jenlee

Bit of random information needed for my fic as the chapter I had half done has been deleated due to it's suckyness. Just wondering your opinion on the most relaxing holiday places in Oz, or any kind of relaxing type places in Oz. For instance in NZ we have the thermal pools. Only place I really know anything about in Oz is Surfers so any help would be great as google is giving me nothing. Haha thanks

I'm writing as we speak and if things continue to go well there will be an update tomorrow night, possibly earlier

^Thanks I'm glad you all like it. With the whole admiting they wanted to be together bit, i figured when put in the situation where the person you love is leaving the country, these sort of feelings get admitted...if that makes sense. Plus it needed to go in now for future chapters. I hope it didn't seem too rushed though, I really tried to do things at a steady pace

Thanks everyone

Aww, you guys are sweet *blushes*

Soon I promise, hopefully tomorrow night, NZ time. I've had a bit of writers block as to how to go about the next chapter. I know what I want to do, I'm just having trouble getting it written. In the mean time I did post a short one shot so for anyone who didn't read it...Twenty Seven Bobby Pins

Awww, thatks guys. I'm glad you liked it

Just a quick thanks for all of your reviews, next chapter should be up tomorrow night

I just wanted to thank you guys for all your replies. Unfortunatly I'm sick with the flu real bad so won't be up-dating for a few days as I like to stay ahead with my writing but am not up to doing any writing. I know this is pretty slack seeing as I only just posted this fic but I will up-date ASAP

That was really great. You write beautifully and the story itself is really unique. Just really great work

This fic is so sweet. I love all the flashbacks. Update asap.

Aw thank you . I was worried everyone would hate it

That was really great, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the awesome work

I love it, it's so sad, update soon

So I need some random help for my fic. What kind of career can you guys see Aden having? I already have a Summer Bay career picked out but I need one that would mean he would have to leave the bay to study for it and actually do it. It also needs be something kind of extravagant, something that has OTT and expensive confernce/parties all over the country, maybe even the world. Random, I know but the story is basically done except for figuring out this one bit Any help would be great thanks

Cheers

Um, does anyone happen to know what number episodes Rocco was in? Or just his first and last episodes? Thanks

God, that was so good. It was just so raw and emotional. Really great fic and I'm so glad to have finally found a Roman story

That is the shorter one (obviously) that sort of gets straight to the point, the next one elaborates more. Thanks in advance for any help How about something in the middle? For example:- "The give me a reason to stay" She pleaded, thinking back over the time they had spent together. Was there any hope for them at all? "Tell me to stay and I will." She squeezed his hand until finally, he met her eyes with his own. Thanks, I really like that. Do you think I need the stuff about her familiy and friends or do you think readers will get why she would only stay for him? Or do you think I don't need to adress that at all? It would really depend on how you had approached her possibly leaving. Has she told her family/friends? If so then a comment from a family member to the effect of "Whatever you decide to do, we will always support you, you know that" Would address the issue without junking up (for want of a better way to phrase it) the emotional scene with her boyfriend/ex boyfriend. As long as there has been character and plot development about their relationship/break-up prior to this conversation, I think readers will understand why she would only stay for him. Thats the thing, I'm just going through the story, editing bits and pieces and this is in the prologue. However the rest of the story starts two years on and there are plenty on flashbacks throughout the fic so I think I will do what you said and add in a bit from a family member there and keep the prologue/scene with bf brief and non-junky lol. Thanks heaps, you've really helped and made me see a way to fix some things.

Romeo & Juliet...I can never turn down a young Leo lol

That is the shorter one (obviously) that sort of gets straight to the point, the next one elaborates more. Thanks in advance for any help How about something in the middle? For example:- "The give me a reason to stay" She pleaded, thinking back over the time they had spent together. Was there any hope for them at all? "Tell me to stay and I will." She squeezed his hand until finally, he met her eyes with his own. Thanks, I really like that. Do you think I need the stuff about her familiy and friends or do you think readers will get why she would only stay for him? Or do you think I don't need to adress that at all?

Just wondering if anyone has any theories on the 'less is more' saying when it comes to writing. I have two paragraphs that basically end the same way yet one has a lot more added to it. I don't particularly think it is needed but at the same time I could be wrong and it could be helpful to readers. I will post them and if anyone has any advice I would really appreciate it. That is the shorter one (obviously) that sort of gets straight to the point, the next one elaborates more. Thanks in advance for any help

No worries, hope it helps.

I don't know if this is what you are after or if it will helo at all, but how do you feel about Harry Potter fanfic? There is this one story on ff.net that has taught me a lot about writing description. Anyway this is the story if you are interested Story

Thanks