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OMG! You have to update like RIGHT NOW!! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! Great chapter, they never drag on because everything in them is so worth reading, whether it's to make you cry or make you laugh. I loved Belle's cravings, they were funny. Irene/Belle scene was nice too, loved the memories she contemplated as she sat in her old room, especially the ones involving Aden! The scene with Drew in was nice because i liked that Drew was seeing Belle and Aden being the usual bantering couple that they are. More of him like that would be nice. ...but the end, i really can't wait! And i absolutely mean that! Any idea when you'll get the next one up?? (sorry if it annoys you, i am just really addicted!) Anywho, great chapter as always and i think my basic message is update soon!

I do love the angst, but your fluff is too good to miss! Excellent chapter, I loved Mattie making sure Belle could see the opposing view in anything she was thinking of. I'm glad Belle wants to tell Aden, i'm really intrigued to see what his reaction will be. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!

That was the PERFECT ending!!!! ...and seriously one of best fics ever! Loved the plot, loved the characters, loved the writing! Absolutely amazing! I hope you write another fic in the future because this one has been brilliant and a joy to read!

Belle really should tell him, but i like that it's causing a bit more angst in the story and is a bit more believable than them being so perfect all the time (Not that i don't love that). I feel that this is a real issue that has developed and is the first one they'll eventually have to face in their marriage. And it'll be the first one that's arisen between them that won't be so easy to run away from because they are married. You write Belle keeping secrets very well, all of her actions seemd completely believable and i like how you had Mattie as the voice of reason. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!

You are such a good writer. WOW! again... I don't think any comment would do any of your fics the justice they deserve...

WOW!

You didn't make it obvious! I think it was mainly out of hope that i thought it could be Justin! So thanks! lol WOW!!!!!!! to start with... you write angst as good as you write fluff... aka, amazing perfection! I loved how Belle was trying to protect Aden and i loved Justin's reactions to what she was telling him! Absolutely perfect way of bringing him back! I LOVE the character you've created as him, he's perfect! Please update again soon, this was one of the best chapters you've ever written!!!

WOW! That was the PERFECT ending!!!!!!! (Not that it's actually over because you said there was a sequel right? THERE BETTER BE!!) This has been one of the BEST adelle fics ever! ...and i agree with Jody that this is the best date i've ever read, and the banter was perfectly combined with the seriousness in all the right places! I laughed so loud when Aden told Irene his intentions! I loved that you put a little bit of Annie's reaction in too! Hilarious! The comedy in this chapter, in fact throughout the fic, has been so well written! You've kept them so well in character all the way through but you can tell how and why they've grown as well. You got Aden and Belle to answer all the questions i would want to know by getting them to ask each other and Aden's answer of 'safe': AOL! I loved the ending!!! Especially Belle's skank comment! Please write a sequel! ...and possibly another story somewhere down the line????? I've loved this so much!!!! :D :D

Aw!!!!! That was so sweet!!! I'm glad Aden said that he wanted it to be special. I cant wait for it to be New yeas eve in the fic now! Update soon! I can't wait!

Awwwww!!!!!!! I've loved the last few chapters! They've been amazing! i'm glad that Geoff and Nicole have gotten together, and the Aden/Belle scenes have just been aol! Can't wait for another update, even if i don't want te fic to end!

Wow! That was an amazing chapter! I loved how Angelo still seemed resentful towards Aden but then Belle's explanation really made everything make perfect sense! I loved the naming the star and I'm really glad you made it Aden's idea, it added a different edge to it. The charm was also perfect! I also loved the fluff at the start and the scene at the end with Aden comforting Belle, that was so sweet! I can't wait for the next update! PLEASE do NOT make me!!!!!!

Excellent update! I really loved the balance you achieved between the fluff and the angsty stuff! You described the new character really well and have me really intrigued! I loved Belle's reactions to him too, you described them perfectly! I was thinking all the way through that it could be Aden's brother too but i can't wait to find out who he really is! Update soon!

