I did, very much, and I am sure that those who keep coming back to read it like it very much as well.
In this chapter I particularly liked how you you got inside the mind of four year old Kim, seeing the world and his father through his eyes, his confusion and his attempts to make sense of his fathers behaviour. Barry's feeling that he should not fall in love again, did not deserve to perhaps, was also well drawn and clearly described. I know you have said you find him hard to writ for, but I think you are doing just fine with him, more than fine in fact. The chapters you write are always worth the wait so I am sure that the next one when ever it comes will be. I hope you have a good holiday and are going somewhere really exciting.