Miranda

Summer Bay's a strange place normally even without the mystic creatures Well done JosieTash, a fantastical and hilarious chapter

Oh dam I should of set that as the quick fanfic Contest only joking I was thinking about trying to get the line in every chapter through what do you think ? Yes, get it into every chapter! If only I had time, I'd write a story called 'Where are your clothes, Heath?' where Heath has a secret job as a stripper, and Brax and Casey wonder where he's getting the extra money from x 100 Of course anyone else could write that story, if they felt like it... anyone reading this .... I have someone in mind...

and anyway, in the UK speed episodes, Brax making a sacrifice of Brodie has made the Braxtons look worse and Brodie better IMO.

Oh this is bizarre, and so funny Well done Steve. I think we should have a challenge: how many fics can we get the line 'where are your clothes, Heath?' into? :lol:

I should say to people that there are only 2 more parts to this, so don't expect too much more

You are very clever at nearly giving the secret away, then not doing so. That is a good skill

Pembie, the clothes line will come along in future in this fic, keep reading :P Thanks Teespazzr, Loz and Zetti. You are far too kind Hope the cuteness wasn't too much, I don't usually do cute Oh Angel90, didn't see you there, thanks too

I picked up the Black Ranger reference, I did I did! Dan Ewing has a picture of himself as the Black Ranger on his FB page, which made me laugh, especially as we have our own Red Ranger on BTTB When you say leaf, I can't help thinking of an oak leaf, but surely it must be a bigger sized one Thanks for all the thanking. Please, please DON'T write something normal, I like your current writings.

Thanks Teespazzr for your great comment And Pembie Decided to update to distract myself from pesky real life

Thanks librarians/ mods for altering the title I looked everywhere for his surname but only found Brodie Hanson, and she isn't a River Boy But aren't all the minor characters, even the major ones, plot devices? I hope he doesn't come to a bad end tho...

I thought that poor old Brodie, with his storyline about being sacrificed by Brax for the good of the Braxtons, deserved his own thread. And of course the ongoing dilemma as to whether he has a mum or a wife when he says 'my old lady' I've always quite liked him, even when he took Colleen's trailer away with her in it. He's just a lost soul I reckon, hanging onto Brax and co for some kind of family group. I don't think he's got any other family.

Well yes, I put the line in Very funny chapter, this fic is so different and good, its really cheering me up

I might have to borrow that line about Heath's lack of clothes, see if I can get it in my fic :P

Oh, there will have to be some big happening to get these two back together, or not I like the detail of her light blue eyes, very good!

I think Roo's brilliant, I aspire to be like her I think she and Sid would be great together.

I think Dex and April are intellectually at the same level. Xavier, bless 'im, is more of a sporty type and not the brightest (even tho I love him to bits).

(bows) I've sent you a secret message in invisible ink

Thanks all. I didn't want to make Heath out to be some kind of saint, cos he isn't is he? I want to show different sides to him

Thank you (bows)

Aha! Did I make you think of this re: werewolves? My favourite line ever: Where are your clothes, Heath? hahahaha I wish I hadn't called mine Bad Moon Rising, you could have had that title instead of The Beast Within. Although in this story at the moment, it seems to be the Beast Without, teeheehee

Liked Roman saying he would have had Angelo 'dealt with' a while ago! Poor Nicole/Angelo.

AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaahhh! Indi's pregnant? Come on Romeo, man up for this! This is an AU Jen, but a very good one

Argh! I forgot about that!

I was not that bad Miranda! Aha, I thought that would annoy you :P I like that phrase 'incandescent with rage', I always put it in somewhere.

Thank you again Red. How long shall I torture people waiting for the next chapter, it needs a bit of tweaking Pembie, you have just said the perfect thing about Heath putting his foot in it, I hoped someone would mention that. He doesn't engage brain before opening mouth, things just come out as he's thinking them. He does that in the series too, if you watch him as closely as I do Oh, re: Rob, yes I did get that from Zetti. She was incandescent with rage at first then calmed down