Miranda

Great story Red! Sorry I haven't been around, but you know why. Yay! Ric and Mattie, I loved them as a couple. I can see April and Xavier getting back together..... Wonder what gives me that idea? I always thought Indi and Xavier were a nice couple but he's right, they are poles apart. Romeo getting itchy feet, hm... Can you tell me how Ric and Alf are related? I don't think I ever knew. And why isn't Angelo around being Nicole's boyfriend

Great Jen! Looking forward to more. Your descriptions of Dex are brilliant, especially.

Haha, I can't pick out all the funny bits, it was all too funny, but Elijah shaking Heath's willy! Brax writing a novel and being in a writer's group!

Aw, nice ending. I was so worried that you were going to get Romeo and Indi back together or something Glad everyone ended up happy. I think Xavier is the straightforward guy Indi needs, as I've said many times before... Well done Red. I think that was one of, if not THE favourite fic of mine ever.

Welcome indeed, although hopefully you got my PM So funny! Brax with a forcefield. I'd believe anything of him! God knows when I'll be able to do another chapter, be prepared for a long wait, as the plumber said to the new boy.

Enjoyed this chapter too. Dex and his therapy sessions. April and Xavier getting on well, unlike in the series! And Romeo and Ruby moving away. I think Xavier is (as I've probably said already) the uncomplicated bloke Indi wants. She can boss him around and know what she sees is what she gets. I like them but I don't think it would last long tho. I can't help thinking that you've got a big finale lined up for us tho Red!

Oh gosh Zetti, sorry to hear of your problems. Hope you get better soon x

Excellent! I'm glad Xavier and Indi are happy. I thought he was very concerned that time in the show when he went round to the farm to talk to her about Romeo's fling with Ruby, that time when Dex was trying to take him into the house. Still wonderiing where this is going, in a good way!

Aw, Dex steals the show again Great update. I don't think Indi really likes Xavier, he's just comforting her. I'm intrigued as to what happens next, I thought you'd have finished this fic with a flourish of Ruby and Romeo declaring undying love for each other Keep going

Ooh, dramatic. Bianca pregnant by Heath, Gypsy with Heath Wonder if this will happen in the series?

I read an interview with Lincoln Younes where he said exactly that, so we just have to wait

Hahaha Maciam, you are funny

I can see Indi and Xavier just going out as friends with maybe a bit more. He's someone she's known for ages, more straightforward than Romeo. It might work for a while, but I think she's too intelligent for him. Would be a nice comforting relationship for her. Glad she didn't do that with Casey, he's too much of a handful for her. What has Romeo got in mind? Will R and R stick together or will it all fall apart???

I really disliked Dex today, but I really, really disliked April. I so hoped Dex was going to man up and put poor Xave out of his misery and wondering what was going on. I thought once upon a time that Dex and April, two intelligent geeks, would be a good couple, but they just seem to be going up their own arses tbh! Why couldn't Dex go out with Kate, they had MUCH more chemistry.

Perhaps Lincoln is in some kind of time warp, he is 19 in February but 23 by July

Really? Here it says he was nearly 19 in February 2011: http://www.bendigoadvertiser.com.au/news/l...ay/2079231.aspx

Oh hahahahah! Heath eats Romeo! Finally, he wins Indi! If only this would happen in the series. So funny Pembie: Elijah and Sid wanting a cat fight, Brax scaring Coleen and Marilyn, Dex perving over Heath. A good old giggle

That is exactly what I mean! I didn't want to write it cos I thought it sounded pervy My schoolfriend Adam and a few other boys did that over the summer holidays between what would now be years 9 and 10. Adam finished school in the July looking ordinary and came back in September this 6 foot tall god and we all swooned

I just think that soon, Casey's actually going to be bigger than Heath in the muscles department too, you can see him putting on muscle almost weekly. Not that I've been looking, of course He'll be strong enough to withstand his assaults. I remember my husband's delight when he finally got stronger than his brother, who's 5 years older than him. Then his brother couldn't push him around

Oh yay! I look forward to it. I must also say that I have taken notes on your fics, we can all learn from each other

ahem! :blush: I must admit Di, we were going to write it anyway, but dedicating it to Mark was a sudden inspiration. I only hope Red isn't going to get struck down while we write this, I'm a bit paranoid now.

I love the fact that Casey is now taller than Heath (and Brax) and soon Heath won't be able to bully him so much

Yes it was pretty realistic, you did a good job Remember all this when you have your own baby

I think this story might be just us, Red, I thought there were more Star Wars fans around here but never mind we can chortle away at our own private jokes

Wow Red! That was a very long instalment, well done! Glad you have now introduced all the main characters. I LOLed many times at that-the allusions to violent people living round Summer Bay, the endless desert of the bay, 'John Skywalker', the worry about the blond hair, Miles's beard, Liam's singing Glad you didn't kill off Uncle Tony and Aunt Rachel, I was actually going to (cue evil laughter) I THINK I even got all the Star Wars references I shall now retire to my cave in the mountains to write the next part