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I can't breathe. You're going away and we wont be getting updates. No fair. LOL. I loved that chappie. Martha and Jack need to hurry and hook up though. LOL.

I think im in love with this fic. It's just so cute. Lol. I think i say that everytime. Cant wait for another update.

Aww, cute. If only they'd kept going. LOL. Can;t wait for more.

Lol. This is funny. Martha shouldn't be going on a date with this toher guy. She should be staying at home with Jaxk. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh my gosh. Poor Jacky. I hope he gets out of this alive. Poor Martha. She is heartbroken. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this. It's just so cute and fun. I'm glad we're not getting anything too dramatic.

This is all just so cute. I love a cute fic. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Awwwww, i love this so much already. It' s so sweet and cute. Great start Rach.

Oh, i loved it. That was so sweet. Aww, a little baby Holden. So cute. Great fic Rach. Well, except the first horrid part with Martha and Hugh. LOL. Can't wait to read a new fic.

Oh bum. One more chapter and it's over. I'm sad. Hope there's another one coming.

Just caught up with the last two chapters. Very good. I love Jack. I guess this is coming to an end soon. I hope you have another one in the works. lol.

Aww, that was lovely. Sucked in Hugh. I dont like you.

I hope Martha makes it. I dont care if Hugh dies. He's a creep.

Well, Hugh needs to die. He's a scumbag. But dont hurt Martha. She needs to live, so she can be with Jack.

Hugh is so freaking disgusting. He makes me shudder. Eww. Save her Jack. hurry up.

Well, it had better be good news. Jack needs to find her before that nutcase goes totally nutty. Looking forward to the next update.