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These are just so beautiful I love all of your work. The colouring and cropping is so great

Ha, Valli is so lying But Martha will set her straight Phew, Lucas and Mattie escaped from the claws of the devil Jack is doing the right thing by not telling Martha and wanting a paternity test. Valli is so up to something Hm, I guess I'll forgive you... for now. More please!

I'm tired and hungry... And my sister and I have just had a fight because I said that Tokio Hotel sucks

Valli (hmph, that's my name ) is an ass! I bet she's lying Well, she better be. We don't want anything to happen to Martha in my fic now, would we? I'll give you one chapter to fix it, otherwise, Martha has to pay for it Oh, and I agree with Barbara, Valli is stupid. No one waits around for someone for two years More please!

Yeah, Bec, why would you ruin everything? If you don't fix it soon, Martha in "Love has arrived" should watch her back Aww, Macca was worried about his little sister And he saved Jack At least Jack didn't become the next victim of "cat of nine tails" More please! (And remember, Martha's life in my fic is relying on you )

Awww, Lucas and Mattie are so cute Jack, you're an idiot! You don't go and see someone who's that crazy! Martha's dad better not hurt him! He should have stayed by Martha's side She's hurting so much and she needs someone who can help her back on her feet (Jack ) More please!

That's not true. I've been reading all along, I just haven't been saying much Now that that's out in the open, let's carry on. Yet another great chapter. You really know how to capture your readers (well, at least you got me ) I was really sure that Robbie was innocent, now I'm not so sure This is the perfect way to end a chapter. Now I need to know why Robbie can't say that he didn't kill them. Did he kill them? Or does he know something that he shouldn't and is protecting someone? Could there be anyone he's willing to take the blame for? More please!

Thanks for the information about the "cat of nine tails". That sounds so... painful. Martha's dad is pure evil I feel sorry for Martha But at least she has Jack who can take care of her I sense a kiss in the air Oh no! Martha's dad's coming! Quick, Jack! Hide Martha! More please!

After reading ther first part of that chapter, I think it's a whip. But I'm not sure. That's the problem when English isn't your mother tongue. You're probably right. I was just thinking that it could be a cat with nine tails, and then you grabbed the cat by the neck and used it as a whip

Oh my God, Martha's father is completely psycho! How could he do that to his own daughter? He should go to jail and never come out again! At least Martha refused to say that she didn't love Jack and Jack took care of her when she needed it What is "Cat of nine tails"? Is that a cat with nine tails? More please!

IMO it didn't look too bad, but he looks very pale. I'm blaming the photographer I'm sending my letter to Paul soon

Well, it wasn't too bad this morning. The sun was shining and the snow was starting to melt, but as the day went by it only got colder, and now the melted snow is starting to turn into ice! Bah, I hate the weather here in Norway

Happy Birthday Jodi

Ewww! That's disgusting! And what kind of a father is he? You don't pull your daughter by the hair! Jack should have hit him! He must save his damzel in distress I'm scared too. What has this phsyco of a father in store for our poor Martha? More please!

Ah, so the girl was Martha. She's a very bad girl, isn't she? Sneaking around in the middle of the night, acting like a slut She reminds me of me when it comes to sleeping. She's a heavy sleeper, so am I. I never hear if something is going on unless I'm almost awake Wonder how Martha found out that DeadSexy () was Jack, but Jack hasn't been able to figure out that WonderGirl is Martha. Wonder what will happen when he does If Jack and Martha love each other, but the families are enemies and refuses them to be together, then let the war begin More please!

At least Lucas wasn't planning some evil plot, but it was actually a quite nice surprise A little daughter. It was really nice of Mattie to carry Lucas and Belle's baby I'm glad no one was dead and now Lucas and Belle and their little daughter can live happily ever after The cottage seems so lovely and it will probably be great place to raise a child I'm sad that this fic is over, but I'm going to start reading your other one

It was a really good oneshot with a very interesting twist Aww poor Jack. Lost a girl because he cries after sex Martha really got a nasty surprise there, didn't she?

Review for chapter 7: Well, I said it first. More please. What she said Review for chapter 8: I'm glad Belle decided to go back to Summer Bay, but will she be a victim for an evil plot? Why would Lucas lie to get her back? I'm not mad that you decided to have this as a short fic, but I sure will miss it, but at least you'll write another one More please!

Aww that was such a lovely ending Jack and Martha had a little baby girl And her name is Katie Jane Holden It’s great that Martha is starting to calm down and forget about Corey It’s sad that this fic is over, but they got a happy ending. A really happy ending

I was right about Lucas! :-D I still think the girl is Belle since her name hasn't been mentioned and she responded to the news about Irene's death, and Irene might have gone back to drinking to cope with Belle's "death". Okay, now I'm just saying what Barbara said Yay, Jack and Martha got married :-D And they have a little girl And they are expecting another baby, well Martha is. It would be very interesting (not to mention weird) if it was Jack who was carrying the child Beth and Tony got married But so did Drew and Annie Couldn't she have found someone else? I don't like Drew. I find him rather strange... Ric's in jail and Mattie's dead *sighs sadly* More please!

Now I'm thinking the two persons are Belle and Lucas. I have no idea why Belle, but I can't think of anyone else Lucas would love. Lucas because he makes the best hot chocolates along with Jack, but then it might be Jack... If it's Jack then it must be someone older, but I doubt that it is Jack. Could be though. but I don't think Mattie would be the love of Jack's life So I'm thinking Lucas. Cassie=slut How is it possible to so... stupid? Is she on some kind of mission, like trying to sleep with all the guys who has a girlfriend and see how annoyed and angry she can get the girlfriends? More please!

I'm glad to hear that your nan is better Well, it's not Mattie who is the girl, because she's dead. Then who could it be? Let me see... it must be someone who was close to Mattie, but not Cassie. And Cassie stole her ex... hm, who could it be? Okay, let me see if I'm capable of figuring out who the guy is... Lucas, maybe. I don't think it's Jack since he was married to Martha at the time and I doubt that he would marry Cassie and sleep with Annie. It's not Drew either, since his name is mentioned. Then I'm left with Lucas and Ric as possible suspects. But the guy had black hair, so it's most likely Ric, but Lucas could have coloured his hair; meaning that I'm back to start Now, who in the Bay is cold? Hm... I need more clues More please!

Great chapter! Hm... who is the two people talking? I’m thinking maybe Mattie and Ric... Poor girl who has been in the accident She’s too scared to go back, and claims the girl she just to be, died in the accident. Ric was going to ask Mattie to marry him? Wonder how that went More please!