Jen

Awesome as always Jess! I'm really getting into 'Don't Forget about Me'. I love the contrasting characters and the way you write so you can read what they are thinking. Can't wait for more. Also, 'That Endless Summer' is great too. 4 teenagers out on their own for the first time, that can only spell trouble. Hope the drama picks up soon and keep up the good work.

I'm finally up to date on both of the fics. 'Don't Forget About Me' is really good. I'm really liking all the different points of view and the very extreme characters. I get slightly confused occassionally forgetting whose P.O.V I'm reading in, but maybe that's only me. Hope you can update both soon.

Hey Jess! Great to see you've kept writing. I love That Endless Summer. Can't wait til the action picks up a bit but the way you create the scenes is awesome. I haven't got around to reading Don't Forget About Me but I will Keep up the great work!

Wow Jess! The epilogue was great. I think it brought summer to a close perfectly. Your whole fic was absolutely awesome and I have enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to read more of your work. I'm sure it will be the same great standard. Can't believe summer is over but it was definitely a fitting end. Great job!! Jen.

Brilliant Jess! Don't worry, you didn't disappoint in the least. I can't believe there is only the epilogue to go! I can't wait to read it...but when I do that means Summer is over...so I don't want to read it, but I do, if you know what I mean. You should definitely keep writing once it is complete. ~ Jen.

Still fantastic as always! Can't believe it's nearly finished. Sound track idea: Awesome! Glad I could help. Keep up the great writing. Hope to be able to read more soon.

Really great Jess! Very dramatic and emotional. Using all of the different points of view worked really well in this last chapter. The whole morning after thing really reminded me of the new Veronica's song, "When it all falls apart", have you heard it? I there's a bit in it going, "And did I mention, I drank too much, I'm so hung over, Out of touch..." I'm trying to find a full version of the lyrics somewhere, but I can't find it at the moment. Anyway, the story is really going great. I'm a bit upset that Luke and Mattie broke up but your description of all of the scenes is very good. Hope you update soon.

Still great Jess! I had 3 chapters to catch up on but it was so totally worth it. I'm loving where you take this story and all the characters. The possibilities are endless (especially with your writing talent)...

Wow! Brilliant Jess. Can't wait for another update. I like how you are changing the point of view of the story between all the characters. I'm not finding it confusing and there is definitely enough drama.

Just finished reading chapter 2 and it was awesome! Please continue to write.

Wow! I've just read the beginning of your fanfic and it's really good. I love it! I like how you are using Matilda's point of view and you have a great way of writing. Please update soon as I will definitely continue to read.

Great story. All the emotions from the episode are there and they reflect what actually happened.

*chin hands* I think I like Rabbit more now, than when she was on the show. She has this right amount of snark and sass, but is still innocent and has a youthful feel . I'm so intrigued by where you are going to take this story.