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What the hell was he doing on top of Martha in the frist place? Wouldn't be surprised if Callum was the one who stole the engagment ring, or maybe Mia stole it. Something is not right about her. But hey, i could be wrong. Martha is really pissing me off. It's getting to the point where i wish Jack would dump her and tell her to **** off. She actually thinks Jack should be okay about her frolicking off with Callum. Hell no. Callum is a freak, i hate him and want him to die.

Grrrrrr she was probably hanging out with the freak. And they were mucking around on the rocks.

I cried my eyes out. That was really good, but sad aswell. I just hope that Martha doesn't get sick again. Coz then i'll cry more.

Thanks Nicole. I had to really think about Alf and Colleen's dialogue. I wanted to make sure that it sounded just like them. I'm glad that it worked out well.

I'm going to admit something, right here, right now. Everytime i see an update for this fic i start to get scared. And i start to feel a little peaky. The reason being; is that i just know Martha is going to be a cow and do something totally stupidand unforgivable and break Jacks' heart. Even if it is just a kiss that she shares with the most hated person in the world right now, it would really **** me off. I can't belive a fanfic about a tv show is getting to me this much. I guess it just proves that Nicole is doing a great job.

Love it. So Martha's pregnant? It had better be Jack's. Hope you update soon.

Excellent fic. Can't wait to read some more.

Beating sticks at the ready.

Noooooooooo! Callum go away. I feel sick and why do i have a bad feeling that Martha is going to do something stupid. Martha stay away from Callum, he's a freak and will do anything to breakup you and Jack. If Martha hurts Jack, i will beat her with a stick.

I just knew he was the doctor when you mentioned him in the last chapter. Stupid jerk. I hate him.

Was just wondering, is the doctor who i think it is, or just some random?

Hell yes i want a sequel. I want to see Martha and Jack back in each others arms. I loved it.

Thank god, Rose went back to her old BF. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter.

The reason i dislike Rose is because she is the one who is making Jack doubt his love for Martha. Also Martha is supposed to be her bestfriend, and in no way should a bestfriend kiss or go after the man that their friend is in love with. It's a big no-no. Martha told Rose that she loved Jack, but that didn't stop Rose. The bitch. I want to see Martha and Jack get back together and i think Rose should go away with Brett Macklin (her father). I like this story because it's a Jack and Martha fic, but i didn't realise Jack was gonna fall in love with another girl.

As much as i love this fic, i feel sad when i read it. Reading the parts where Jack says he's in love with someone else is kinda depressing. I cried my eyes out when i read your other fic (after the storm), please don't make me cry in this one. I'll be overly pissed if Jack chooses Rose. He belongs with Martha. Anyways, great fic. Hope to read more soon.

I think that Martha needs to find out that the weirdo girl set Jack up. And sooner, rather than later.

YAY. They are together. I loved this fic and i can't wait to read your new one.

I bet i know what the sequel is about. Maybe A certain person who we all dislike will arrive.

I love this fic. I really hope you write more J/M fics. Can't wait to read the last chapters.

God, where's Jack when you need him? Like i've already said before, my cricket bat needs a workout. And Warren seems like the perfect person to use it on. Great fic. Can't wait till you update.

Next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow.

I have two questions. One..........where does Warren Showden live? And two...........what does he look like? Because my cricket bat needs a work out.

Fab update. Can't wait to read some more.

Awesome chapter. I'm glad that Jack had a go at Martha. She really did need to be put in her place. But i hope they get back together. Anyways. I can't wait to read another chapter. Please update as soon a you can. Love it.

Just wanted to tell people about a really good Jack and Martha fic on fanfiction.net. It called 'sometimes it's okay to cry'. The author is 'herogary'. It's an awesome fic and if you haven't read it, you should right now. There is also another J/M fic by the same person there aswell. Can't remember what it's called, but it's a 'one-shot fic. It's set after their breakup. So go check em out.