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I stick by my theory that she is the only half-way decent cop in the entire town, is it wrong that i prefur our guesties (Julie as well) over some of the regulars? I know some people have been a bit iffy on the whole pregnancy issue but it's better then giving her a promotion so we never get to see her again.

Very interesting, At Nicole, even in AU worlds she's still a princess.

It seems Nicole's jealousy has not disapated, she was pretty quick to keep Geoff from going over to Melody and Geoff was pretty cut up about it, i think maybe she has a reason to worry? It might just be me. Loved the kiss in the Diner and the scene with her mum

It might have only been a small thing but in Tuesday's episode, going to Belle with chocolates and dvd's but without (as someone mentioned) pity, was a surprising development in Nicole for me. As was her going after Melody last Friday, i'm not sure where this sudden maturity has come from, either Geoff or the OC incident but it's a much better look for Nicole. She can still be a princess but i always loved her for that anyway, so its all good.

I used to adore CaR, they were sweet, but right now i think Charlie deserves so much better. I get the feeling every time she apologises it seemes like she has to because if she doesn't she'll loose Roman, I can't see him ever apologising when they have fights, even when he's in the worng. She crawls back to him far to easily.

I to love the fact the attraction was there from the start and yet it didn't become a major storyline for months afterwards, it was built up from when Geoff was with Melody and has progressed slowly from the thing with the school camp and then Elliot coming into it. I think the halloween episode was a perfect example of how both of them have changed by being together, old, judgemental Geoff would have blown up at Nicole for spilling their secret instead he just got slightly annoyed and old defensive Nicole would have reveled in the pain she had caused Melody instead of going after her and trying to fix it. Normally i dislike couples that are on and off like a light switch, but for some reason with this pairing it didn't annoy me so much, maybe becuase they had genuine reasons and issues for their make-up's/break-up's. But i do forsee it's not going to get much better, Nicole and Geoff are as different as that old saying, and as long as they are together they're going to clash. I actually think that's what makes them different form the usual soap cliched paring of the badgirl/goodboy, normally they are both completely changed by the start of the paring and Nicole would have been reformed by now and Geoff would be daring and more lenient with his beliefs.

Melody's always had an air of superiority to me, she's always seemed like a selfish, judgemental person pretending to be a humble, modest christian. I think she's always looked down on people who disagree with her or more importantly arn't of her religion, the way she spoke to Nicole at the halloween party kind of proves it, "Someone like you." While I relaise she was refurring more to just the fact Nicole isn't christian it's just always been the immpression i have got, like she and those like her (Geoff) were so much better than anyone else. That said, I do think Celeste is doing a great job, otherwise i wouldn't dislike her so much I would say i want her character to revert back to her old self pre- this whole triangle fiasco, but clingy, desperate Melody wasn't much better so there's not much that can be done.

I love all colouring and the croppings on the Geoff and Nicole ones. Nice job.

Thanks guys, really appreciate all the comments. Aden doesn't know about the baby yet. And the Nicole thing isn't really going anywhere it's just a refrence to somehting that happened in my other story 'Can't stand from falling down.' so don't worry if your confused. Next update should be sooner then the last one.

Thanks guys, sorry about not updating, give it till tuesday or wednesday, busy time of year.

Should be one on Monday night guys.

Nicole might have a bit more luck with Belle

Nice work, love the cropping's on the Martha and Nic/Aden ones. Good job

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. There should be an update a day, there's not to many chapters left, but everything should start to come together from here on in.

I loved that, very well written and very cute with all the mini-campbells and Nic/Geoff The very last paragraph was tense and a bit open-ended, i'm inclined to think Geoff didn't die, but i'm not sure, which is a perfect ending. Well done.