JosieTash

Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo very glad that you were guessing till the end!!! It’s intriguing that I’ve had Cassie, Alex & now Colleen in last 2 fics as the waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay bad ppl [pattern there I think]. That subconscious thought I loved coming up with, esp. after Belle's "accent" line. Yeah, I thought epilogue was appropriate - thought about initially having results of Rachel’s hypno session in there, but thought it best to incl it in scene that with the resolution to THAT phone call. Re Kit’s coma, if I go into my slightly different H&A ‘verse again, she may wake up – we’ll see. Oh, and have left Helena’s real name etc out – as I might “go there” in future too. It was TOTALLY great writing those Maddie/Belle final scenes, and although I could have had Belle being especially interested in certain other enlarged parts of Maddie’s preggy body, I liked the baby belly idea better. It’s been sooooooooooooooooo much fun both hand writing, then typing this – esp. with all the cooooooooooooooooooooooooooool responses from ppl

I will say that I DID change Maddie’s response [start of YKK16] a few times. it went from [initially in draft] only having the bit where she thinks she is talking to an alien, to the later additions of both the Heroes bit, and then, I thought, lets add in a link to TGC. It was interesting establishing some lore about what the Earnhardt’s [also alien] enemies could, and couldn’t, detect – like a mind read by Helena is cool [not detectable], but to plant a thought IN someone’s mind, that WOULD have, like, an energy signature that the forces loyal to the evil regime could lock onto, as its TOTALLY not of Earth. Re the toy car, as well as a kinda Transformers ref, it does make sense – like what if a human found this completely foreign looking [in its orig alien form] device. Thoughts of Sam, in the TF movie, telling Michaela what he thinks of Bumblebee ..... “It's a robot. You know, like a super advanced robot. It's probably Japanese. Yeah, it's definitely Japanese.” Can’t tell you anything more about Rachel just yet .................. REALLY give you something to ponder!!!

i waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay LOVED your fic ...... kinda sad that Maddie died, but at least in was in her Romeo's also dying arms.

I muchly continue to LOVE this fic – especially Drew calling Cassie “Turner”, EVRYTHING to do with Maddie [pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease "wake up" Maddie and choose Lucas] and Naomi being preggers with Luc’s child.

i soooooooooooo LOVE this - rading Ch 22 tonight [just sent to print]

REALLY REALLY liking this !!!! I especially LOVED that 2nd text form Tia - in light of how ugly Maddie thought she was after being scarred by the explosion at Jack & Martha’s reception!!!

have read to the end of ch 18 - will read 19 tonight ... sooooooooooo hope that Mads & Luc acn get together [esp. after Ric not being there be her bedside] ... and i LOVE this .... "My god she is hot, I've never been with a girl before! Time to try something new! Tia thought to herself as she walked off down to the beach for a swim"

I ADORED that its colleen of all ppl that is the person whose heart Maddie has – especially ironic given colleen’s feeling towards maddie in my current fic Totally LOVING this fic !!!!

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay cooooooooooooool updates GREAT that they found a new heart just in time nick of time. I’m MUCHLY hoping that Dom is different to the way he is on screen [after all, its not like Belle & Annie esp. are – in fic - the way that behave etc on screen]

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay loving this. muchly hoping that sopmehow, someway mads survives. REALLY wondering who is father of annie's bub !!!!

usaual story, have read to the end of ch 12 ...... the latest chapters i will enojy tonight. LOVED Belle & Annie's post "bedroom" chat [in ch 12]

This is sooooooooooooooooo cooooooool Have read to the end of Chapter 11 [will read Ch 12 tonight] I especially LOVE all this drama about Matilda’s heart condition, and that she could hear everything when in coma, AND this whole idea of her having of identical twin/clone. Also, the whole bit about [assume] Drew being the father of not only Annie’s baby AND the child that Belle aborted