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homeandawayforever23

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  1. You have made a great start and I can't wait to read more. Poor Belle. Aden is being so sweet. Update soon.
  2. This is amazing! It is so well written. Keep up the great work! I am glad you had her open up to Aden I found that very realistic. I hope that Belle eventually gets the help that she needs. Please update soon.
  3. Miranda, this is great! I just love the whole idea of it. Great writting and keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.
  4. Wow, that was amazing! Very well written, I really don't know what else to say. But what I will say is that you should be really proud of yourself for being able to write about something so personal. Great work, Bec.
  5. Aww, so cute. I don't blame Aden for getting frustrated that everyone kept intruding. Loved it!
  6. Great one shot! Loved it. Keep up the good work.
  7. I finally finished reading this fic, and it was great! The ending was perfect. I can't wait to go and read your other fics.
  8. That episode was so sad. Yes I agree the ending was slightly awkward, but I think it was well handled.
  9. Wow, that was amazing! I liked the fact that even though there was little dialogue, you still managed to convey their emotions perfectly. The ending was so perfect. I really hope you write more fics in the future.
  10. You killed Irene, that was so sad. But at least Belle had Aden to help her through the pain. I loved it, very well written.
  11. That was great, I really liked it. The way you wrote about their bond it was so sweet.
  12. That was hilarious, I loved it! Only Nicole could give birth in a shoe shop and be worrying about blood on her new Gucci jeans. You wrote Nicole perfectly.
  13. That was amazing! Very well written, you wrote Aden perfectly. I liked how it came out and how he tried to avoid it.
  14. Great chapters, yet again. I liked that Aden knew that something was wrong, that was sweet. I hope the baby's ok. Please update soon.
  15. That was great! So cute, loved it.
  16. Happy 21st Birthday Jess! Hope you have a great day.
  17. ^ Yes, please. If it's not to much troble. Thanks Julie.
  18. I just read the whole thing. Loved it! So glad Aden finally knows. I really like how you communicated the emotions and feelings so well and with very little dialogue. Update soon.
  19. ^ I also hope it's not true, but somehow I don't like my chances. There aren't many ways that they could explain such a long disappearance without any contact.
  20. Wow, that was really well written. Your descriptions were great. Good Work!
  21. That was really good. I liked the idea of the letter. You captured Aden's emotions perfectly.
  22. I just read the whole thing. That was great! I liked Irene giving Belle away. I think that you should do a sequel or prequel.
  23. I just read the whole thing and it was awesome. I loved how you had the flashbacks to the past, actually i loved the whole thing. I'm glad you killed Kelli and that nobody got hurt. I found Abby and Geoff funny and the Jazz and Sam friendship was so cute. Your character descriptions were great. The ending was perfect. Loved it!
  24. I really liked it. I think it was great how Nicole worked it out.
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