so I've just read through this whole thing and its amazing.
The way you describe Belle and Matilda's feelings is just so beautiful, and how you've gradually bought Aden, Lucas, Cassie and Ric back into the fic, there arn't many of those around atm, mostly Adelle, although Im not complaining its great so see something different
I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this fic, and I noticed that in your signature, you are resuming "Just a flicker of hope"
I will certainly be reading it!