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Excellent chapter. At least Serena admitted that she knew Jack and Martha were meant to be. And she's given them her approval, so it's all good. I guess i should feel bad that she's dying.

I hate Jack. He's actually thinking about leaving Martha for Tasha. P***k.

Woo Hoo. Great update. Can't wait for another chappie.

Excellent. Can't wait for the next chapter.

That was an awesome ending. I'm glad you put them back together. You done such a great job with this trilogy. Keep up the great work Nic.

Yay an update. Excellent. Lovin this fic. Hope to read more soon.

Yeah, keep going. I'm enjoying it.

I'll try to get the next chapter added tonight.

Very good. I wish they would just admit their feelings already. It's very frustrating. Hope to read some more soon.

Awwwwww that was so sweet. I want Jack out of prison, right now.

If only Jack was out of prison. Then he and Martha could have some real fun. LOL Great update. Hope to read some more soon.

Excellent. I really enjoyed that fic. Very sweet.

Yay. Woo hoo. Now all we need is for Serena to go away and for Jack to get out of prison. Then they can be together forever. But knowing you, you won't make it that easy. Meanie. Excellent chapter. Hope to read some more soon.

Great start. I hope to read more soon.

Sorry guys, but over the last few days my computer went completely haywire. There were virus's galore. I had to erase everything from my comp, and had to restart the whole computer. I was on the phone for about an hour today with some moron from westnet, trying to get the internet connected again. Anyways. The last chapter of this fic and the next couple of chapters of my other fic all got erased. So i have to type them all out again. Luckily i write all my stories on paper before typing them. So it will be easy to remember everything. So look out for some updates over the next couple of days.

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Tony, stop being a meanie and let Jack go and find the love of his life.

Callum = total weirdo freak.

Somebody needs a beating.

That last chapter was awesome. I can't belive Jack doubted Martha. Stop being a dumbass Jack. Well i hope you update soon. This is great.

Excellent chapters. Isn't it good that we can make Jack and Peter really good cops in our fics. Because lets face it; in the actual show they aren't that great at their job. I think my little toe felt sorry for Martha. But i'm slowly warming to her again.

The next chapter won't be the last. There will probably still be another 2 or 3 chapters.

Ohhhhhhhhhh who is this Jemma. Is she somehow connected to one of our loved ones. And all this Jack and Serena mushy stuff makes me sad. He should be with Martha.

Honestly........sometimes Martha can be such a blonde. LOL. Sorry no offence to blondes. But she should have hid in the bushes.

Yay, an update. I really love this fic. The only bad thing i have to say about this is that there aren't enough Jack/Martha scenes.LOL. Other than that, this fic is really good.