JosieTash

Oh !!! I had forgotten about that [silly me ]

Trust egotistical maniacs like Chris and Matt to name their bubs after the actors who play them !!!! That fic was a crazy [in a good way] ride ...... .......must admit that when I saw the final word of the fic was Snow [after scrolling back through ppl's comments about said final chapter] that I thought there was going to be a Game Of Thrones [John Snow] reference ......... well, this fic has had dinosaurs, witches, the Astoni cave people relo's etc, so why not GOT !!!

I do hope that someone somehow snaps Tori out of this witchy madness ....... I LOOOOOOOOOVE her too much for her to be acting this [the whole Mason is, then isn't, a cripple] way !!!!!

BTTB ....... putting your own/this fic's spin on this website's initials. Will read your latest chapter morrow.

LOVED that end line form Hunter to VJ bout his dad .........nad the salem witch trials .....AND esp. the brilliant acronym use !!!!!!!

Amidst all the usual [in a good way, of course] craziness, I REALLY like the Back To The Future reference and how the Pterodactyl was more than a match for the dragons !!!! Only a few more chapters to go

LOVE the re-appearance of the Astoni’s prehistoric ancestors !!!! REALLY DIDN’T love that Irene killed my Billie !!!!! EVRY WITCH in this fic deserves to DIE now !!!! LIKED the irony of having witches etc and yet the clouds are normal [not all fluffy/pillowy !!!!!!]

And this proves I have NO attention span .... cos I had forgotten [obviously] that she's already been in this fic !!!!

In terms SPECIFICALLY of the contents of this fic [and probably some of your other stories], to quote James Earl Jones’ character in “Field Of Dreams” ………………… “You're seeing a whole team of psychiatrists, aren't you?” LOOVE the out there-ness of this …….. but may I ask, is Scarlett Sparrows, in any way, a version of H&A Scarlett ????

With your intro to that chapter, I was expecting something David Lynch-esque [Twin Peaks, Mulholland Drive, Blue Velvet] ….which it wasn’t quite. I will say you REALLY tried though. I love the bit where Matt was watching the endangered species doco with the panda … that would be like if he had a human child, and they watched “Children Of Men” or “The Handmaid’s Tale” together. Oh, and BIG thanks for the genetics lesson. Now we know why Coco has a thing for mobile phones …. Her muchly, muchly distant ancestor had same. See, genetics at work !!!!

I'll add to the 4th wall chorus ..... they're always great. the gingerbread withc thing was coooool too ....... but right now, I want ALL the witches in this fic to DIE !!!!!!! ...... they can't kidnap Luc [and hurt Billie in the process, of course !!!!!!] Oh, and as much as I don't like Chris, falling into chocolate is a far more palatable option than others !!!!!!

I sooooo know what you mean. Grammar is never fun ....and yeah, where to put commas, or how to structure a sentence so it makes the most sense ..... soooo much "fun" ... Like, I know it took me quite a while to put the below just the way I wanted it ....... Oh, and after all the “fun” that’s been going on in Canberra of late, I had to LOVE it when, after Richie Stanaway added to the list of Kiwi winners of V8 races this year [think Fabian Coulthard, Shane Van Gizbergen and Scotty McLachlan], someone online made the comment ….. Surely it's time we checked the Constitution or at least reviewed the citizenship rules for participants in Australian Championships.

I agree with Kellicopter. Its like, cos you've always written your fics the was you have, we know what we're getting in for/can adjust to compensate ...like when a sentence doesn't actually include a word that it should but your mind puts it in there cos it knows it should be there.

Brody and his jenga’d tomatoes were funny, and I must admit, I missed the whole Bart thing. Can’t help but love the panda bit, and Nate speaking a bit like a fog [the inclusion of the ribit] and “I have heard that licking a toad can make you high, how about I do that instead?” Tori asks, was coooooool too Sooooooo funny and cooooooooooooooool

In amongst ALL this chaos [including references to Dr Who], I LOVED that Tori was soooooooooo Tori ,........ You what Irene, I’m a doctor and it wouldn’t be at all wise to be going around kissing toads very unhygienic in my professional opinion.” LOOVE all this madness [even though I think its doing my head in\!!!!

