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Hmmm Morten is no Edward Cullen more Leatherface with Teeth instead of a chainsaw I do have to say though I am rather entertained with the story you're doing a great job

Wonder how Brody will react when he finds out Morten was behind his rendezvous with Kris and that's why he found him "interesting"

That's the family member I would've chosen if I were in Brody's shoes

More of the earlier chapters start to make more sense I like how this has panned out

Great update you've really wrote Justin realistically Brody not wanting to kill his victims unfortunately for him thats inevitable

So that why Brody was so conflicted that night awesome and very interesting update

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Exactly how I would imagine someone reacting to that news loved the update btw in American horror story lady Gaga plays a bitchy vampire names The Countess who has a thing for men that look the same she turns them into vampires then disposes of them once she's done with them

Brody's gone all true bloods Jessica Hamby with the mind control thing love it wonder how bad ass he's gonna get is there a possibility of Lady Gaga style in American Horror Story

Great twist although will admit I had some suspicions something else was going on can't wait for the next update I think we have a similar mind

I really don't know what to say execept I loved it not just the epilogue but the whole thing I really do need to applaud you on this the episogue alone was amazing then there's the rest of the story I didn't mind that it was long it was actually part of the reason I really liked it I really can't wait to read your future projects

Well you official say you've written a legacy here congratulations where to start the whole story is great from beginning to end I loved the detail you went into to describe the characters and their emotions I love the reference to Titanic something tells me Kyle is a softy at heart and has actually seen that movie more than once let's hope Brax is ok I'm sure he will be he can always take care of himself but then again you are famous for you're twists and turns it might be the longest fan fic I've read but in saying that it was never boring can wait to read the epilogue

Didn't think Brody would react well to Justin's question we now know where he spent Saturday night however what happened on the beach still remains a mystery I really like it

Interesting I really think Justin's said the wrong thing at the last part before time jump Brody clearly isn't going to react well You've got Raffy nailed I think even Olivia Deeble would be impressed with that however I get Tori's a doctor and its in her nature to want go help but she kind of annoyed me in this chapter and Mason calling Kat was just another one of Mason's dumb ideas it's obvious Brody's not ready to talk just what did happen in the hotel room that led to Brody having a nose bleed and is he trouble again on the beach after all he was found passed out there i also don't know if I'm right but something tells me Brody was forced to have oral sex

And the surprises keep on coming here I was thinking Heath was dead

Another great chapter can't wait for the last two chapters I'm sure you still have some surprises in store for us

That was very well written like an episode of law and order SVU very well done

Great update you nailed the others not including Raffy in anything still no closer to finding out what happened to Brody I like that though it keeps the mystery going and leaves me wanting more

That was my immediate thoughts to the marks on his neck another very well written chapter you're description of Phoebe thinking she's always right is spot on this Kris guy seems like one to keep an eye on also Brody's reaction to Nate touching him was very well done can't wait for the next chapter

I like reading your comments to each other you both manage to put a smile on face (in a positive way)

You've got me wondering if this is in the vein of Don Winslow's Savages in it opened with the line "just because I'm telling you this story does not mean I'm alive at the end of it it's just one of those stories that got so out of control" everyone's in their own fair share of trouble it'll be a miracle for them to get out of it however as always exciting stuff

Hey thanks for writing it amazing start the intrigue and interest in what happens next is there already I'm already hanging out for the next chapter like how you went into depth about Brody's thoughts and Justin and Tori were spot on

What are your thoughts on Ben? at the moment he seems like a re incarnation of Zac MacGuire I hope I'm wrong

What are your thoughts on Maggie? honestly when I first saw Wolf Creek I never thought I'd see Kestie Morassi on Home and Away in saying that it's a good surprise Maggie looks like she'll fit into Summer Bay very easily

What are your thoughts on Ziggy i love her already she's got the Billie Ashford / Mink Smith feel to her cant wait to see more