JosieTash

MUCHLY cooooooooooool chapter, particularly the scenes that included .... Indi's "Again, that's what boys do", Charlie's "I'd love to have another one, but I don't think I'll get the chance again" and MOST especially "Its mum I feel sorry for. She's had this type of reaction from her boyfriends. I've never had it. What Indi said was not even close to what Matt, Robert and Bill said to her. And yet I'm like this" Ruby threw her hands to, show her upset "Mum has always had it hard. Everyone was ok with mum having a daughter, until they found out her age. Everyone would assume she looked younger than she was"

Well, Ruby's happy, so I'm happy ...... and i've got the benefit of reading this after "Spare Pair". Actually, now in my mind the two are linked ..... its like, before Ruby kisses Nic in your latest, she has a flashback to the last scene of this one [with the dreaming].

I read this from cover to cover last night, after your comment bout it in “Spare Pair”. REALLY enjoyed it !!!! Some GREAT moments …...... The Nic/Rubes kisses AND Ruby/Annie [and Annie's comment bout how not having to worry bout the boy shaving]; Ruby’s commenting a NUMBER of times to Charlie about being a temporary lesbian; The irony that Ruby was the one disadvantaged[?] by someone else not thinking before they acted for a change; Jai's talk to Annie bout how people can be different but still be friends .... and how it GLADLY reminded me of when he talked to Ruby when Charlie "hooked up" with Joey; and ESPECIALLY … The BEAUTIFUL last scene …. Rubes dreaming of Nicole !!!

This is HEAVENLY !!!!!!!! ..... most likely my fave fan fic EVER !!! I LOVE Rubes .... and Nicole's soooooooo her bestie in the show, so its AWESOME that they are soulmates / lovers in this. The use of both their current sitches was wonderful !!!!!

Sooooooo many COOOL moments !!!!! I especially LOVE the scenes that included ..... "Cool" Georige replied, knocking Charlie back slightly as she had never heard the word 'cool' spoken before. Whore? yes, Slut? yes, Cool? never. AND "You're not going to give up on this are you?" Dex shook his head and smiled happily when he saw Ruby move herself, readying herself to tell Dex what happened "If I told you that someone I know is my age, so sixteen, and has a mum who is thirty. What would you say?" Dex blinked a few times as his mouth opened slowly

REALLY LOVE this .......… ..... especially since I really couldn't have a ship twen these two in “Ruin” Ruby’s comments about having sex with a preggy girl AND the debauchery chat tween Nicole & Miles are ESPECIALLY fantastic!!!!!

Coooooooool update …. I especially likes the bits that included ……. "I want it back” Charlie sobbed as she fell into Ruby “I just want it back” AND ”But the girls gym change is where I draw the line” Along with this exachange …… “Ruby Buckton” Charlie said sternly. “Something is bugging you. What is it?” “Charlotte Buckton” Ruby replied in the same tone “Nothing is bugging me”

There’s SOOOOO much to love in this chapter …… Ruby’s “but I’m better for you than a cookie”; Marilyn being glad her b/f is a Dr; Gina’s “you left your daughter downstairs by herself”; Charlie’s line bout a 6am cuddle; Nicole being totally supportive of Ruby ……. and MOST ESPECIALLY .…….. The truth was, Charlie had always seen that Ruby was meant to be there, to help her through what happened when she was fourteen.

Really liked Jack in the chapter – which is saying sometihng as I didn't really like him in the show, and ADORED the Chuby chat that included …. “Well, yea. What was one of the last things you said to me before we left the city?” Ruby asked as she looked to Charlie. Charlie thought for a moment, she closed her eyes and smiled when she realised Ruby had won that little bet. Ruby had said Charlie would find herself been happier as soon as the move was made; and Charlie been Charlie, didn’t believe that.

REALLY loved the Chuby chat that included “Are you comparing me to a baby’s belch?” Charlie asked, trying not to laugh Also, LOVED that JnM had a fight because of Martha’s attitude towards Charlie … reminds me why I HATED Martha when she was on the show. Its' looking more & more like Matt called Charlie a slut … or worse [maybe even tried to force himself on her!!!!] Looking forward to the next chapter !!!!!!!

