Perry

Floss! You're confused? Ok let me help you, here is a list of suspects and I think it's safe to say that at least one of them is the killer: Andrew Shepherd: Been missing for half the fic, angry with Logan before his murder but doesn't know half the victims. Lucas Holden: Knew all victims personally apart from Logan who is the identical brother of his crush. But it's sweet adorable Lucas Holden. Colby Wilkins-Dean: Although sweet as pie, he's also secretive and mysterious which is half the reason why he's so sexy. But he's known and trusted by the locals, he's also the Surf Club's biggest star does he have time for mass murder? Candy Shepherd: Pissed off with her brother before his death, pissed off with Lily before her death, didn't particularly like Belle, knew about crazy Floss but how would she know Dean? Greg Swales: Abusive bastard with a bad temper but how many, if any of the victims did he know? Charlie McKinnon: When medicated he's shy, sweet and totally harmless but when he is off his meds he could be quite the scary little psycho, but he has been a little pre-occupied with Roo and the whole being abused thing? Tabby Edwards: She said she just arrived but do we know that for sure? She wouldn't know Belle, Dean or Floss and is also Roo's bestfriend since they were babies. Eve Jacobsen: She's died twice and has a history of murders in Summer Bay, she has also never killed a celebrity in the Bay. Then again she blew up in the barn and this fic isn't written by Oxidizer

^ I was unneccessarily critical, the writing was good, it was just as I said, a little unbelievable giving the circumstance. Don't go thinking it wasn't good and dont think that I don't think it was good because I think its brilliant.

I posted at HAAC about the poem but I didn't read the oneshot until now so my comments are on that, although I did enjoy it... I was a little dissapointed, don't get me wrong it was good it's just I don't believe Kim and Robbie would act like that just after his mother died but in your defence you did have comments like this: We all know there's something going on with Rob and Kim but I really hoped that Kim was not the person to take advantage of an upset Robbie, esp, seeing how he's there with Robbie's sister and Kim's son. Another thing, I wouldn't believe for a second that they'll give Robbie (who always says the wrong things at the wrong times) the job of writing the eulogy if anything they'll give that job to Tony and Lucas or as stated in the fic, Scott. Look at me going on about what wouldn't happen it's FANfiction. Can you believe the guy who wrote Tony as an evil homophobic asshole is telling you how to write Robbie and Kim? I guess your fics are always that good I forget that sometimes it is fan fiction and when things happen that shouldn't I'm like 'hang on that's out of character'. Ignore my comment.... Good work!

It's ok I'm sure he wasn't far from Luc's thoughts... This would make a great play you should turn it into a play.

Read it again because I love it so much... Big night with Robbie and Kim? Does Mattie know? Was Ric involved?

^ Yes it is!

To leave my Charlie alone!!!

I think it's Feb 18th if it isn't its pretty close to it... Also Happy Birthday to Mark Furze for tomorrow!!!

I don't like the sounds of that... Don't hurt Charlie!

How could I forget Wheeler??? Oh you so have to make Charlie violent... Just don't let anything bad happen to him!

LMFAO! I didn't take you for a Captain Planet fan... It is my ringtone at the moment so I thought it must be Candy's as well... I can't believe you remember their names... I can remember Captain Planet had green skin or was that blue? I think I got a little carried away with Ric and Lucas as well but oh well... I'll just after work extra hard next chapter to make it believable. I was quite proud of myself with the Charlie stuff... He really should of taken his medication earlier... The medicated Charlie would of ran off and cried but this Charlie has attitude and I love him more! Oh and Of course it was ;)

Oh he so would... For Kim, that boy would do anything for Kim! So you got the little homage... Mine wasn't as steamy as yours though!

Yes but the time he spent wasn't pointless it was actually pretty crucial... Yeah... There's a good reason for that!

It's definetly the best written.

That was so great... I loved every moment of it... The interractions between every character was so right although I was hoping for a kim/Lucas affair but being the dedicated Rim fan that you are... I wasn't counting on it... i can't believe it took me this long to read it. Well done.

Lucas and Ric... Oh you said straight... My mistake sorry! Thanks for that Jem you brought my 2 loves (man2man love scenes & Buffy) together in one terrific Fic... Can I marry you? No? Oh well back to writing Ricas fics.

Thanks Al, the Robbie and Kim thing is this: Robbie and Kim... Long before Ricas there was Rim, Jem got it in all our heads that Robbie and Kim were a couple. Ricas have more UST though

BTW was Kim getting Jack drunk for any reason? . Because they were having a bloke conversation over beers but if you want to interpret it another way you can... Just don't forget about Robbie!

Yes I was about to just put Jack's mate just for you but thought the same thing you did... We must me tellepathically connected or something!

The thing is I had nothing planned after Luc agreeing to tell his family and then when people thought that there was going to be more and wanted to read what the familys reaction would be I re-read it and decided that I couldn't end it there. The rule on short stories is: You put a man up a tree... you throw stones at him and then you let him down again... well the man was up a tree and a stone was thrown but I needed more stones and I also needed for the man to come down. I had to plan what should happen next... I decided to bring Henry back so Luc could have someone to be jealous of and taking his place in the family... I then decided that they needed to have someone unhappy with the relationship otherwise there wasn't enough conflict and I think the endings perfect... Its a new beginning and I'm sure Sally wouldn't have a problem with them sharing a room... I mean there isn't any other rooms available in that house

Wow dirty minds... I hope everyone realises I'm not trying to encourage this (But get's great mental images so doesn't mind).