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Please, Please don't be pregnant.

I love reading about a guilty Martha. She deserves to feel guilty, and she needs to do some more ass-kissing before she's back in my good books.

Thanks. I'll try to update tmrw sometime.

I'm slowly starting to feel sorry for Martha. She still has some major sucking up to do on my part. Poor Jack. My baby. Atleast he's alive. Callum will die for hurting him.

I know i shouldn't laugh, but..........he he. I just don't like Serena.

I think Martha needs to suffer for a bit longer. That will teach her never to break Jack's heart again. Great chapter Nicole. Callum is one major crazy.

I'm guessing it will be Lauren at the door. Martha will turn up and see her there and freak out again. Great fic. Hope to read some more soon.

Jack. My poor baby. Get better soon. I'm very angry at Martha for ignoring Jack's call. I hope she feels guilty.

Nicole, if that chapter turns out to be a dream; i will hurt you.

You so did not just leave it there. How could you? I was really getting into it. Please update soon.

I'm glad you all liked that chapter. Thanks for the reviews.

You already know how i feel, so i'm not going to say anything. Well i may aswell say i hate Martha. More than ever. Again.

I very much like to think of my self as a bad influence.LOL. So much so, that i encourage everyone to go and buy a chainsaw, or whatever else turns you on. As long as it's sharp and shiny. Good Luck with trying to make me like Martha again. Because it's gonna take a lot of goodness for that to happen. And when i say a lot, i mean A LOT. If Jack slept with another girl i'd probably cheer him on, and then laugh when i saw the look of total devastation on Martha's face. I'm even at the point where i really want to write a fanfic where Jack cheats on Martha. And then maybe Martha can die. Oh god. I think my hate for her in this fic is worsening.

YAY. I had a feeling that was going to happen. I'm so happy.

Lol but in her defence (why am I defending her?? lol) who else was it supposed to be? Tony or Lucas' new girlfriend? Lol. She didn't know Peter was living there, or that Tony and Lucas had gone off with Alf. I'm feeling quite sorry for Martha myself. So misunderstood.. lol I dont feel sorry for her. And like i already said, if really good stuff starts happening; i'll still hate her. She's pissing me off, and for all i care she and Callum can jump off a cliff together. We all know Callum would jump coz he's done it before. So he can take Martha with him. Oh by the way, i picked up my chainsaw today. It's nice and shiny. And very sharp. It's waiting in the wings, ready to attack. LOL

I can't breath. That was way traumatising. Let me guess, now Martha will run off back to Callum. Or the creep will find her down the beach. And she'll be all like 'aww callum, you're so nice'. Somebody gag me. Ewww. Callum. Ewww. The guy is disgusting. I just threw up in my mouth. I'm still hating Martha, i don't think there is anything you can do to make me like her right now. I don't even feel bad about her seeing Mia and thinking that Jack slept with her. And i'm thinking chainsaw, not axe.

I'm heading to the shops to upgrade my beating stick to a metal pole. Who wants to come with?

Oh my god. That was so sad. I had tears welling up and i was shaking while reading that.

Grrrrrr. Why is everyone making Martha hurt Jack. But ha ha Nicole. Your getting a dose of your own medicine. You put us all through hell with your fic, and now someone's doing it to you. LOL.

I want to cry. How could she dump him. Callum is a creep and i wish he would drop dead. Martha expects Jack to trust her, but now she won't trust him. Grrrrrrrr. I guess she'll go running off to Callum now. Well i hope they have fun.

Very nice. Hope you update soon.

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. And let me guess. Martha will believe Callum over Jack. Hmm. No surprises there. Martha's a bitch. LOL. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HIP HIP HOORAY!!!!!!!!!!!

Right now i don't know who i hate more...Martha or Callum. At the moment Martha doesn't deserve Jack. I could go on to say more but i'm pretty sure what i have to say can't be posted on this board. Great work Nicole.

I'm actually considering not reading this anymore. LOL. This fic haunts me to no end. I'm too scared to read it. I'm hating Martha right now, because she is blind and clearly mental. She's going to hurt Jack and i will be overly pissed. And knowing you Nicole.....you will have Martha cheat on Jack, because you have just admitted to wanting to mess with my head. Congratulations...coz it's working.

Mia. I knew i hated that bitch for a reason. And yes, i read Martha's secret. I cried. But now i'm a bit angry with you because you're supposed to be a M/J fan. Yet you still have Martha falling for the freak. Why does she like him, is she mental. And yes, i don't know much about Mia, but i disliked her from the start. And why do i get the feeling that the freak and Mia know each other. Nicole......why do you put me through this hell???????