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wrongturntaken

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  1. Don't worry, you are WELL worth the wait!!! Good luck, it's very hard when that muse isn't there... Looking forward to it whenever it shall be!
  2. Wow! That was a great scene! I love how you wrote it! I really hadn't even considered there might have been a baby involved, it's so sad. Geoff and Nicole should be interesting now. Can't wait for the next update! Soon!
  3. I agree with everyone else! Definitely continue! You are a really good writer and i think the concept of this story is great! I don't think anything written is ever worthless even if its bad (which yours definitely ISN'T!) because i still think it's helpful to the writer to have written it if you get me? I know that, from a writer's perspective, it really helps me to fit overflowing emotions that i have in my normal life onto paper, and make something real out of them to deal with. I love that feeling, and i know that having people read your stuff and tell you what it's like helps with that too. So in conclusion, i think you should keep writing, for yourself just as much as anyone of us.
  4. LOVED IT! The beginning scene with Aden and Belle was perfect! I really love the character you've created for Justin! It works so well! Love that you brought Amanda in to it! Update soon! Can't wait!!!
  5. I read both parts of the last chapter about five times! They're so good! I seriously can't wait for you next update! Is it going to be tonight?
  6. Great chapter! It was so sweet and sad! Yay, they got back together, i think you did that perfectly, it felt right! Update soon!
  7. Great chapter! I can't believe Geoff said yes, what an idiot!!! Love the way you have Aden and Belle talking again. Update soon!
  8. Awesome chapter! I LOVED that ending! The phone call was perfect! I liked Belle and Geoff's chat as well, it was quite sad. Can't wait for more! Update soon!
  9. WOW! That was amazing!!!!!!! The reactions were perfect! I loved how you had Aden taking care of her but also being afraid of touching her, it felt so real. Belle handled him really well and i really thought he was going to refuse to sleep in the bed. I'm glad he didn't though, Belle's slight forcefulness at the end worked so well. I seriously loved it, you wrote it so brilliantly!!!! Please update soon!!!! I can't wait!!!!
  10. GASP!!! I love how you did that, [i was leaning in to the screen as i read!] i could just completely imagine that Belle wouldn't say anything and Aden would figure it out on his own! I wonder if she'll tell him the whole truth now, he's gonna feel so bad... Can't wait for more, please put the next chapter up tonight! Please! please please please please!!!!!!!
  11. Great chapter! I'm really glad they decided to be friends and take things slow. Aden was so cute with Sydney! Can't wait for more, update soon!
  12. OMG! Who hit Nicole?!?!?!?!? I really liked that Adelle scene! Twas great!!! Update soon!
  13. Yay! I really like the way Aden found out! Can't wait for more! Update soon!
  14. I love this! It's so different! I'm really glad that... Sydney is Aden's daughter, Angelo and Belle aren't together and that Sydney hates Angelo! Can't wait for more, Belle needs to tell Aden Sydney is his, i like the connection they have even though they've only just met and I like that she looks more like Aden than Belle, it's really sweet! Update soon!
  15. I really like this!!!! You're a great writer! You've got me really intrigued!!! I like the way you've written the characters as well, it's really interesting! Update soon!
  16. WOW! This chapter was AMAZING!!!!!!!! I loved Aden's reactions to everything and the talk was so good, i could completely see it playing out like that! I loved that you kind of rounded it off at the end with the cute moment and the baby but you also really cleverly didn't pretend that now its gonna be absolutely fine... Great writing!!!! Can't wait for you next update! Good luck with your exams!
  17. OMG! OMG! OMG! I LOVED this chapter! It was nice to see Belle relax a bit more with the others and i liked the way you described how Aden and Belle's relationship had been over the last few days. I'm glad you didn't have Belle hide the fact she'd seen Justin and i'm really glad she got angry, i was hoping it would knock some sense into Aden, but his reactions were perfect! I loved the ending! You're writing these scenes really well, especially because you are showing the actual effects on their relationship as well as individually. Hope you get the chance to update soon! Can't wait!
  18. I had a virus on my computer so was without the internet for two days! But the only thing i really had withdrawal from was Adelle fanfics, so i was so excited when i got to read two updates when i got the internet back! I loved that belle questioned Aden's trust in her to look after the baby, i'd never really thought about something like that before, you handled it amazingly! As with the rest of the 'conversation' between them. The awkwardness of the situation just emanated right throughout the chapter! I loved the last chapter, and i'm really glad you gave us some of Aden's perspective on things. The chat between Roman and Aden was amazing! Roman's reactions were perfect! I loved how you wrote him! I hope you can update soon but good luck with the rest of life! lol
  19. That was amazing! (No surprises there really!) I really liked the tension and how you described every bit of the silence. I love Aden's reactions, it felt so realistic, but still; it was so sad! Please update soon! (More angst is good, but don't ever forget the fluff! (as if you could)) can't wait! (but if you've got too much on, don't worry, i'll be waiting impatiently.)
  20. I hope one of the idea's is that missing scene fic you mentioned once on the old Aden/Belle AT. Still hoping for that one, someday. You remember that, lol! Yes, definitely, i am planning on doing that when i finish 'everyone's got problems' but at the moment i've got four assessments and two exams over the next three weeks at uni, so i'm not going to have much (if any) time to update for a while.
  21. I really like this! It's so original! Belle and Aden's relationship is just aw! ...and the puppy! So cute! I liked how you started Aden and Nicole off together then made it Adelle. Martha's and Jack's vows were just so sweet!!! Really like this fic! the agony aunt character is great! Please update soon!
  22. I completely agree with the points you and symphony made, i wish i'd had a bit more time to work on it. I have so many ideas for fics and i'm just trying to restrain myself to one at a time, but a oneshot is a bit of a release, lol. Thank you so much for your comments! I"m glad that you like my writing! Really makes me want to write more!
  23. I loved that! I loved that you went through Aden's thought processes, it worked really well! I loved how he reacted to Belle and how controlled he was being but i'm glad you kept Drew there, it added a different edge. Great as per, update soon! Can't wait!!!
  24. I want to respond to Jody, i think that although that's pretty much true, she described the thought processes Aden should have been going through, she took two paragraphs to do that. Aden had one second to decide how to react so it wasn't a decision and he wasn't thinking, he was acting on instinct (my opinion anyway). An instinct that told him he'd moved on with his life since Justin left and he didn't want to bring any chance of that old pain coming in to his life again. But this coud lead on to something deeper because obviously he hasn't dealt with everything from his past to do with his brother. But for a first conversation i feel it was pretty realistic. I think with a second conversation or more, some of the things that Jody thought Aden should be like will happen. Of course this is your fic, Taniya, but i just wanted to show whereas Jody got that impression, i got this one. Anyway, great chapter! I loved the talk (argument) between Justin and Aden! The Drew/Belle scene was great too, and i loved Aden when he first came in to the house, i think it was the first time Drew's seen him like that. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! seriously, it's so good!
  25. Hey, any idea what time it might be up if it's gonna be up tonight? Sorry to nag it's just that i don't want to go to sleep if you're gonna update, you are just that good!
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