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I think that was my favourite chapter so far! The Aden/Ruby scene was sweet and meaningful, i do really like their relationship. Belle looking through the photos and contemplating her family history was really nice to see, especially the bit about her grandmother, and i like how she's trying to get used to saying 'our dad'. Geoff and Nicole's scene was great. It felt really in character, and i love the way they both reacted to everything. Great job! Can't wait for another update!

Sorry i didn't comment last night, i was too tired and haven't had a chance today. Excellent chapter once again!!!! And this is why i LOVE your writing!!!! I know it's not a significant part of the chapter or anything but you didn't have to write it in, it just makes it so much more realistic which is what i love about reading this! As for the chapter, i loved all the Drew/Belle interaction and him telling her about the party was funny. It's nice that Belle's just gonna relax with her friends for the evening but the phone call was so sweet!!!! Can't wait for another update! SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love the idea that Belle needed to be forgiven by someone, i could see that. It was great that it was God and then Geoff's prayer was really lovely. I can see Ruby and Aden becoming quite an interesting. I'm really looking forward with where you take them. Update soon! I'm really enjoying this fic!

It was AMAZING!!!!! And definitely didn't drag on! I loved the humour and fluff throughout! I think you've done a fantastic job of portraying how Justin and Aden's relationship has grown, it definitely seems they are growing naturally closer. That last scene with Aden and Belle was sooooooo cute!!!!!!!!! The way they just couldn't say goodbye to each other, it was absolutely adorable!!!!!!!!! I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!! You know the one thing though, i actually want some angst... when you write it, i miss fluff, when you write fluff, i miss angst. I'm impossible! No, but seriously it is awesome either way! Any plans for any angst soon...????? I hope you can update again soon too!!!

I quite like the idea of Aden and Ruby together, it makes things interesting. I'm glad he thinks he might be able to move on at least. Belle's pregnancy is gonna get interesting, especially when Aden finds out... Update soon!

I loved that! Belle's perspective made it much more interesting. I hope you write more cos this was sweet and lovely. I love reading these kind of one shots.

I thought it was great!!! Very interesting for a one shot. I hope you do write a sequel, i would love to read it!

AW!!!!!!!!!!!! The fluff was fantastic!!!!!!!! Reminded me a bit of today's ep in parts, it was so cute. You sure know how to build up the tension! I don't know why but something about this uni thing souds ominous... you better not do anything bad to either of them! Great update as usual! Can't wait for another! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Great chapter! I loved Aden's reactions to everyone, it was so sad. His and Ruby's talk was great, i love seeing him interact with other characters! I wonder what Belle needs to tell Irene and Amanda.... Update soon!

I thought it was a great chapter once again, and loved the interruptions but the idea of Annie and Jai getting married is so creepy to me. I don't like them singularly or as a couple on haa anyway but i guess i'll have to see where you take it. I don't really know if i'm meant to like them or not cos i know they're just trying to fit the story into the recquirements so it makes sense in that respect. Anyway, it was great, update soon!

It was great!!! LOVED the scene with Irene and Belle! we haven't had one of those in ages! And then the Justin/Belle scene was great, felt like a few issues got resolved but you've kept the character of Justin the way you portrayed him at the very start which i think is fantastic! The scene at the start with Aden was great too, it's scenes like that, which are small and just show how caring and wonderful Aden is, that put a ridiculous grin on my face! Can't wait for another update!!!!!! SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great chapter! I'm glad that Aden and Belle have some sense of hope now. Geoff and Nicole were really interesting, i liked what Nicole said at the end about Geoff being the only one she'd literally slept with. It was sweet. The bits where Geoff was uncomfortable were funny too. I like your promptness too! lol

AW!!!!!!!!!! It was fantastic!!!!!!! I loved them just being themselves with all the light teasing and kind of 'playing house' with the cooking. I know they do actually live in a house and are married, and have a baby on the way i just couldn't think of a better way to put it. I love that Aden was playing on the xbox for some reason! And Belle with the chocolate yet again!!! The rainbow thing was so sweet too! I felt for sure you were about to give us racy fluff several times but alas in went no further than absolute teasing, adorableness! (which was great anyway!) Can't wait for more! Update soon!!!!!!!!

AW! You're writing this so perfectly! I love how you're making everyone act, it seems really realistic! Update soon!

Great update! Very funny as usual! Loved all the interruptions!!! Update soon!

I LOVED this chapter!!!!!! Mattie and Belle's talk was awesome!!!! Especially the 'girl talk'! I loved how you brought Justin into that bit as well. I'm glad Justin got to see their house, it was kind of sad that Aden has got all this stuff and Justin doens't really have anything, i liked how you did that with the pictures. The banter between Aden and Belle was so sweet!!! Especially the chocolate and the cheesecake thing! Really made me giggle!!! I really like when Justin sees Aden and Belle together for some reason, i just love how you write it. I really want some more of Justin/Aden/Belle scenes. Can't wait for another update!!! SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

Great chapter! It's good that Aden talked to Amanda and i love how he was worried about what his father had done. I liked the ending greeting between Aden and Belle. Update soon!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!! RACY FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was so teasing! And fantastic!!!! LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!! This was such a nice chapter, so sweet and natural, i loved their talking and teasing and just generally being themselves around each other again!!!! So GOOD!!!!!!!! Love him biting her ear and then the mood swings!! Awesome chapter!!!!!!!! Can't wait for another update!!!!!!!!! SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVED drunk Belle, everything she said just made it so much sadder somehow. I love that it was Morag Aden went to stay with, it was nice of Nicole to go with him, i liked how she handled Ross helpfully as well, you wrote him great. I also loved the talk between Aden and Morag at the end, it was sad and insightful. Excellent writing once again! can't wait for the next update!

Great chapter! Who's Aden going to stay with??? I'm intrigued! Update soon!

LOVED that chapter!!!! I love that Aden and Belle are getting back to that sweet old banter! It's so well written how you built up the tension in their relationship and resolved it gradually, takes a very skilled writer to be able to do that so it's lucky you are one!!!! The talk between Justin and Aden was perfect!!! Just the right amount of seriousness and light humour. I seriously love the character you've created for Justin! If he ever came back in the show, i'd want him to be like this! I as well loved Belle's text, was so cute how she said 'we're'! Love her cravings and mood swings you add in subtly. Wonderful chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!

A bit of that just reminded me of the virgin suicides... Great chapter once again! I can see that being the kind of thing Aden would do to Nicole but i liked their talk at the end. Belle leaving for a bit sounds like a good idea but i really feel for them, it must be so horribe. Update soon!

Wow, i seriously loved that chapter! especially the last scene, it was so sad that they didn't know how they felt or what was right. You wrote the way they were feeling so well!!! Update soon!

That was so sad... really well written though! I thought she was being a bit harsh to Amanda, not like there was anything she could do, but i understand why she reacted that way. Update soon!