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I loved this chapter! Oh, please don't let Mattie die! Hope it's not someone she cares about that gave her the heart... Dom??? Is he the father of Annie's baby??? Poor Annie! If I was her, I would have ran as far as I could the other way! More please!

That was a sad, but great chapter. Oh, I so want them to get back together! Poor Jackyboy, and poor Martha They belong together, but they are to afraid to trust each other completely and enjoy the other one as much as possible. Now it's just a mess and someone needs to fix it. Maybe the birthday will bring them back together! Martha can get Jack a really good present and show him that she trusts him! More please!

This is great! Oh, don’t let the heart be too late! No one deserves to die when they’re 18. They have a whole life ahead of them. Can’t wait to find out who the father of Annie’s baby is! I’m way too curious for my own good Update as soon as you can!

Poor Jack! I hope that he is able to forgive her. It just can’t end like that! Martha is just being silly. She needs to start trusting people! I hope she can prove to him that she is able to trust him a 100%. Bring in Tasha She seems to be the one person that can fix this(with a little help from Kim ) Great chapter!(apart from the fact that J&M is fighting ) More please!

Now you've done it big time, Martha! Jack wouldn't cheat on you! Poor Jack! Now he knows that Martha don't trust him a 100% I just have to comment the parents: Come on! They're not little kids anymore! Great chapter! More please!

Scream. I love horrormovies!

Jack is so sweet! Martha should just tell him and get it overwith! Ha ha! I loved Kim in this chapter, Tasha too! I loved this comment: Why does everyone keep asking me that More please!

I agree that they should have a baby girl. That would have been so sweet I loved the two last lines! Poor Martha! I feel sorry for her since even though Corey is gone(he is gone right? I don't want that creep back ) she still sees it when she closes her eyes. More please!

Awww, that was such a sweet chapter! I loved the part where Jack told Martha that deep down he knew they would end up together. I laughed when I read the part where they remembered Martha's 12th birthday More please!

Lucas was such a brat! He was really funny! I’m glad it wasn’t Lily causing trouble, just a brat named Lucas. Poor Jack and Martha! They never get to spend time together alone. More please!

That was so sad! A great oneshot, I almost felt sad because it was over... Poor Geoff, left behind by the person he loves so much I think he’s going to regret throwing the mug.

That was a really cute chapter! The JM baby is Ok. I loved it when they got the ultrasound and the baby was fine More please!

Great chapter! I hope that it’s not Lily coming back that makes thing difficult for them. Naughty Martha, sneaking around in the middle of the night to see her boyfriend. Lets hope she doesn’t get caught Update soon!

Oh thank God, Jack survived! Bulletproof vest? What a great twist! A bit confused here, was this the last chapter? I personally hope there is more.

Omg! Poor Jack! Please don’t let him die. He can’t die from his baby! More please!

Ha, great conversations with their parents. I think maybe Jack went just a bit over the line I hope Martha's plan is that they could get their own place. Great chapter! Update soon!

Loved the ending Please don't let Martha's parents get in the way. No baby Holden? Well, well I guess I have to live with that. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next! Update soon!

Way to go Tash! Stupid Jack Finally you got the woman you wanted and then you screw it up! Poor Martha When she lets Jack in, he betrays her trust I can't decide if I want the pill to work or not Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Finally they gave in! No protection? Shame on you Martha and Jack On the other hand, a baby Holden wouldn't be so bad More please!

They are friends again! Not what I was hoping for, but at least they can go from there Stupid Martha telling Jack she only wants a friendship when she knows she wants him Jack needs to tell Martha how he really feels. Great chapter! Update soon!

Awww, they love each other Too bad Martha is too confused and stubborn to realise it Great chapter! Update soon!

This is great! I love the way Jack wants to protect Martha Why did you end it like that? Now I have to read the next chapter! Maybe that was the point? Update soon!

Thanks for your comments Here is a sneak peek from the next chapter: “How is she doing? Is she going to be alright?” Alf asked. “Yes. We managed to stop the bleeding and there were no signs of a brain injury. But…” “But what? There might be something worse?” Ric asked.

Happy birthday Tim!