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Great edition. I can tell lots of hard work went into it. Thanks.

Nope. What kind of genre is it? Sci-fi... comedy..?

Wanted. Pretty damn good! A bit gruesome.. but good.

Wow.. You really made me tear up. And get goose bumps. I was fine.. until the rapist guy said "But she wasn’t alone. There was a man walking next to her". That idea is so.. nice. You're making me want to cry just thinking about it. It's nice to think that if someone has died, they're still there when you need them. Good one-shot.

Thanks guys. It's sad (and very understandable) that I've lost quite a few readers along the way, but I'm glad that at least some of you were here for the finale. You deserve a lot of chocolate for hanging in there! Thanks again, it's been fun. Keep J&M-ing.

Yea... I think he may have gone a little.. loopy because he killed his Dad, and somehow blamed Chas? Maybe? I think I read somewhere that he'd have to get over that in order to make it work again. I hope he does. I loved them.

Stardust - not too shabby.

Hey guys.. wondering what anyone knew about the storyline of Chas and Carl? I've tried to use the tinternet, but I've come up with nothing. Only some very random and unhelpful clips on youtube. I know that they used to be together (maybe engaged for 3 years?) and they fell out A LOT. Then Carl's dad bribed her not to marry him, so she took it ( scandal) and then something happened and Carl killed his dad. They got back together I think.. then Carl hated her guts for some unknown reason. And then I really have no idea. Could anyone shed some light?

Thanks for the comments. Glad there's still some JM fans amongst the "Adelle" madness!

Lol! I put a summary of the fic so far a couple of posts above the chapter if you're interested. It contains the necessary knowledge without having to waste your life on re-reading other chapters

Re-read it. If it's a majorly long fic, then perhaps read the last 5 chapters, and if that's not working for you, the last 10. If you're reading it and you get into it, then as all readers do, you'll get ideas on what should happen next. Except you're the reader with the power!

He does that? I honestly didn't notice. I just made it up. Now who looks like a freak!? Thanks about the exams, I'll be needing it. Thanks valli and Rachel for the great comments. But.. Valli, what do you mean by HM? Oh and Valli.. I'm not too happy about your sig: Paul: I've dated a lot of blondes, but I think prefer brunettes. I can see myself marrying a brunette! Yay! I'm a brunette! Go brunettes! Hmm, but let us not forget - he hasn't met this blonde.

Awww! Very cute! I could really imagine it happening! I loved the "phoning Alf" bit. Great fic. Nice to read something completed by you! (for a change. ) Heh.

Awww very cute fic! I love the banter between JM. And I also love the fact i'm reading a fic from Jacksthehottest and it isn't taking months to update between each chapter! Update soon.

Well, honestly I'm finding it a little difficult remembering where the hell I was. I've figured it out-ish, but I have well and truly forgotten where I was going to go with it. All I can remember was that one of my preferred endings was actually evilly sad. Because I just found it funny that Jack went through all that crap to die in the end. However, due to the ridiculously long break I've had and the fact that I'm amazed at the loyalty of you, my people, my readers, then I may tweak the ending. After all... I have a chance of completely swapping directions. I am open to bribes.

Ask. Assistance. Please. Ooh yea, the system. Hang on a jiffy, I'll edit this post with the form in a sec... EDIT: Title of Story: Leave a Message Type of Story: One shot The Story's rating: G Main Characters: Jack and Martha Does it contain spoilers: No What type of proof reader would you like: Someone who is good with tenses. (past tense, future tense) because that is my major weakness. Also someone with quite a good vocab (for my repeating words) and sentence structure technique. I over-do it sometimes with the comma's. Oh, and someone to tell me their true feelings about it. "Too soppy" will most probably be one of the comments made. I'm not used to the fluffy JM fics anymore, so I guess I've gone a little over the top when I'm writing one.

Lol! Well, I guess I best give the people what they want. No promises though. Don't expect anything soon, consistent or good. Else you'll be gravely disappointed.

Lol! I didn't think anyone would even remember this fic! I forgot the name of it for a while tbh Hypothetically.. if I updated this fic who would even read it?

You killed her? Wow, you're mean. Awww, a sad one shot.. but a good one! I liked how you began with her being cold and wanting his arms to warm her up.. and in the end he had his arms wrapped around her to warm her up. That was pretty sweet. Well done!

Oh, I have got another subject to bring up... Epilogues and Prologues. I don't really get them. What is the point, and when do you think they're most effective?

I think I'm probably the opposite to that. Ideally, I'd like to have a title to begin with... but if I did I'd feel like I'd have to stick to that title instead of the actual fic, and I'd end up just getting in a mess while I tried to stick with the meaning of the title instead of developing the story. So yea, title's just get in my way to begin with. But I'm really going to try your method, ILM. I think it's a really good idea to have the title involve something from the end of the fic. The title's the first thing you read of a fic, and if it ties in with the end... well I think that's really powerful. I like that idea. And I loved those title's you mentioned. Especially Sally Called!.