Jody

I am happy you included bits about the Aden and Melody friendship even if it wasn't much. I liked that Aden felt bad for thinking anything bad (even if it wasn't) about Melody. So cute Belle who is this independant and strong girl still feels unsafe when Aden's arms aren't around her. Glad they were back to their old selves by the end and no more ignoring each other. What was the reason for that pain she felt after he kissed her? Now I don't know if I missed something or if thats new. Too many Adelle fics to keep up with.

You update so fast I can not keep up with my reviews. Loved the chapter before the last one with Aden watching her at work. His little jealousy at that guy looking at her was cute. The last chapter was just to cute for words. That was such a normal thing for the two of them to do. I loved the way they were sitting. Are these two capable of being next to each other without atleast one of them having their arms around each other. I would love to see Adelle on the show doing normal stuff and just being carefree and with no drama. The part with them not wanting to get of the couch was the sweetest thing ever. I'd say please update soon but considering this is you I don't think I even need to ask that. Looking forward to the next one.

Really enjoyed the last 3 chapters. I'm glad Drew and Aden finally came to an understanding before he left. But I am a little happy that they still don't like each other all that much. The reciept Mattie found is now going to make me start analysing everything in the chapters to come looking for clues. When you are giving us lighthearted fluff I don't think you need to add the words don't worry as a warning. There is no worry after that just happiness. Irene giggling like a school girl is hilarious. So Aden makes pancakes as well, he is turning into quite the perfect guy.

Aden made the right choice. He does seem better of now that he got to spend this time with his brothers. Who would have thought getting kidnapped by them would have been the best thing that could have happened to him. This was a really good story. I truly enjoyed it.

Good update. Just when I started to like Nicole a little in this chapter for finally doing something useful in this fic she goes and ruin it by making that comment about Belle being responsible if any thing happenned to Aden. Belle's speech was amazing. I wonder what Angelo would think of Belle giving Aden bedroom window priveleges.

Oliver isn't doing himself any favours, is he? First hitting Aden and now lying to Belle about apologising. Seems like he might end up getting them one step closer to getting back together without even realising it.

Loved the last two chapters. Nice backstory you created for Angelo. It almost made me feel sorry for him. But he did rape Belle that time so I can hardly feel sorry for him fully. Are we going to find out more about him like what he did to Belle (the other one). She mentioned something about him doing something and her forgiving him. Will we be finding out more about this? The last chapter was lovely. I loved Aden's little signal for Charlie to back off. The thing about her wearing his shirt was a really sweet moment. I'm worried about Aden's worry at the end.

The last few chapters have been amazing. I love the way you are handling Drew's character. You make his reasons for acting the way he is so justified that I can't hate him even for causing problems for Adelle. Drew, on the show, was always very stubborn and refused to see reason. I love the way at times Drew noticed the changes in Aden but he still refuses to accept that Aden has changed. It's very in character. Also nice, is that while Belle was mad as hell at him she doesn't hate him. And lastly all this Drew stuff as led to some lovely Adelle scenes. So how can I not like Drew. Aden and Belle's relationship just keeps getting better. You truly show how much they love each other. Their scenes are so intense. I love that they got everything out in the open. The last chapter was brilliant.

It's good to see Sean and Justin thinking about what Aden needs. They have come such a long way.

So cute. I missed how cute they are together when theres no drama. Loved Belle's thoughts on her ultimatum. And her worry about Drew taking her up on it. Also like that she doesn't seem to hate him.

This is so good. Lets hope Aden sees sense and realises he needs her soon. Poor Belle. I felt so sorry for her in the hospital. As for Geoff, I love that Irene didn't defend him. But I like that Belle has decided to talk even though I do agree with her about him being an insensitive pig for asking in the first place.

Brilliant ending. Aden is such a sweetheart flying them there for the wedding and so smart for bringing them three days earlier so he could make them leave without feeling guilty. This chapter was lovely and such a nice way to end this fic. Looking forward to more stories from you. Glad you already have another story you're working on. Can't wait to read it.

Now both Mattie and Belle have issues with their bosses. So Roman's taking Sean with them. Now I'm really curious about what role Sean is going play in all this.

So much to catch up on. I am definetely adding another two favourite chapters to my list. Chapter 28 and 29 were simply brilliant. In chapter 28 I didn't think he'd break up with her but I was sure he'd be ignoring her for a long while before he gave in and listened. I liked this better. It was good see them talk this out. I'm glad that things are okay between them for now, even if he is still not 100% over what she did. There was nothing I didn't love about chapter 29. That fight was so intense. After their (Drew/Belle) last break up on the show I can clearly imagine them standing there screaming at each other like that. I loved how she wanted to make him understand Aden more so much but still kept from revealing Aden's secret. This chapter more than anything truly showed how strong Belle's feelings for Aden are. If only Aden could have somehow heard all this. Can't wait for the next chapter. Missing the fluff but loving all the angst at the same time.

Poor Annie and Aden. You describe how sick Annie must feel so well. And you write Aden perfectly. Annie must be even more confused now with Aden's reaction.

Now when they are finally acting brotherly you go and split them up. I am so stuck on whether I want him to stick with his brothers or wanting him to go home to Belle and Roman. But I am glad that Sean and Justin now see that Aden needs to go back.

This chapter was really good. I hope Aden takes her home. I'd love to see everyones reations.

Loved the flashback. Aden being cheesy is so cute. Now I really hope Ric finds the money and goes after Mattie. This chapter made me feel so sorry for him. I loved the little dig at Nicole. Can't wait to see how Aden gets the money.

Poor Aden. All that angst. I loved him sitting outside his old house. And all his thoughts about it was lovely. Really liked that Ric now seems to understand that Aden has changed. He seems to have won over everyone. Maybe Drew is next. The scene between Aden and Drew, although I felt bad for Aden and don't think he deserves what Drew said, I like that part. I can imagine Drew being stubborn and not wanting to except that Aden has changed. Hope at some point Drew finally realises how wrong he is about Aden. Can't wait to find out what Aden has done.

Oh. Wow. Any feelings of hatred that came up for Aden from me in the chapter before this has officially dissappeared. The apology was perfect. I loved it so much that I was actually happy that she was willing to let it go once he apologised fully and not hold it against him. Although liked that she didn't give in right away and told him to 'keep going'. He just said everything I had hoped he would say. Everything about this chapter was amazing. You truly are an amazing writer. That chapter just seriously made my day.

I loved the whole part between Aden and Roman when they were talking about his dad. I like that Roman can now see where Aden is coming from. You can really see why Aden would think Larry doesn't care. Belle and Drew. Loved the teasing in the beginning about Drew's exams. About the mark, I wonder if Drew is now going to think that Aden is doing that to her on purpose. I could see how he'd come that conclusion.

Poor Sarah and Danny. Hope Ric and Mattie can eventually work things out. But for now atleast Matties going to the reunion. Loved the flashback. Glad you added some Adelle banter. Oliver actually sounds really sweet. But it's still Adelle for me.

I love how it started of so sad and then became really funny. Loved it. More Adelle interaction. As well as Belle teasing Roman. Gladys is hilarious.

Really interesting. I'm guessing Aden's 'bliss' is going to be short lived. Please continue.

Wow. So that chapter was the best thing I have read in a while. I loved the reason for why Angelo is doing this. Although he is kinda reminding me little of Psycho Derek on One Tree Hill now only this is written so much better. Can't wait to find out more about Angelo's history.