I LOVED that last chapter! the first bit felt a bit like an episode of friends! lol I love how you talked about their sex life and how Belle was understanding and it was still sometimes an issue for Aden. Excellent update! The sneak peek is intriguing... and just fyi, i'm a fan of angst (as much as i love fluff too!) cos it makes it exhilirating to find out about! Can't wait for update, i hope you'll be able to make it tomorrow!

Fantastic as usual! Loved the banter! It's so sweet that they're buying stuff for the baby... i just want to aol all the way through! I can't wait for it to actually be born now! I really want Aden to be right about the sex, lol. Update soon! Can't wait!

AWWWWWW!!! So adorable!!!! I loved Belle's moods, they're not over the top but they feel just right to be funny! I liked how she got mad at Aden smiling at the nurse. That bit about Belle hearing the sound of the baby's and Aden's heart beats has got to be the cutest thing ever!!!!! Loved every second of it, as i always do with your chapters! Please update soon! (But when you can!)

Wow! Great couple of chapters! Poor Belle! I love how you wrote that though, how she told Aden what she'd done, amazing! I like the bits with Nicole, Annie and Geoff and i'm glad Annie backed down, Belle would have got more hurt if they hadn't. Please update soon! I'm loving this fic!

Aw! I loved the Aden/Nicole interaction at the start! Sooo funny!!!! It was so sweet that he wanted to propose! Loved the Aden/Belle/Irene scene, VERY FUNNY!!! Especially the joke about getting arrested for public indecency! I liked Belle's reasons for saying no and you wrote that proposal and the rest of it amazingly! Drew me in completely! I loved this chapter! Had me smiling and laughing all the way through! I can't wait for the next one! Please update soon!

I loved that it was Geoff's idea too! Fantastic update once again! Absoloutely loved it! The way she kept trying to leave and he kept stopping her.. the talk about the scar... and the Nicole scenes just made it amazing once more! Please update soon! can't wait for more! Really pleased to hear there's a sequel coming!

yay! Aden and Belle got together! I loved how you did that with the '...let's make it true..." line, that was so sweet! I have a suspicion that Nicole and Annie will actually become worried when they realise Belle and Aden are together because now they think he's a player and probably think he'll hurt her... just some speculation, lol. Can't wait for the next update! Soon please!

OMG! That was so sweet! You made something so simple like not being able to get to sleep in to something beautiful like the baby moving! That was amazing! Aden just as wonderful as ever, i loved how you described all their positions and how Belle kept trying to adjust her position in relation to Aden. My favourite thing with that, that you do a lot is when Aden always has a hand on Belle's stomach! It's so protective and wonderful! I just grin stupidly whenever i read a chapter of this fic! That was really sweet of Mattie and Nicole at the end too! I loved how you rounded it off! Excellent writing as always! Can't wait for the next update! If you make me i don't know what i might do... just kidding... understandable that you've got other commitments too, lol but you are such a good writer! P.s. Thanks, that's really sweet! x

Aw! very cute, loved it! Update soon!

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Racy fluff is catching on, hope i've started a trend now with giving it that name, lol! That was my favourite chapter EVER!!!!!! You wrote that so perfectly, i could see everything happen, it was so passionate and endearing and amazing! I wish it were like that in the show, you're reunion was so much better! I loved how Belle was really into it and that they had the cheeky banter at really perfectly timed intervals, but then it was really sudden how she said 'stop' and Aden did immediately. This was seriously so fantastic, i never want this fic to end, it's brilliant! That being said... please update soon! :D

Aw! that was really good! I like how you wrote how Aden felt, i could see him feeling that way!

Aw! That was so sweet! I loved it! Can't wait for tomorrow now!

Great update! I loved how Aden spoke to that girl! I'm wondering what will happen with Annie, Nicole and Belle considering all their feelings towards Aden... Please update soon!