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Beautiful, just beautiful.

Awesome update. And a bit of J/M action aswell. Nice work.

YAY. Our baby is finally home. Great chapter. I hope you update soon.

Why do i have a feeling that Ben might be alive. Hmmmmmmm. Probably just my mind going into over drive. I get scared everytime you update. Because i remember the horror and torture you put us through with the 'undercover cop' trilogy. And i just know you're going to put us through that pain again. Because you are evil. LOL.

Nice work. Excellent. Gave me a good laugh.

I'm thinking that there will be another girl messing it up this time. Damn you Nicole. Why do you continue to hurt us so much. LOL. Evil evil person you are.

Oh come on. Don't do this to me. Anways, Great chapter. Hope you update soon.

It's Corey. It totally is. The evil little bastard is still in love with Martha, and Sean hurt her, so he locked him in a shed. And because of that Jack went to jail, making Corey even happier. Well that's my theory. YAY. Our baby is a free man. Hope he and Martha can work things out, and then they can get rid of Corey (if it's him).

Sorry, but i don't accept bribes. LOL What about blackmail? Found the dinner topic hilarious... and I felt sympathy towards Tony and Lucas with the whole 'where the baby was conceived' dialogue. But, freakishly, I was quite intrigued. lol. Damn Tasha, why'd she stop speaking!? lol. *thumbs up* I'm not sure if you remember, but at the start of the fic, Martha was thinking about a time when she and Jack 'done it' up on the cliffs. That is when the baby was concieved. Remember she told Flynn in the hospital that she knew exactly when the baby was concieved. Yep, well that was it. And NO. Blackmail won't work either.

Sorry, but i don't accept bribes. LOL

I have a few more surprises up my sleeve. He He.

Yes, that's what I wanted to say. I just ended up rambling a bit... I feel dumb. I don't know what that means. And GlowingAngel, if you rememeber, Jack had trouble forming a bond with Grace. So you don't have to worry about him having any on going feelings for the child. He didn't want her to be his, and now that she isn't, he's happy. Yes, it sounds mean, but it's my story and i'll do what i want. LOL. It's similar to GET IN MY SON!! But... shortened. You know when you do an elbow dig... and you like shout YESS!!!! - It's pretty much to that effect. Lol. Just means I'm rather happy and going hysterical in front of the computer screen. EDIT : Oh update! Best read! EDIT #2: Well, I've now found a new heaven. Poptarts and baygirls fic! Beautiful! That was great. Loved the Kim/Kit bit.. made me chuckle. She did sound rather wise... lol I'm sorry, but I've actually forgotten all they have to work through... it's the Megan stuff.. I'm still angry at her. lol. So.. what do they have to work through? I think it's safe to say that Martha has trust issues. She's scared of getting hurt. Add that to the recent death of her father and Megan's antics; it's made her wary (sp?) of letting people get close. You know? So until she can get over that; she doesn't want to be with Jack. ^^^^^Oh yes, and she's completely stubborn. And yes, where the hell is LinzieMac. I haven't seen her around in yonks. I want some more of her fic. It was one of my favs. Come back LinzieMac, come back.

Oh my gosh................who is it? Eve, maybe Corey. Arggghhhhhhh i want to know right now. Please update soon.

Yes, that's what I wanted to say. I just ended up rambling a bit... I feel dumb. I don't know what that means. And GlowingAngel, if you rememeber, Jack had trouble forming a bond with Grace. So you don't have to worry about him having any on going feelings for the child. He didn't want her to be his, and now that she isn't, he's happy. Yes, it sounds mean, but it's my story and i'll do what i want. LOL.

YAY. She's staying. Now they can be together and stay together forever. Do otherwise and i will beat you. Great chapter. Hope to read more soon.

That was a cute chapter. Hope you update soon.

Excellent ending. I'm so glad that they got back together. I hope to read some more new fics some day soon.

She had better flippin stay.

Stop putting idea's into my head. He He.

Now all Martha has to do is forgive him. Then they can be happy again. Great chapter. Hope to read more soon.

Excellent chapter. I still think she should slap Jack. I hope you update soon.