Miranda

Haha, well done Did you see what I wrote about a ship name for these two on your other fanfic thread? teehee. That was before I read this fic though, so it probably sounds a bit silly now The other thing was, dare I say it, does the title have a double meaning?

That's great! Its good that they realised Heath can't keep his mouth shut about anything and they are on borrowed time, and sweet they told Casey and Ruby first That bit made me laugh actually!

Well done Carina, very brave to write this. Obviously this happens and people have to accept it does, so you're right to write that people shouldn't start arguing. What a horrible thing for Casey to do in leaving Ruby to cope alone, hm.... That decision will be back to bite him in future, I bet. Its almost like a continuation of the one I wrote 'One Way or Another' but you were braver than me. Well done

Well I've completely lost track of this fic, sorry Keep going, its good. As Loz said, Chax or Jarlie? At the moment in the real series, Brax is annoying me so much I prefer Jarlie

Yes, they'd be brilliant wouldn't they Pierced Musie? Maybe... One Day....

Thanks Yes, I keep commenting on things and the comment mysteriously disappears Weird...

Thanks She's just fallen asleep in an armchair so hopefully she will heal better while asleep. She looks like a tiny baby angel

Thanks all. Your comments really mean a lot to me ATM cos I'm in a right state about my sick daughter, the fics are keeping me going, basically

Thanks Zetti. I'm really glad you liked it

This Dancing with the Stars video is so cute, especially when the unexpected guest walks in: http://au.tv.yahoo.com/home-and-away/video/-/watch/25382573/

Don't you think that would be a bit too symmetrical tho? Brax (father) going out with Charlie (mother) and Casey (son) going out with Ruby (daughter). Or would it be that Charlie and Brax had similar experiences of young parenthood and it would bring them together? Or am I getting too caught up in what ifs?

Oh thanks you two, you made my day. I love that people find different parts of this fic funny and it appeals to all ages

Brilliant Red I think Amy either has no family or she's running away from a bad situation. She was all over Xavier now she's backing off rapidly. So, what is Ruby going to tell Nicole? I hope she doesn't tell her about the Romeo situation tbh, that would put Nic in a difficult situation

Ugh, I can't bear the thought of Heath and Bianca, I hope it isn't as awful as I imagine

Oh, sorry. Just thought we were having a conversation, oops.

Well, I was just wondering about the dyslexia, some people are so mildly dyslexic they never get diagnosed. No, I didn't mean its abuse, just something horrible has happened to them. We'll know soon enough I suppose...

God!! In that case I dedicate this story to her Thanks for replying Di.

I have a feeling the Braxton story could turn out to be the Aden Jefferies story but handled better. Todd/Aden did really, really well with his abuse story, but I did feel it was all a bit cobbled together. The Braxtons have been set up much better and more slowly and realistically. I also have always thought that Brax, Heath and Casey don't have the same fathers, esp if Casey is dyslexic and the others aren't. Dyslexia runs in families, I think it would be almost impossible for Casey to be the only one with it in the same family.

As long as if its fighting, it involves men who are not wearing much and possibly fall onto muddy ground (oops, getting carried away )

I hopes you got to read, the third chapter... RIP my love, thanks for been my great friend.. You with you two boys aka her (dogs) Di x x Huh? Sounds ominous Di, what do you mean?

I reckon that whatever abuse Casey has taken from Heath and friends, Heath probably took abuse from Brax and his friends when he was little. It seems to be the nature of brothers. Hence why Heath is like he is: violent and doesn't like to be challenged.

I don't mind angst. I don't mind neat endings. I don't mind vague endings. I am quite easy to please. As long as its not full of people endlessly beating each other up physically (yawn)

Oh thanks Zetti, Red and Teespazzr. Always nice to get a new reader

Well, if you will try and escape the grip of Home and Away, you've only yourself to blame

I'm happy if it ends vaguely, I like vague indecisive endings As long as they don't all die.