monkeysmoke

ah more fluff, just what the doctor ordered. fantastic update. xxx

haha a fluff sandwich. that's funny. that should be an actual writing term!

After a night out a new chapter from you is the best way to end the evening, loving it!!!

that was so gripping! i want more, but *Sigh* i have to go to work.... boo! xxx

well, one of the reasons it was such a short one was because half way thorugh writing my friend called and by the time i finsihed talking i was really tired so no, probably not until tomorrow im afraid! but thanks for the comments all! xx

aw, i knew you wouldn't let us down! although i did start to panic a little bit. that was actually awesome. sweet dreams for me tonight xxx

only if you do only joshing with ya! (but seriously, aden and belle need to make up!)

Just so you know i edited the last chapter as reading it back i realised i missed out a line which meant Belle walked away for no reason. Nothing that interesting, just didn't make sense without it! xx

In response to wrongturntaken it's not that crazy only joking where do you think i got the idea? Although i've never used a cupboard before, usually mine are all too full of crap! xxx

hey thanks for the detailed comments again! i know, i feel bad for Geoff. I keep portraying him as either really irritating or as the comedy element! So sorry to all Geoff fans! xxx

Noooooooo! Not good! Not good at all! Not the chapter! Your writing was a la fantastique! As always! But Aden and Belle fighting! Big No No. Slap on wrist to Taniya, just a few days ago there were shower scenes! Not happy. (only joking, i trust you) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Yes that did happen in this one! Wow, feels like i wrote that ages ago! As to your question i can neither confirm or deny your suspicions. xx

damn you! I really want to know now!!!!! xx

to be honest i hadn't really decided whether to keep sally in or not. she can't really live with Miles, Kirty and Alf, aor work at the school so i guess she has left! lol. and just for you there will be a small aden scene up in a few minutes... (flattery will get you everywhere) xx

ooo i like that its starting to go in a different direction to what i expected! Aslso! Thanks for explaingin what stockholm syndrome is, because i really had no idea! that was great! xx

that chapter was really good! loved the nicole/belle interaction! never saw enough of that in the show really!

Ah now i am torn. Half of me wants to see them try and get along, failing miserably, and the other half just wants to go 'FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT!" great update again!

awww well I've had a hearty fill tonight, now i can sleep easy. thankyou! xxxx oh and in case it wasn't obvious, i thought that was awesome.

wow. the ending was so steamy! (Aha, get it? steamy? in the bathroom? I crack myself up ) But in all seriousness now, that was really well done. I feel all mushy inside now

There will be an update tonight! I can't promise who will be in it though! (Sorry!) xxx

thankyou! I love Nicole, couldn't leave her out of it for much longer! xx

wow! Thanks for your detailed reply! I did get a bit carried away over the weekend! Im glad you enjoyed them though! xxxx

the way its going, i don't think its ever going to!! thanking you lovey xx

I just realised i've never commented on this before! I'm sorry I havent' because this is so good! And i can't believe its almost over! how sad! Anyway I've really enjoyed it, i hope there is a sequel on the cards.....?