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This would have been a perfect ending So if you decide to continue, don't make it worse! I feel like this was the end, but it's your call.

Well, let me see: First there were snow, then it was rain and then it was just cold. How are we supposed to be more outside when you freeze to death the moment you put your foot outside the door?!

Yay, she said yes No, they broke up Oh great! They are both being too stubborn for their own good Mienkie, don’t do as the writers. Don’t bring in Sam!!! More please!

Not liking the sound of that

He asked her to marry him??? That's so romantic Maybe a bit out of the blue... But still romantic Please, please, please (and so on) let her say yes!! More very soon please!!!

Awesome chapter! Jack and Martha are so adorable together I hope they last forever and ever Great ending to the story. But the bad thing is... it’s over! *cries* I feel like writing ’more please’, but there’s no point in that. Hoping that you’ll write more. You’re a great writer!

You can be glad that you did! I got so frustrated that I almost threw something at the screen...

Some spammers joined the forum and wrote a lot of nasty things everywhere. Oh my God, that was so annoying Looks like they’re back, this time pretending to be Dan F. Please, as if someone will buy that He/she has written it DanF and is just a normal member, not an administrator.

As Barbara said, excellent chapter! God, I hate the paparazzi! Why can’t they just back off?! Maybe I should stalk them, so they would know what it feels like. Maybe they’ll stop then. Yay for Jack and Martha Please don’t break them up! *begs* More please!

It’s rather simple: Go to ’my controls’, then to ’edit avatar settings’ (just let me know if you can’t find it). Then it comes up ’your current avatar’ and so on. Then there is ’choose an avatar from one of our galleries’, which is under your current avatar, were you simply find the last name of the character you want and click ’go’. A bunch of avatars comes up, you choose the one you want, you scroll down the page and click ’use selected avatar’‚ and there you go; you have an avatar (not sure if this made any sense, though ) If you want one that one of the members have made, you ask if you can use it, upload it to photobucket or imageshack and take the URL and put were it says: write the URL to an online avatar. (it’s under the pre-installed avatars, just keep going down the page). Okay, I’m terrible at explaining things

Great chapter! Oh, I want Jack He’s so sweet! Yay, Martha got her answers and her kiss! No, it can’t be over! *cries* Well, at least I have one chapter left *tries to put on a smile* There’s got to be a happy ending! Otherwise I’ll be very angry (just kidding ) Last chapter please!

Yay, an update! Great chapter! Or should I say, funny chapter? Jack can be really weird sometimes I’m glad he finally was allowed to stay for the night. Oh please, let Martha get her kiss. She deserves it! More please!

I love this! This is almost as it was in the show. And I loved it on the show. But I do have to admit that I loved yours more I loved the banner! More please!

Great chapter! Oh, Jacky is so sweet Except when he was comparing Martha to Santa. Then he was just funny He should have joined her in the bath. That would have been ! Poor Martha Jack should have kissed her on the lips More please!

Lovely chapter God, I hate paparazzi! If they ruin the chance of a re-union, someone is going to pay for it ( ) I laughed when Tasha started posing for the cameras More please!

I love the two Geoff and Annie ones! Ha, Geoff’s face expression in the first one is hilarious! The cropping on the first Mattie one is awesome! It looks really cool!

Great chapter! Poor Martha Kim can be a real jerk sometimes Jack is so sweet I like the way he’s taking care of her. The preview sounds interesting... More please!

Me not liking Ric at the moment I hope Belle tells Mattie the truth. I want Lucas and Mattie together! Me not liking Yasmin either. Me hoping Lucas will tell everyone what a b***h she really is. Cassie and Drew make an interesting couple I would actually like to see them together on the show. (Okay, I just realised how childish I've written ) More please!

Loved the last scene They shouldn't get together straight away. Wait, what am I saying? Of course they should! They need to fill each other in about what have changed, but then it will be as it used to be. I hope... For some reason, I don't see them together straight away... It's just too easy. And if there's one thing life isn't, then it's easy. People have a way of making things more complicated than they really are. Did that make any sense? More please!

Great chapter! Jackyboy is so sweet! Ha, Leon totally got what he deserved. I loved the ending! Let's hope things stay that way! More please!

I hope Jack isn’t going in to downwards spiral. The Holdens have enough to struggle with, they don’t need Jack in a downwards spiral. Maybe Martha can help him to recover... I just hope that seeing Martha again, isn’t going to make things worse. More please!

Poor Martha! Leon is a creep! Jack needs to stop dancing with Laurie and help Martha! Now I’m starting to dislike Laurie. “So, does the birthday boy fancy a dance?". Please! Go away, Laurie! You’re in the way! If Jack doesn’t see that Martha is in trouble and something happens to her, I’m holding you responsible! More please!

Well who would have guessed??!!!! She will be missed! Glad Mattie is ok Does he sees Luc's face first?? Great update!! Cant wait for more Just what I was thinking! Why Colleen? She is always so funny... Oh well. As long as Mattie is okay and that she gets together with Lucas More please!

No need to appologise, that was a great chapter! The chemistry is so still there. Why can’t they just give in? Martha did get him the perfect present. She really wants to show him that she trusts him, even if she had to be with Laura and blonde, brainless women. Tash was both funny and annoying. Funny because she thinks she’s the perfect party planner, annoying for ruining the moment for Jack and Martha. More please!

Corey?? Where did that idea come from?? Maybe I'm just writing this to make you think that Corey isn't involved, when he is. Or he is not involved, but I make you think he is. Okay, now I'm confusing myself... Just one question: I was thinking of ending the story soon, but that means that there will not be many exciting twists. So I was just wondering if I should add more twists(have some really good ones in my head ) or if I should just stick to the plan and add the last chapters. You decide.