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  1. I actually love that tune. I find it rather amusing The Jaws movies are so unlikely that they are not scary, even though I guess no one wants to end their lives in the mouth of a shark At least I know I wouldn't The last movie I saw was... um... The Omen I think it was
  2. Great chapter! It’s great that you’re not telling us who’s talking, but now I’m starting to get unsure about it being Jack who’s the guy It sounded like a fun Christmas Wish my Christmas would have been like that So.... whoever was in the accident, forgot everything and took off and is now afraid of cars. My guesses is that whoever those two people are, they were together before the accident, since she seems to be very interested in the guy’s wedding ring, and I see that as a sign that they have been together and she’s not really over him. She just couldn’t get herself to go back when her memory came back. More please!
  3. Well, I think that keeping us guessing would be the most fun. But that’s just my opinion, you decide for yourself what you want to do. I bet I love it anyway
  4. I thought I’d add a comment to tell you that I have added you to my friends list. Hope it’s okay. And I also love your new fic "A Haunted Mystery", but I think you already knew that :-P

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  5. Great start! I loved the way we sort begin with two unknown persons and we sort of see that something must have happened in the past, and then we go to the past to see what happened. But we still don’t know who pretended to be dead (even though I have a feeling that Jack is the guy ) and why. And we also know by now that is has been an accident. Really exciting! I love when everything isn’t given to us straight away and we have to see the "pattern" for ourselves Can’t wait to read more! It’s really exciting! More please!
  6. I’ll be back then. I’ve got some math I need to do , so I guess I can do that while I’m waiting
  7. You killed off Jack! Oh my God! Well, at least Martha’s happy with her three children Oh my God, Ranya married Kim??? Haha, I’d never expect her to marry anyone I’d expect Tasha and Robbie to get married. Same with Mattie and Lucas I’m sad that this fic is over, but you already know that I’m going to read your new one. I was about to write "more please", but it wouldn’t be much point in that
  8. This is great! I really felt like I was/knew Sally and what went through her head when she saw her daughter being hit by the car It was especially great the way you describe things, how Sally is so angry at first, then to thinking if she could have made the same mistake I can’t wait to read Alf’s thoughts around the accident It’s been said that "time heals all wounds", and with the way you ended this first part, it can be said to be true. All the thoughts in Sally’s head were negative before Pippa woke up. But when she was awake, Sally’s perspective of the accident changed. She took out the photo of her and Alf and thought that "we all make mistakes", but still she’s not able to really forgive him. At least that’s what I thought after reading this. Sorry for rambling; my conclusion would be: great first part, can’t wait to read the next!
  9. Oh, I can’t wait until you start!! I actually thought you had started now, so I’m kind of disapointed Don’t wait too long with posting the first chapter though! Like I said, can’t wait until you start!
  10. Sam’s dead! At least she can’t cause anymore problems now, right? She’s not coming back as a ghost to haunt Martha, is she? Jack is such a sweet person Why can’t I have a boyfriend like that? He asked her to marry him Hope she said yes! It’s sad that this story is coming to an end, but there better be a happy ending... wait, who am I to talk? I usually write bad endings in my stories that I have written in Norwegian Please update soon Bec, I want to know what happens and how it ends
  11. You have started and I didn’t know Well, at least I found out now Wonder what’s wrong with Tasha It seems like she’s dying or something :-( So Peter thinks there’s a curse over Summer Bay does he? :-P Great chapter! Now I’m jealous because I want to write as good as you More please!
  12. First, please call me HM. Valli is just some silly nickname I came up with because I couldn’t think of anything else Then the review: Haha, in your face Sam! Busted! Some prophecy Wonder what it means... it doesn’t sound too good though... Jack and Martha made love Sam tried to kill Jack and now she’s trying to destroy J&M’s relationship >_< But at least she got busted this time, or at least I hope so.... Let’s hope Tasha’s last treatment goes well :-) More please!
  13. Oh, I love the Scream movies I was a bit annoyed when they killed off Tatum. She has my favourite movie line ever: "Oh, please don't kill me, Mr. Ghostface, I want to be in the sequel" By the way, who's Chrimbo? The last movie I saw was Spider Man 3
  14. :-O Sam raped Jack??? Evil b*tch! And now she's trying to frame Martha Poor Jack :-( At least he managed to tell Martha, so she knows what a evil b*tch Sam is! I hate Sam! Hoping she gets arrested and sent away to prison never to be free again! More please!
  15. Oh my God, Sam’s completely insane! Poor Jack who was stuck with her. Martha you go girl! If Sam tries anything you’ll give her what she deserves! Jack is such a gentleman Wonder what Rachel finds out, and what really happened between Jack and Sam More please!
  16. It has been raining pretty much all day Not fun in itself, but actually, running in the rain is quite funny
  17. I'm still here No, I haven't lost interest at all
  18. Beth! That was not very understanding of her! It was Mattie's choice and if she wanted to and she's not pregnant, then seriously, what's the problem? I'm hating Sam even more now! She's up to something, I can feel it Wonder what happened between her and Jack? *tries to find out what happened between Sam and Jack* *can't come up with anything and waits patiently for the next chapter* I'm happy for Martha She has finally figured out what she wants to be:-) More please!
  19. Review for chapter 28: Lucas and Mattie should get a room :-P No wonder everyone else finds out when Lucas can't keep his hands off Mattie Jack is jealous. He wants to do it with Martha Let's hope Sam doesn't get in the way Review for chapter 29: The funeral was so beautiful Poor Martha:-( I don't like Sam. If she tries to steal Jack from Martha... More please!
  20. The Grudge
  21. It was quite nice for a while, but just when I decided that it was time to get some fresh air, then it started to rain So now, everything is back to normal
  22. No! It can't be over soon! I'm too addicted now, you can't take it away from me Well, at least you'll write a new one that I can keep myself busy with
  23. Yay, Martha woke up But she found out about her parents She better not hurt herself again, it's not coming any good out of it Lucas and Mattie are so cute, and very lucky :-P Ha, I'd love to see Beth's reaction when she finds out Have a great Christmas matticus01 and I look forward to read more More please!
  24. Yay, a happy ending! And there are four little Holdens Emma's getting married! Hope it's to a nice guy Too bad it's the end, but at least Jack and Martha are together I was about to write "more please", then I realized that it's not much point in that EDIT: And have a great Christmas Mienkie, I hope that you decide to write more
  25. If you do start a new one, you have at least one reader
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