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Anyone here?

Woho, I only got two people commenting my fic, which means that it sucks and people doesn't want to tell me

Nah, you're just saying that to be polite Nobody wants to tell someone that their oneshot sucks

Well, I managed to finish my oneshot, so now I'm bored I can't seem to find my memory stick and there lays the entire "Love has arrived." Bad HM!

I see. Is it fun?

I'm writing a oneshot. You?

Hello As usual, I'm here. I'm always here, because I don't have a life

I'll just answer that as well: They went missing in episode 4215, in the end. And they were found in episode 4231

If you're talking about Jack and Martha's wedding, then that's 4211 I can't think of any other barn explosions

Mattie has a hole in her heart? Geez, that can't be good... Jack and Martha are getting married Maybe there's a baby coming soon? Is Mark in love with Kristy? That would be perfect! The jerk falls for the other jerk and then they'll live a very jerky life More please!

And it sounds like crap, doesn't it?

He's telling the truth And Eli, if you want to know what the oneshot is about, check out the "Advertise your fic" - thread

What it is about? Now you're asking tough questions, Eli I don't know yet. Something I've never done before.... Something funny, but scary about any character that falls in to my mind... I think...

I was planning on writing a oneshot... I like to write something completely different from time to time. That makes it easier going back to the original fic But I must warn you... I suck

That reminds me... I should be writing on "Love has arrived." I think I need to update soon, otherwise no one will care anymore

I'm glad Martha finally told her "father" what she really felt I got a bit nervous when she pulled out the knife, but it was just plastic, so it's cool Kristy and Mark should get lost very soon They're so annoying and they're going to try and tear Martha and Jack apart. Jerks! Oh no, what's wrong with Mattie? More please!

I'm here! I'm here!

That was an incredible oneshot! I don't know what to say... Your describtions, your way of writing... it's awesome! And I love the way you make his memory of Martha the best, while every time he tries to do the same with Sam, she just pushes him away Jack was so cheeky and drunk Denying that it was his own snoring that woke him up It's like you can see it happening on HAA because of the describtions. This was an incredible oneshot

Oh, I could almost picture this part in my head. Poor little Geoff Great part! It's so sad and moving. Two forbidden lovers who can't be together Naw, poor Geoff. What a powerful sentence Oh, my favourite part of the oneshot. Bad boy Aden vs good boy Geoff What a perfect and sad ending. I really like the way you describe things, Eli! It's like I can see it in my head --------- A very powerful and moving fan fic. I love your way of writing emotions in fan fics

Aww, Lucas bought Mattie a diamond ring And they're back together! Mark is still an idiot. I'll help anyone who wants to beat him. Any volunteers? I'll hold and you hit Kristy and Valli is fighting over Jack who's with Martha and now Martha is prepared to fight for him as well. Yeah, that's not messy at all More please!

Phew, you don't hate me *sighs relieved* Is that a trick question? I like the blend Maybe not that many pictures, so it wouldn't be the pictures, what shall I say, fighting for the viewers' attention? (if that made any sense at all)

I'm in England at the moment, and it's actually quite nice. No rain and it's dry. Me like

I'll be honest... The first one is good, but maybe a bit more colouring, so it becomes more special? Just a suggestion... The second one is too blurry. That's not good, so don't blur them too much. Have more focus on colouring and cropping and text, like the Ric and Mattie one I quoted the first time I wrote in here. That one I really liked The third one and the fourth one look like they've been sharpen too much. That's not good either. Not too blurry and not too sharp. The two last one are actually quite nice. I prefer the last one, though. The other one looks a bit too sharp. Now the banner: Again, colouring. Very important. Try to add a few more colours (I can show you some really good tutorials) and the text is confusing. It's all over the place and you can't really tell in what order they're in. But a good blend with the Martha pictures Now I feel bad I'm not trying to destroy your confidence, I'm just being honest and letting you know how you can become better Please don't hate me