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Poor things. They're really in a bind, aren't they? Jack needs to forgive Martha, and Martha needs to start trusting Jack more. They need to be together. Great update Rach. Can't wait for the next.

For frig sake. What the hell is with their parents? They're not little kids. And the rents are having a little sook because they sneaking around in the middle of the night. They're not 8. Arghhh Martha. Look what you've gone an done. Great chapter Rach. Looking forward to more.

The Tommyknockers. Eeeekkk

That was great, I loved it. Poor Martha. But she still should have told Jack the truth, coz zomething tells me that this isnt over,

Poor Martha. Sh'e totally freaking out. But Jack had better not be seeing Laurie again. I'll hurt him if he hurts Martha. Great chapter Rach. Cant wit for more.

Aww that was sweet. Im a bit scared about the next chapter though. One of them isnt cheating already, are they? That would be horrible.

Yay dirty fluff i hope. LMFAO. THAt was a great chapter. So funny. Cant wait for the next chapter Rach.

You know, they could always just do it on the beach or in the car. LOL. Easier than sneaking around. Great chapter Rach. Bettter not bring that freak back. Lily was a weird one.

Pfft Martha and Jack aren't little kids for gods sakes. They're adults. What a bunch of uptight parents. Yea, they should just move into together. Jack seems to have an alright job, so im sure they could afford it. Then they could have all the sex they wanted. And wherever they wanted . lol.

LMFAO Rach. They so got busted. And busted big time. LOL. That was an awesome chapter. Im so lovin this fic. Defo my fav at the moment. I dont want it to end, coz i know you're taking a bit of a break with the fic writing. Im sad.

Great chapter Rach. I loved Jack and Kim's chat. And Tasha bring a total bitch to Jack. lol. Can't wait for more.

Awww, as Borat would say, they had a sexy time. LOL. Great chapter Rach. And yeah, morning after pill iS always the way to go. LOL. Even though, sometimes it doesnt work. HAHA.

Martha is such a dummy. Just be with Jack silly. He wants you. You want him. End of. Great update Rach. Im glad i convinced you to update sooner rather than later. HEHE. OKay, maybe i bribed you. LOL.

Blackmailing me? Do you think it will work? LOL. We'll see..... Great update. They should just give in and be done with it. LOL.

Aww, love. It's sweet. I can't believe Martha passed up sex with Jack Holden. LOL. Crazy lady. hAHA. Can't wait for another update Rach.

Me, finish your fic.? I couldn't do that. It wouldn't feel right. LOL Plus im having trouble with the bloody three that i have going. Hahaha. I look forward to one day reading the rest of this fic.

Why the hell did you finish that there. It was going so well. LOL. They love each other...awww. I know it. I hope they dont go all weird suddenly and stop. They need to be together forever. Haha.