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I have absolutely LOVED reading this!!! I think the premise was fantastic, with writing Drew in the first person and a set time frame for his visit. I love how you portrayed his emotions and reactions to everyone in the bay and everything going on. Nothing seemed too OTT and seemed fitting for a more mature Drew. The ending was brilliant! I loved the way you had a final meeting between Drew, Belle and Aden. It felt like the story came to a proper close. I really enjoyed your writing all the way through as well! Thanks for supplying us with this wonderful story!

As if you could write anything other than amazing! Which btw it was!!!!!!! It was so sweet and adorable and cute, and i loved Mattie wanting to steal her! And Ric's slight fright that Mattie might want a baby too. Added an element of humour that made the whole scene feel so realistic. I love the way Aden is with them both! So adorable! Fantastic and AWWWWy chapter!!!!!! Can't wait for another update! But TOTALLY understand the business!

I think that was possibly the SWEETEST chapter you have ever written!!!!! Aden was so adorable with her!!!!!!!!! And then choosing the name! Not onlyl did you have me wearing the cheesiest grin and a constant 'awwwww' coming out of my mouth, i was practically melting off my chair at just how adorable and cute it was! I LOVE her name! And the way they chose the order and everything about it! It was so sweet how Belle suggested his mum's name, i love how you did that whole bit! So brilliant!!!!!!! Can't wait for more! Seriously LOVED that chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was fantastic! I loved Belle and Drew's reaction to each other. It was interesting that you didn't have more of a confrontation between Aden and Drew but i think it worked really well and showed how much they'd grown. But i did like that Drew questioned her after Aden had left, made it seem realistic. Can't wait for more!

Sorry i haven't commented before now, i haven't had the chance to read this and concentrate on it properly til now. The first thing i have to say is YAY! ADEN WAS RIGHT! IT'S A GIRL! Secondly: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the sweetest giving birth ever! Loved the description of the baby as perfect! I think the chapter was the perfect length as well. Thirdly: Just WOW to the whole chapter! Fourthly: LMAO at some of the things Belle and Aden were saying to each other during her labour! Soooo funny!!!!! AMAZING CHAPTER!!!! Can't wait for more! Hope you can update soon!

I LOVE this idea! The whole concept of Drew coming back is brilliant and i love how you're writing in first person. Very different to a lot of fanfics i've read. I can't wat to see where you're going to take this! Hope you can update soon!

Wow, that was brilliant! I loved the beginning, the way you wrote that was just incredible! And quite eery as well. That was just the cutest line, gave me a huge grin! I can't believe the baby's finally coming! You've handled all of this so well! I absolutely love this fic Taniya! Can't wait to see what happens once the baby's here! Hope you can update soon!

WOW!!!!! That was absolutely incredible, i actually had a single tear roll down my cheek once i finished reading that. That's the line that made me start tearing up. It was so amazing, this scene should so be in the show! I actually don't think they could do it better or even as well as you've just dealt with it. Everything the characters said made complete sense. I loved that Aden was determined not to apologise but they were both obviously really hurting. Brilliant! :D

I think that farewell was amazingly written! You could just tell what each one of them was feeling so well, you captured their emotions excellently! I LOVED IT! The start was hilarious with Aden painting her toe nails, i literally laughed properly out loud! Hope you can update soon! It's always worth the wait, i love it!

I loved all the different combinations of the characters in this chapter! And i really like where all the plots are headed. Update soon!

I proper LOL at the spider!!!!!!!!!! It was hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved every bit of that chapter! Was so sweet!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!

O.M.G.!!!!!!!!!!! I LURVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! (As i'm sure you knew I would! ;) ) Belle's hormones were so funny! Bless her! It must be hard with someone like Aden walking around! I loved her chat with Mattie, everything about this chapter was just so funny! Loved Ric walking in! Belle letting Matilda feeling the baby kick was so sweet! Loved it! Can't wait for another update! I hope it's soon!

I've really liked these last couple of chapters, i like what you've done with Geoff and Melody. Can't wait to see what Tam wants to talk to Aden about!

That was a really funny slogan but i'm not surprised Belle reacted like that! It was hilarious how you got her to tell him he was sleeping on the couch, LOVED IT!!! Brilliant update as usual! I loved the scene in the restaurant, i really felt for Belle and Aden when Amanda was being like that. Update soon! Can't wait!

That was sooooooooooo LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You write the humour in so well!!!! It's soo witty!!!!!!! And so fun to read, i just smile all the time at their banter! I absolutely loved that scene in the bathroom, how you thought of doing it like that was amazing, i don't know how you thought of that... (well i do really, ) It just made me melt though, they were both so cute and then there was a hint of racy fluff making it perfect!!!! Brilliant chapter!!!! Hope you can update soon!

Aw, that was so sweet! Loved the Aden/Jai talk! Update soon! I really love this! It's so fluffy and adorable!!!!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was fantastic!!!!!!! I absolutely loved it!!!!! The start was perfect with Drew calling her, it was a nice touch! Then Aden's present was gorgeous!!!!!! Sooooo sweet!!!!!!!! And the teddy bear! I loved how you had Belle kind of behaving like a child with carrying around her present all day! Aden was so adorable too!!!!! Loved it all!!!!!!! Hope you can update soon, but i understand how busy life can be!

That was brilliant! I thought it might be something like that when she wouldn't stop crying. Wonder what's wrong with her though??? Lovely update as always! Can't wait for the next one!

AW!!!!!!!!! Sorry i haven't commented in a while, i haven't had a chance. The last few chapters have been fantastic!!!! I really love reading this story! It's so like a breath of fresh air! It's going to be so cute to see how you show them getting used to Belle being pregnant and having a baby and everything! I can't wait!!!! Really loved that, and how they found out. I also think you're a fantastic writer! And so good at updating regularly so thanks loads!!!!! Hope you can update soon again!!!

Thanks very much! I'd love to, but unfortunately i already have two fics on here that i'm struggling to update with being so busy at uni, so i don't think there's a very strong chance of it happening.

Aw, i've loved the last few chapters! They're so sweet! The way they chose to let everyone know about the wedding was so adorable! I loved it!!!! Them talking about the wedding and everything! And then Aden's scene with Meg, always good! And his concern for Belle! I just loved it all! Hope you can update soon!!!!

I've been reading this chapter on and off all day, cos i kept having to go out and do things and well, i had other things on my mind... Amazing chapter!!!!!!! Loved it! It's so nice for not only them to have their banter back, but for us to have it back as well! I love how you're describing Aden's pain and his stubbornness, it fits in so well with his personality, and the bits where you included things about the baby were so cute!!!!!!! Loved it all! Hope you can update soon!

Wow! That was the most awesome way to end the chapter! I've loved the last few! That proposal was the sweetest thing ever! But what's wrong with Belle? I think you're writing it brilliantly though! Can't wait for another update! I love this fic!

Sorry i haven't commented before now, i've just been so busy! Can i just start with YAY!!!!!!!!! Thank God, he's awake!!!! It was so sweet how he was squeezing her hand to respond to her! The bits before that were great too, with Belle not knowing what was going on, but just determined to see him! The bit with Geoff at the start was nice too! I love how you manage to add that edge of humour to it, but you could still Belle wasn't wholly into it, as she had other things on her mind. Incredible writing as always! Hope you can update soon! I can't wait! When can i ever?!?!?

Great writing as always! I liked the Aden and Tam meeting. And i really liked the way Aden explained what happened to Nicole, was kind of funny. Update soon! I really like this fic!