Jody

Great chapter. I loved everything about the whole first part about Belle's thoughts on Aden's nightmares. It really showed how well she knows and loves him. Especially that part about her sticking the pain so he doesn't have to wake up. With Aden snapping at Belle and refusing to even think about seeing his dad to Belle being really scared for him, Roman really is the voice of reason in this situation.

I'm loving this so far. I feel so sorry for Aden considering how his life turned out. Poor Belle, she gets her dream job and still gets stuck with a boss from hell. Yay. Geoff and Melody are together and happy. And Nicole as not suddenly made an appearance (so far)in yet another Adelle fic. Two things that are definetely rare in Adelle fics lately. Extra reason for me to love this fic.

Chapter 19 is now my new favourite chapter. Loved these above two parts. Everything about that chapter was great. From Aden's sarcastic replies to Angelo's questions to his reaction to his dad trying to kill himself to the fact that in the middle of all that he still felt bad for being harsh with Belle if he didn't mean it for her. Why is Larry in prison? Did the hostage situation and everything happen before unlucky ( I didn't think it did) or is it part of your own storyline? Love that you ended that chapter with some humor. Chapter 20 was good as well. Poor Drew. Nicole comments were hilarious. I didn't expect the twist of her doing it on Aden's behalf but it was nice. Now that Roman knows about the tatoo I guess Nicole is not going to be too happy with Drew. The Adelle scene in the beginning. It goes without saying it was really good.

Loved this chapter. It was worth the wait. Like how Belle teared up about the article. Feel? I meant felt. > Sure you did Belle. Love the way Nicole's reaction affected him. Even though he was so sure of himself in the last chapters it's so believable that he would start doubting his decision to give the interview at some time or the other. So Angelo is a real idiot isn't he. He knew that Aden saw that name yet he still sends it. Does he want to get caught. Please update soon.

I don't think I have reviewed this story before but thought I should let you know that I think it is amazing. I loved the Annie/Aden scene. I love how he went from angry to understanding to angry again. His rant to Annie at the end was spot on. Adelle parts are good as well. Real funny when Belle hit the ball over the table.

That certainly wasn't a bore. You should write long chapters like this more often. I guess my worry about Drew from last time wasn't all that nessecary so far. Loved him in this chapter. Belle and Mattie teasing was him hilarious. The whole part with the three them sitting there talking was great. Why can't we have scenes like that with the characters just hanging out together on the show. Can't wait to find out what's up with Aden's dad. And looking forward to finding out about the stamp as well. I guess the drama is officially here. Forgot to review the last chapter so I thought I should mention how much I loved Ruby's idea that Aden could be her birthday present.

The trying to be a big brother thing makes me feel a lot better. The reason for Aden's hatred for Drew now does make sense to me. It does feel like Aden would hate him for this reason alone. Thanks for clearing that up.

Dammit Drew, after loving you so far in Unlucky you had to go ruin yourself by smirking at Nicole of all people. You have officially been ruined for me. Now atleast I can be happy to side with Aden over him. Wait a minute since I am guessing Aden's problem is going to be about him being around Nicole which means more Nicole, well atleast your writing is so good and I love this story so much that I might not be to bothered by Nicole. About the mutual hatred thing I always thought it came after Aden overreacted when Belle was taken to the hospital. Because he seemed okay that Drew didn't like him and only started hating him when he wrongly blamed Drew for Belle being in the hospital. I always saw it as Aden starting this hatred thing. I felt I should defend Drew one more time since I have a bad feeling I won't be doing it for the rest of his stay. I can't wait to find out why Aden is so late, if there is a reason, because four hours sounds like something. And loved Irene thinking about how Aden could always be counted on, look how far they have come. Lucky Ric. Poor Roman. Loved Aden's big ego. Drew's phoning just to mess with Mattie hilarious. Can't wait for the next part.

Loved that from Mattie. Too bad, I guess Belle isn't getting Drew after all. I wonder if there is a reason Aden is taking so long or he's really is just late. I loving all the Belle/Matties scenes in this story. It's really making me sad that Belle doesn't have any girlfriends on the show though. Really funny when Mattie was reminding Belle about how she used to be.

