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Easily the best character on the show ATM. Everyone else is boring, least I get a laugh out of him.

I think Miles is definetly showing signs of some sort of mental illness, that or a brain tumour (which I doubt because its overdone). It all began when he got drunk and went into the water though, so it could be some sort of trauma related thing. I started thinking maybe he was schizophrenic (there was a similar storyline on another soap).

It would be interesting if martha fell for Angelo! Falling for your late husband's killer! That'd b controversial haha

OMG! Hurry up for the next update, I seriously have to see what happens! Hope Adelle is okay!

Wow, just started reading today, and found it awesome! I really loved how you used Irene, she's one of my faves

Isn't he coming back as a regular? I thought that's what I read, might be mistaken.

Really sorry everyone who was reading this. I'll be posting asap just been sidetracked.

spamming in my thread! lol Yep went to Oxford street and Harrods (not that I could afford anything anyway!). London is so amazing. I want to move there for good! Just putting finishing touches on the next ep. Will be up soon.

I'm back! OMG London is the best, I'm definetly moving there! I'll update after jetlag finishes lol

Sorry, won't be able to post any chaps till March 12th. I'm flying off to London. I'll post as soon as I'm back.

I'm not too sure if I will be able to post too many new eps. I leave on wednesday. I';; try and have Ep. 6 and 7 up before I go though. Because I'm writing scripts, I had the idea to write spoilers for them, like Home and Away does. The episodes will appear like they do on tv, Week 1 consists of the first 5, Week 2 of the next five, and so on. Here's the spoilers for Week 2: Monday As Martha fights for her life, both Roman and Hugo vie for her affections. Ruby is caught trying to have sex with Xavier. Nicole tries to pick up the pieces. Tuesday After being caught, Ruby and Xavier attempt to plan a secret tryst in the bushland, however after getting lost, they find they may not in fact be suited for each other. Leah finds comfort in Miles. Wednesday Leah discovers Vinnie's son is dead, therefore losing all connection with her late husband for good. Saddened by her break up with Xavier, Ruby turns to the “wild side” forcing Annie into an uncomfortable situation. Thursday Martha, Hugo, Dylan and Charlie go on a double date. Rachel worries about Tony's state of mind. Belle, blinding by hatred of Aden accidently runs somebody off the road, and leaves him there. Friday Antonio returns to haunt Belle, and now with Aden out of the picture, she seems all alone. Roman and Dylan receive bad news - their other brother Oscar, and his wife have been killed in a car accident, leaving their three children orphans. Freddie (16), Nessa (18), and Brett (8) must now move to the Bay. Dylan takes it upon himself to look after the wayward children. Will Belle escape Antonio? ---- I'll try and post Ep. 6 tonight.

How about Aden's brother Sean gets out of prison and wreaks havoc on the pair. Sean rapes Belle, then is charged. In court, he is let off. After the trial, he attacks Belle again, at gunpoint. Aden discovers then, and gets into a fight with Sean, he then takes his brother's gun and shoots him... leaving a huge cliffhanger!

Glad you like.

Who do you want to be your central characters? It could be a story about Aden and Belle. With Belle spiralling deep into depression and Aden being her guardian angel. Or same for Tony, since Jack's death. Rachel could then save him from his depression. You could even make it about Jai with all his survivor guilt thing that he has. You could even expand it to be a long triangle thing, Jai/Annie/? Dunno, hope it helps anyway. --- Aden's 19 isn't he? So Belle would be round 19 as well I think.

I'll have the next one up tonight, and another on Monday and Tuesday. I'm flying out on Wednesday to England, and won't be back until the 10th of March, so updates will probably stop this week. As for Belle and Aden... I have some wicked plans for them but I won't spoil the ending! I might go back and edit each thing as well, as in Ep1, Ep2... so on, might make it easier to follow.

I'm in love with Charlie! or Esther lol when she first came on I was a bit iffy, bout now I can't get enough of her! I think the only thing we really need to see her do is lose all her inhibitions. She's all tense and never has any fun. When she lightens up she'll rock even more!

Update update! Hope Aden will be ok!!

Thought as I'm writing it in script format, that I'd try and get at least five updates a week, one for every day, like the show. When I get into the routine, I'll try and post them once every night Monday-Friday. I'm going away for two weeks starting wednesday, so I won't be able to update for a while! So I'll try and write as much as I can now, and try and leave you guys with a cliffhanger! haha Its soooo fun writing this.