Perry

I get what you were trying to say I just don't like the way it is said.

What are they doing to Angelo? I was really enjoying his character and loved how he was trying it on with Charlie and the whole "Lovo" thing. And then they go and change him so he can be the "Perfect man" for Belle to be with even though it was obvious she was to be with Aden and now... Damn writers!

The whole Roman and Martha thing seems like a natural fit although i don't see how the writers are going to approach that!...but thats just what i think anyway, please don't take offence its just an opinion Well I agree they have no chemistry which is funny because they are dating in real life, the relationship has seemed forced since day 1 and I'm glad they are addressing this in the storyline. Maybe they can work together in the future but at the moment I can't see it. BUt I am enjoying watching Charlie's heart break before my eyes.

Daniel Lissing, he was also Pizza Dougie and an Australian Idol reject and his stepbrother is a *&^%*&^ %^&*

That was brilliantly written and a lot of thought went into it. I enjoyed it immensely. I loved how you wrote all the main characters, Geoff's character changed a lot but given the time between now and when the fic is set and given the circumstances of where his character is at that time meant that it was believable. I enjoyed how you wrote the characters as adults dealing with a situation as honestly and intensely as it should be written, Home and Away even has that trouble. I was a little unsure about how Matilda said she'll be a bridesmaid at the wedding but in an earlier chapter she apologized for not turning up to the wedding as she had too much on. Although not necessarily a mistake if it was written in that she missed the wedding even though she was going to be a bridesmaid maybe you could have added something more to it, like Belle's feelings about her bridesmaid and one of her best friend's not being there. Why is Vinnie back? Although there was that Patterson-Baker-Patterson joke, I didn't feel that Vinnie being back added anything to the story. I guess you just had it to show that time passes and things happen in that time. I guess it is probably because Vinnie is my favourite character ever and to have his return be small is upsetting. Probably my problem more than it is yours. Perhaps if you added a sub-plot or a conversation between Vinnie and Aden about Vinnie living a double life for a time and relating it to Aden not being true to himself could have made it work. I did like the ending and how the characters loved each other so much that they will be willing to let each other go is a brilliant way to end things. I loved how you left it up in the air for Aden to return to Geoff, I feel a lot of readers missed the point and it was an ending to Belle and Aden's relationship. It's in the title, they can't go back to what they had and because of this they had to move on. It was a brilliant choice of title too. Not necessarily a brilliant song but it did work well with the story. All in all, it was a brilliant read. A couple of things to think about in the future but you are a terrific writer and I am looking forward to reading your work in future. Edit: I was reading the wrong page it turns out the readers do understand the ending. My mistake guys

Sorry bit of a delay but thanks very much for that.

Well I imlplied that he was his son but wheather he was or not it's up to the reader decide and I left it very vague on purpose... Maybe he had a son name Greg that died. I left it for you to interpret it whichever way you wanted to but...

Thanks very much Dan, I was pretty sure it was. Irene needs to mention her grandchildren more often, or recieve visits from them!

Does anybody know the names of Finlay's children? I think the baby Irene gave birth too was Paul but I'm not a hundred per cent on it and I don't know the name of the other child or can't remember if it was a boy or a girl or even if it was mentioned. Thanks in advance.

I kind of like the sounds of this game... And i know there's a thousand of them already but I like the idea of Shoot, shag and marry.

Perfect Ending for a perfect fic... Perfect ending for Elbo. I loved Gaden's cameo too.

JEM! Firstly, I would have to say I'm a HUGE fan of this FIC you have TWO amazing ORIGINAL charatcers so I don't want any crap about "ISSUES with ORIGINAL characters" okay? Secondly, I have to say I'm a HUGE ElBo fan as well. Kissing COusins that aren't really cousins or are they??? WHich brings me to my next point- just a little criticism... I loved how you established Arcie as Bo and I loved why he is called Bo and when he was revealed to be Archie it was a shock for me BUT you didn't have to call him Archie from then on- He likes to be called Bo - I like him being called Bo. Sorry for the nitpick Jemima but something to think about in future Jemima.

Can't wait for more

Hey, that's not always how my fics end. One ended with Robbie and Kim deciding to have a baby... Hey, that's not always how my fics end. One ended with Robbie and Kim deciding to have a baby... And if you haven't noticed usually her fics start with them together as well. I think you were joking but just in case you weren’t I’ll reiterate. The above ideas were just examples. For instance, let’s take emmasi’s fic about Robbie and Kim having ended by them deciding to have a baby. This could be the Well if you increase the size and bold the text my jokingly tone I had inteded disappears... Maybe next time I'll clarify with smilies, everyone loves smilies.. And then I'll change the colour to Rainbow... Everyone loves rainbows (Except certain H&A producers)

Hey, that's not always how my fics end. One ended with Robbie and Kim deciding to have a baby... And if you haven't noticed usually her fics start with them together as well.