monkeysmoke
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ooo nice start. Interesting place to take it from too! I like the fact you're writing from Belle's perspective as well, makes it a bit different! xxx
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oo I'm liking it. although i can see Aden being off with Belle and then her considering choosing Drew... oh boy oh boy... not good.
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. that sounds awesome! and about bloody time too!
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yeah! That was quite freaky. I think I did get a bit carried away today! Although I do like how chunky Taniya K's chapters are. They're like whole meals, and mine are like little bite size pieces. And, this is completely irrelevant really, but, I love Miles! -
if this is Aden vs Drew Then I'm backing Aden, i never could stand Drew.
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fantastic - as always! you write them faster than i can read them! It's brill!
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sorry, i know its a cruel bit to end on. I will start writing up the next chapter now, just need to work out a few practicalities first to make the plot flow. -
Oooooo what could have happened??? Sorry but I'm on Aden's side on this one. Never was much of a drew fan anyway. xxx
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Coming from Miss Cliffhanger herself! You iwll have to wait and see. I'm starting to write it now! -
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You will have to wait and see! i'm hoping to type to type it up now, but probs won't be up for about another hour? sorry for the delay today but i work late most tuesdays! xx -
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haha i know, it was the first thing that came to mind! I know Annie has not had any really calm/funny scenes really at all! Or Aden! I seem to be drawn to writing drama! It is all for a purpose though I swear! Once I've go this bit out of my system I might be able to chill out and let them have some fun for a change! xx -
wow, that was really well written! Could have been an actual episode of h&a
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Good. Very good. I like it! Definately continue! please?
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Don't worry Aden's in the next chapter! I'm glad you enjoyed the others too though! xx -
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yeah i got a bit trigger happy cos my internet was being extra slow! sorry! I do have the next chapter planned it's just the writing of it that could be a while. Especially seeing as desperate housewives double bill is on! However I am encouraged by all the comments so might try and squeeze out another one before tomorrow! glad you're enjoying it. xx -
"That's a tramp stamp" hahahaha funniest thing i've heard all day! I'll have to remember that one! excelletn chapter. i like how it cheered up at the end, was sweet
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ah what about his father? am intrigued! You + cliffhanger = excellent chapter not even close to boring! xx
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Hey
Thank you your comment was really nice! and i'm glad your enjoying the fic, because i can't stop writing it now! haha!
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Ah thanks for the comments! I'm trying to gathre up opinion on Aden's character as I 'm finding it difficult to balance him out. So do we need more mean or more nice? xx
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thanks for the comments! I love your fic! It cheers me up after writing my depressing storyline! Anyway, as a dedicated reader I wanted to know your opinion. Should I make Aden a little more badboy? the balance is difficult to judge!
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I'm glad you like them, but I need an honest opinion. Do you think I should be making Aden a little more mean to everyone? I'm trying to get the balance right but finding it difficult!
thanks for the comments, and for being a dedicated reader! xx
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Aw, thats so sweet, I wish I could get someone to pay me to spend all day writing, but alas. I did take English Lit at uni though which really developed my writing skills! Still waiting for publishers to start waving contracts at me though... -
and you're leaving it there? that's evil! But definately good. I'm so intrigued. xxx
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ahh your comment was so sweet i was actually blushing. Thankyou! I'm glad you like it. I just want to know people will give me honest feedback so I can make it as good as possible is all!
Glad you like it though!
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