I LOVE how worried Charlie is about reaction of the people of the Bay AND how supportive Rubes is of her mum. It’s like, in fics like this one, they’re soooooo the BEST tv mother/daughter combo since Lorelei & Rory in “Gilmore Girls”

Looking forward to more of this, especially scenes like the one that included this line ..... “So you do listen to me when I bring work home with me” Charlie smiled as she looked to Ruby

Cooooool fic !!! In Chapter 5 [will scope out Ch 6 tonight], I especially loved ….. “We’re parked near the bush. Just hide” Charlie smiled “Mum!” Ruby gasped “Isn’t that illegal?” “Only if an officer catches you” Charlie smiled as she began to remove her skirt and “Oh god, sorry” Charlie said as soon as she felt the contact of another person “Not god. Angelo. And it was my fault” Angelo smiled as he slid backward

Enjoying this, especailly the bit to do with the photo ..... “But, after that you said Orry Ichelle” Charlie smiled as she remembered Ruby speaking “Michelle couldn’t be mad with you anymore, so she took you inside and cleaned you up”

Enjoying this fic !!!!!!! I REALLY liked the flashback of that wonderful Xmas Ruby had !!! ...... especially the line Ruby’s smile never lied.

Loving this ....... Nicole with a semi-automatic sooooo makes me think of Fi Maxwell from the Tommorow series [which is high praise as i LOVE Fi !!!!]

This fic is coooooooooooooooool !!! I especialy like the scenes that included ..... “And who is there for mum? Granddad is in a home, Morag spends most of her time there with him, Aunty Michelle lives in Perth. There is no one there for mum” Ruby cried “I have to be there for her, she needs me” and “I’m glad I never told them” Ruby said as she shook her head “Hannah said she’d try to help, even though I wouldn’t tell her the truth. Can you imagine how she’d be if I told her? She blabbed about Tanya been pregnant” Ruby said to Charlie as she wiped her face “I hate them. I hate Toby and I hate Stacey” Ruby said with anger in her voice “I never want to see them again”

This is cooooooooooooooooooooooooool !!!! it's a bit like a GREAT marriage of H&A and Buffy !!!! Dex being sooo Dex, Adrian's a vamp and here's hoping Rubes is alright.

Red Ranger 1, that was te best way i could think of .... keeping the 4some seperate for quite a while [or it would have seemed to flippant]. Oh, and the next fic, i'm thinking of [if it comes together] will include the mermaids & elements of “h2o”, but it’s much more down to Earth/real world story ….. that’s the plan anyway. ~JarlieFanEver~, glad you liked my latest fic. Yours is cooooooooool too. belgshep, re the planet being UBER Mother Nature … and some of the other sci-fi/fantasy things in there, I’ll admit to having no idea if there’s any real world sciency cred to them … but, then again, I like Star Trek and yet I have no real notion to fully scope out the science of how, like, the transporters or warp engines actually work. I’ll also admit to “perhaps” not doing as much research of diabetes as I could have ….but it was a great way to involve Ruby without having her just “tagging along” with the others. HUGE THANKS to all for the GREAT comments from EVERYONE throughout my latest slightly different take on life involving the people from Summer Bay !!!

I liked her in the 1st ep that she was in, then ADORED her in the 2nd .... when I realised its Phoebe under all that emo make up etc. LOVE Phobe, and its great that whilst Dex is still quirky, they've toned him down a bit [so it doesn't look/sound like he's in his own little sitcom anymore]

Red Ranger 1, Joey’s mermaid quest will mostly be part of the kinda sequel to this story …. if there’s a sequel. It’s all bout coming up with idea. Also, re the final chapter of this fic, it was a late decision, but a GREAT one I think to incl pics of their wedding dresses Sue, the Ronnie to the Bay bit inspired by that ep off “Sea Princesses” and that subsequent chat with Kim, Miss Chatham etc flowed from there. I LOVED that Emma was the one who went all “Yoda” with Joey [with the clues] AND ......... I REALLY liked that I could tie in that bit [Colleen] of YKK to this story, as it worked soooo nicely. HUGE THANKS to all for the GREAT comments throughout my latest [like hopefully always] slightly different take on life in Summer Bay!!!!! ------------------------

Many thanks !!!!

Whilst referencing it for my latest fic, I discovered that one of my stories [The Glowing City] is in The Vault, but its a finished story. Here is link ...... http://www.backtothebay.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=25500

I like her. Sure, 1st impressions wise, she reminds me a lot of Maddie, Nic & Ruby when they 1st arrived. Will be interesting where they go with Indi.

I'm soooooooooooooooo glad you enjoyed it, Red Ranger 1. it was SUCH a fun story to write !!!!!