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Sorry for not replying to chapter 4. I'm just slow at getting around to do things. Can you find it in your heart to forgive me? Seriously, you write Belle so well (hm, that rhymes ). Everything that happens, is realistic (oh well, almost everything ) For now, I'm loving Belle and Geoff. They're so funny together The only bad thing I have to say about this chapter, is that it's a bit short in my opinion More please!

Happy Birthday Paul Hope you have an awesome day

I haven't eaten breakfast.... I'm hungry (Sorry, I'm really random today )

Yep, I'm sure, it's safe to come out I'm bored, there's nothing to do What are you doing?

Anyone here now? I promise that I won't bite...

Now, you told me to be honest, so honest I'll be I loved this part It's so something both of them could have said You write the characters believable, and it's not difficult to picture the sitations But... (yeah, there's always a but with me) In the end it got a bit too much dialog, no descriptions. I'd prefer if it was a bit descriptions to go along with the dialog, but then again, that's just me More please!

Well, at least you don't burn everything you touch

Been there, tried that I'm never going to survive on my own...

I should be doing homework, but I don't want to. I can't find my memory stick so I have to rewrite the entire chapter 21 of Love has arrived and I'm talking to Kat on MSN. What are you doing?

Yep, I am

How long time will it take for Paul to reply to my letter, approximately? Does anyone know?

Seriously, Kat, you're going to kill me if you keep coming with those kind of lines I'm loving where this story is headed and the bible boy is so sweet when he's jealous. The bookworm is acting weird, but he got what he deserved I have to agree with Bec, you're seriously a talented writer More please!

Yeah, it's bim bam bom without the behind

Oh no, I really wanted to read it. Now I have to wait even longer

Anyone here? I'm desperate to talk to someone

I can't change my settings EDIT: Nevermind, it's working again now

How come I can't change anything on my profile?

Kat - No, I could never be bored with you around Carmelle - Thank you

Anyone here who would like to talk to a now 16 year old girl?

Well, I think this is the first time I've ever read a fic from you I liked it, especially this part: It's so like typical that type of person that Belle is in this fic. Very fitting descriptions I think I'm going to like the whole Aden/Belle relationship. I love relationship that starts like friends And don't be so hard on yourself. This is quite good, better than anything I've ever written More please!

Wow Can I leave my comment like that? Nope, I'd have to report myself for spamming Anyway, great descriptions in this oneshot. I didn't quite follow the lyrics, some parts were good, others weren't. Just my opinion though. The text itself was a bit hard to read, not because it was bad, but because it was centred. Centred texts are generally harder to read, so try to stear away from those. (it was just some parts though) But the text itself was great. The build-up to the shocking and sad ending was perfect. You really made the reader wanting to continue and that's how a oneshot should be So that's why my first word was wow. All in all, a great text with a few things to improve

I'll move it to the NDL for you. Thanks for letting us know

I'm doing homework and some work in the fan fic section. It's so much fun

Yay, someone's here! So... what are you doing then?