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Awww possessive Jack is way sexy LOL. He's so gonna bust them. HAHA Jack. That will teach you a leason. Can't wait for the next update. Im so anxious.

Sucked in Jack. That's what happens when you put others before the one you love. So you can just eat it. LOL. He He. Im rather looking foward to the next few chapters; coz ive been told whats going to happen LOL. Can't wait Rach.

Aww, that was so sad. Poor Jack. Poor Martha. But thats what happens when Jack fobs off Martha for some skank. Maybe he'll learn to be thankful for what he already has in front of him. Update soon. Lovin it Rach.

I want Jack to feel pain. Martha's needs to hurt him. A-hole. And Lily is just pathetic.

God, that girl is such a home wrecker. LOL. Can't she take a hint? And how hard would it have been to have just gotten out of the spa and go with Martha; Jack is such a tool. Can't wait for more.

LOL. Funny chapter. Jack's possessive is cute too. Maybe he'll stay away from Lily now that he's announced that Martha is HIS. lol. Can't wait for the next chappie Rach.

I really do not like that grl. She's going to end up causing prblems for Jack and Martha. Intentionally too.! She's a cow. Great chappie. Can't wait for more. Just hook Martha up with some guy. **** Jack off a bit.

I don't really like Jack that much. He just keeps screwing up, and hurting Martha. He can go away. And Martha can find someone else.

Lily's a dog. And Jack's still a jerk. Martha still needs to find a guy to **** Jack off. Great update Rach. Can't wait for the next one.

I hate Jack. Martha should do it with Henry. I think Jack would be pissed off if someone other than himself took Martha's innocence. And right now, i want Jack to be pissed. Martha needs some fun. Not fair.

Jack is such a man-whore. Can't even keep it in his pants for longer than 5 seconds. Geez. Martha needs to find a hot guy there, and ditch Jack for a while. See how he likes it. Jerk LOL. Can't wait for more.

I do not like that girl. And i dont want Jack seeing her when he gets back. He belongs to Martha. Geez, when are they gonna do it? They both want too; but just haven't realised yet. lol. Can't wait for another update.

Lol. Martha is like a little girl. Ha Ha. Jack needs to give her a taste of something, um, adult. LOL. HavEn't met Laurie, but already, i dont like her. Can't wait for the next update.

Wee hee. Woo hoo. An update. So exciting. LOL. Love it, but you already know that Rach. They need to hook up. Right now. Tasha can **** off.