its obivious they still luv each other and it wud be best 4 their daughter 2 have her parents 2gether instead of apart

hope yr going update really soon cause this story is really gud

this story is really grt hope u continue soon

brilliant story so far cant wait 4 u 2 continue wiv this story its grt

hope u keep going wiv this story cause its grt but plz dont make anything bad happen if u continue

really like this story hope you write the next chapter soon

i dont mind reading a chapter that hasnt been proof read

hope u update soon cause this story sounds really gud

cant wait 2 c wot happens nxt

hope she does make it bk 2 the hotel cause i think he has sumthing very special in store for her Update Soon

yes plz update soon even if it is the ending

brilliant story update soon cause its grt

brill story cant wait 2 read more update soon

hopefully she will get the kiss she hopes 4 and sum answers update soon

brilliant hope she does stay they are so meant 2 be 2gether update soon

keep updating its brilliant

brill so far update soon plz

Brilliant chapter update soon plz

update soon plz this is grt

update soon its grt