maccaz

Good work.

[sarcasm] Real nice woman, that Christine... [/sarcasm] However, that was a realistic reaction, given what we know about her, and you wrote it very well. Can't wait for more.

Good chapter. Glad Belle found the courage to show Aden the scar. Update soon.

Great chapter. Update ASAP.

Good start. Please continue.

To quote McDonalds - I'm lovin' it! Update soon.

*hums the Jaws theme under breath* Update soon.

Good start. Please continue.

Good chapter. Jess and Ric = Update ASAP.

Hilarious chapter! Update soon.

This is a brilliant one shot. I can see why it won the FF challenge.

I got that from an episode of "The Simpsons" - after his team wins the SuperBowl a football player says "I'm going to Disneyland!"

They have not had sex yet.

Great chapter. Update ASAP.

I could do a prequel. Everybody loves prequels...right??

Good work. How many chapters do you plan on doing?

Belle really needs to let someone in soon. Or she'll end up destroying herself. I can see it now. Update ASAP.

Kelli's back?! Just what we need. Update soon.

Good start. The effect the kidnapping had on Belle is very realistically portrayed. Sad to read it, though. Hope you update soon.

Poor Belle - she feels responsible. Update soon.