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Another fantastic update

This continues to be an interesting fan fiction I'm a huge fan of the show American Horror Story and I can imagine this being a storyline on that show

Very interesting one of the best fanfic so I've read in a long time

Tank was one of the better / payed / more interesting teenage characters plus he was more redeemable than both Josh and Hunter it's a shame he left

Hunter is an irredeemable character to me he did way too much at the start and never really seemed apologetic for it sure he stood up in court and said Billie didn't burn down Leah's house but only after Andy told him he knew about it also I think if he hadn't baited Tabitha as much as he did she wouldn't have done half the stuff she did to Olivia also hunters comment about James should've know that Olivia was being molestered does he not know these thing are usually impossible to see until it's too late also has he forgotten that his mother killed his cousin and buried her body in the bush and he didn't know for months and when he did he chose not to report her to the police I don't get how this character can be made out to be some sort of Angel

What are your thoughts of Hope? i have feeling she'll turn out to be bad news as Raffy said the guys she usually hangs around with are bad news and later asked if she owed them money which she replied it wasn't my fault this time it will be intriguing to see where they go with this character though

What's everyone's thoughts on Raffy? at this stage I like her it's refreshing to have a character that age on the show

She really has made a mark on home and away quite and friendly and unique character

this guy intrigues me (apart from his fascination with Phoebe) I really like his brutal honesty scenes too plus that smile and those gorgeous blue eyes ? What can I say I'm only human

The been there done that several times in the past few years type of character nothing original with this guy I also do t know why phoebwould want to get involved with Justin when she spent her entire relationships with Kyle and Ash complaining because they were doing dodgy stuff and keeping things from her Justin won't be any different

Not warming Mason at all as much as I wish I could I just can't he just seems so douche like compromising his family for the so called love if his life then jumping to the next girl that shows him some sort of attention

What does everyone think of Hunter?

What does everyone think of Charlotte. At the moment I'm liking her but I've got a feeling she might become the next Angie Russell or Amanda Vale.

I agree with everything you just said unlike Maddy bitchy unlikeable female characters in the past such as Amanda Vale, Angie Russell, Jazz Curtis, Gypsy Nash and dare I say Ruby Buckton were somewhat enjoyable to watch just to see what they did next but Maddy is so pathetic and beyond repair even her own boyfriends get sick of her.

Charlotte's last the was Adams and the actress (Stephanie Jacobsen) can be seen in Revenge at the moment. Anyway getting back to Nate I knew this would happen as soon as Brax came back but I don't think Ricky should've treated Nate that way. Usually I like Ricky but I just hope Nate find someone who won't screw with his feelings.

Archie Maddock (Melody's friend in Melbourne) only lasted 2 episodes and he got lots of threads made about him

I'm in love with Kyle he's talks with Heath and Jess were great he knew exactly what to say

Why is Tamara still in school this year wasn't she doing her last year last year

Do you mean you hope they will turn Ricky into Natalie? No that was meant to say I hope they don't turn her into Natalie like the way she was still pining for Brax when she was with Zac, I hope they don't do tat with Ricky and Nate IMO Brax had his chance and let her go. Brax had his chance and let her go? He is in prison, unless he took her into prison with him he had no other choice then to let her go until he gets out of jail:) Zac should hook up with Leah or Hannah Sorry but The way I see it you don't push someone away because you think you'll be in prison for ten years then expect to run back to you once they've moved on simply because you didn't spend as long in jail as you thought you would.

Do you mean you hope they will turn Ricky into Natalie? No that was meant to say I hope they don't turn her into Natalie like the way she was still pining for Brax when she was with Zac, I hope they don't do tat with Ricky and Nate IMO Brax had his chance and let her go.

I really hope they turn. Ricky into Natalie with this Nate storyline for some reason I can see it happening.

I really like Phoebe I like her carefree attitude and I think she has great chemistry with Kyle

Me too, from what I've already seen I find him way more interesting than the Barrett brothers or Chris.

Does anyone else think she looks a lot like Jordana Brewster from The Fast And The Furious and The Texas Chainsaw Massacre: The Beginning? Cassie Howarth http://images.tvrage.com/people/118/351842.jpg Jordana Brewster http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_DLMbxIoKN3c/SNMLu-ZfW_I/AAAAAAAAJ3w/ViRNS5BS7Q4/s1600-h/jordana-brewster-texas-chainsaw-massacre-beginning-photo-1.jpg

I actually like this guy he kinda reminds of Aden Jefferies.