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Limitless Love (by LauraPhilly!!) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to adelle's topic in Comments
You have made a great start and I can't wait to read more. Poor Belle. Aden is being so sweet. Update soon. -
A Summer Romance (by matticus01) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to LAURZY!'s topic in Comments
This is amazing! It is so well written. Keep up the great work! I am glad you had her open up to Aden I found that very realistic. I hope that Belle eventually gets the help that she needs. Please update soon. -
Proud and Prejudiced (by Miranda) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to LAURZY!'s topic in Comments
Miranda, this is great! I just love the whole idea of it. Great writting and keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more. -
Am I Perfect Yet? (by matticus01) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to Jen's topic in Comments
Wow, that was amazing! Very well written, I really don't know what else to say. But what I will say is that you should be really proud of yourself for being able to write about something so personal. Great work, Bec. -
Aww, so cute. I don't blame Aden for getting frustrated that everyone kept intruding. Loved it!
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Great one shot! Loved it. Keep up the good work.
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I finally finished reading this fic, and it was great! The ending was perfect. I can't wait to go and read your other fics.
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That episode was so sad. Yes I agree the ending was slightly awkward, but I think it was well handled.
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Just When... (by Clair 247) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to monkeysmoke's topic in Comments
Wow, that was amazing! I liked the fact that even though there was little dialogue, you still managed to convey their emotions perfectly. The ending was so perfect. I really hope you write more fics in the future. -
In Need Of Comfort (by outandaboutwithlove) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to cutiepie379's topic in Comments
You killed Irene, that was so sad. But at least Belle had Aden to help her through the pain. I loved it, very well written. -
That was great, I really liked it. The way you wrote about their bond it was so sweet.
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Birth In A Shoe Shop (by Frogg) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to maccaz's topic in Comments
That was hilarious, I loved it! Only Nicole could give birth in a shoe shop and be worrying about blood on her new Gucci jeans. You wrote Nicole perfectly. -
Confession (by wrongturntaken) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to LAURZY!'s topic in Comments
That was amazing! Very well written, you wrote Aden perfectly. I liked how it came out and how he tried to avoid it. -
Just When... (by Clair 247) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to monkeysmoke's topic in Comments
Great chapters, yet again. I liked that Aden knew that something was wrong, that was sweet. I hope the baby's ok. Please update soon. -
Just When... (by Clair 247) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to monkeysmoke's topic in Comments
That was great! So cute, loved it. -
Happy Birthday To You....
homeandawayforever23 replied to loveangelmusicbaby's topic in Character/Actor Discussion
Happy 21st Birthday Jess! Hope you have a great day. -
^ Yes, please. If it's not to much troble. Thanks Julie.
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Just When... (by Clair 247) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to monkeysmoke's topic in Comments
I just read the whole thing. Loved it! So glad Aden finally knows. I really like how you communicated the emotions and feelings so well and with very little dialogue. Update soon. -
^ I also hope it's not true, but somehow I don't like my chances. There aren't many ways that they could explain such a long disappearance without any contact.
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Wow, that was really well written. Your descriptions were great. Good Work!
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And I'm Aching (by honeychild) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to Deborah's topic in Comments
That was really good. I liked the idea of the letter. You captured Aden's emotions perfectly. -
I just read the whole thing. That was great! I liked Irene giving Belle away. I think that you should do a sequel or prequel.
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I just read the whole thing and it was awesome. I loved how you had the flashbacks to the past, actually i loved the whole thing. I'm glad you killed Kelli and that nobody got hurt. I found Abby and Geoff funny and the Jazz and Sam friendship was so cute. Your character descriptions were great. The ending was perfect. Loved it!
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The Return Of The Conquering Hero (by rfran) - comments
homeandawayforever23 replied to xknomex's topic in Comments
I really liked it. I think it was great how Nicole worked it out. -
Happy Birthday To You....
homeandawayforever23 replied to loveangelmusicbaby's topic in Character/Actor Discussion
Happy birthday Linc.