REALY enjoyed the most recent 2 chapter ………. especially ……. Alf and witchy Irene’s drunk kiss was funny ….and before she was destroyed by a certain dragon, I was thinking that Kat musta got her hyper patrol car form the Italians …. They have some Lambo’s amongst their police vehicles!!!! AND I don’t think you’d actually forgotten those plot points etc, you were merely keeping us in suspense!!!! The time travel stuff was cooooool, as was ……… Re something about being Wally’s son, “Well it’s not me or Billie that’s for sure. Olivia hints towards Hunter. ……. And I also liked .,…… “Yes well make you stay the warrior of baby nappies ok VJ my darling”

Irene going all game of thrones, especially with Mick as her dragon was weird and funny. Billie, the moustache and the posters thing was just …….unique !!!!! Looking fwd to more

REALLY like the mention of [Jai and] Annie …..as I really like Annie …and LOOOOOOVE Charlotte Best !!!! What Geoff said after Alf at the funeral was sooooooooooo right ….ALL the Baysiders being his fam …… and whilst I’m not Josh’s biggest fan, was soooooo ALF to lead the way re a person’s redemption with the town, re the surf club thing [thoughts of Josh’s infamous real H&A love mural] !!! MANYU thanks for sharing this pretty BRILLAINT fic with us, Red !!!!!

Liked the way that Melody and Geoff getting together after soooo long dovetailed nicely into Evie and Matt doing same thing. REALLY liked this ….. “It was a bit of a rough ride,” Melody agreed,“But I guess if something’s meant to be…” Ruby looked at her girlfriend with a slight smile.“No matter how unlikely it might seem.” “Like Bible Boy producing two kids,”Aden added, having come up behind them. Melody shot him a log-suffering look.“It’s nice to see you haven’t changed, Aden.” “Just as lovable as ever.” I thought you would [somehow] hit the re-set button ……I’ve watched too much Star Trek ….. about Alf and somehow have him escape death [miracle cure etc] but having him be greeted by RABBIT on the others side was BEYOND INSPIRED !!!!! I’m guessing since all those ppl came back to the bay to see Alf,

Alf's wardbrobe to suit his moods etc is funny ...and probably actually true. Cooool about VJ commenting [wrongly] about alf's tackle

Why did I know that Melody would have to be in this somewhere !!! Cool that she is with Geoff, who I must admit, I missed for a few sentences is the priest. Loved Alf’s comments about last rites. REALLY sweet scene tween Alf and Kanga ……and when you listed ALL the “thousands” of people back in the bay for Alf’s …situation, all I was thinking was, at the end of this there’s going to be “and a partridge in pear tree” [but I’m like that with ALL long lists ….. of anything] !!!!

Irene using Chris' Batman cape [and him being worried bout her damaging etc it] was funny .......and yeah, cute feline innuendo !!!!!!~

REALLY like the realism of how Ruby & Nic took things slow to eventually get together ……and loved when Xave asked Rubes if there’s something he should know about Nicole, re Charles REALLY like this ….. “Don’t make me say it again.You’re the only reason I’ve got back on my feet.When I bumped into you eight weeks ago, I was pretty much cursing that I had to deal with people but…you helped.” LOVED this …… sooooo Alf ……. Alf opened his eyes and found Billie and Mink standing there.“It’s official,”he announced,“If you two are both here, then I really have gone to hell.” Could this REALLY be the end of Alf ???????

O M G !!! This is BEYOND weird !!!! Must admit I thought I read that it was Matt and Chris who had put the cocktail sausage in the waitresses hair, like they were marking her at the person who would give birth to their child, but then I re-read and realised it was irene would is the sausage thing