I think I am the only who would like to see Belle get stuck with Drew. As I love Drew from Unlucky. Let's hope that now that he is going to being here soon he hasn't suddenly had a personality transplant and has become some truly mean person. Belle getting stuck with him would definetely provide some funny moments. I miss his teasing of her. Especially him calling her sis. As long as it doesn't cause problems for Aden and Belle I am all for Drew and Belle spending some time together. And now I am getting carried away, I don't even know if it's him she going to get. I am definetely more interested in who Aden is going to end up with though. Can't wait for the auction.

Loved these last few chapters. Especially Belle asking Roman about the auction. Love that you added Charlie and Angelo. Angelo was hilarious. The cake was good to. I can totally see why Belle would prefer chocolate cake over anything else. I would too. I like the part where he offered to give her some money she said that she has enough and most of it is from him already. I can't wait to find out what drama it is that you have planned for them.

Definetely haven't been put off it. From time to time in some fics the characters may do something I don't like or agree with but I still continue reading if the writing is still really good, like with this story. Doesn't mean I won't be back to loving the character again in the future. Your writing is still lovely. Believe me I only get this worked up about a story if I am completely invested in it.

I hate that I have to say this but I really hope that she doesn't go to Aden (not marry Taylor as well). I'd like to see her give him a piece of her mind. Getting frustrated and angry with her is one thing but I am finding him to be way too demanding. The two of them haven't seen each other in years than one day he just pours his heart out to her and expects her to just fall into his arms without any reservations about it. Even when she realises she does want him back and gives up so much for him he still gives her a hard time (which I still don't think she deserves just because she didn't immediately fall into his arms last time) then is upset that she would leave because he let her pour her heart out to him and forgot to mention he was seeing someone. As for her getting engaged( which yes is stupid of her when she still has feelings for Aden) I still think she has every right. What was she supposed to do after telling him how she feels and then finding out he seeing someone else, sit around alone ,not move on and wait for the off chance that they'll once again bump in to each other and he'll be single. So far the only time I have felt Belle was mean was when she slept with him and left without a word. But that certainly didn't warrant an ultimatum like this or justifies him talking to her the way he did. I really hope Belle, who decides not to marry Taylor, makes him regret the way he spoke to her. I'll be very dissappointed in her if she jumps on the next plane to tell him she loves him. Wow this comment really makes me seem like I am Anti-Adelle which I am in no way. But for some reason this chapter just made me hate Aden a little. Anger and letting know in no uncertain terms that he is not happy with her is one thing but that speech was totally uncalled for. Looking forward the next chapter.

Chapter 10 and chapter 12 are now my favourites in this sequel. Annie and Aden's parts were awesome. I don't mind if the focus is taken of Adelle if I am getting lovely scenes like that. Now this is a relationship where I can see the bro/sis thing (not that they are close to that but after those scenes it would be believable). I like that even though he didn't know what to say most of the time he still tried. Real funny how he threatenned to drag her home. I'd like to see more of them. Now my other favourite chapter. I am once again so happy you chose to make their problem something simple. Weird though how intense their relationship is (not in this fic but considering Aden's problems) that not for one second did it occur to Belle that it could just be something simple. She was shocked by it in fact. Cute little thing in the end about him still just wanting to sleep. The last chapter was nice. I need my light fluffy moments from time to time. Loved how she woke him. That bachelor auction sounds fun already.

I don't read any fanfiction for only 6 days then I come back and you have already wrapped up your other fic and got to chapter 6 six on your new one. I can't tell you what a treat that was for me. I'm glad you're adding a little angst in this one. As much as I love Adelle fluff some angst is good to. I love that the problems you have them going through seems like realistic relationship problems. I really want to go back point out everything that I love but 6 chapters is just to long to read through again and remember everything I like. Just know that I am already enjoying this as much as the last one even if they aren't as carefree and happy as they were in the last one. Love that we got some Mattie and Belle scenes. Belle really needs a friend now with Aden acting so distant. Felt so sorry for Belle in that last line.

It was very sad seeing this fic end but your promise of a sequel made it a little better. I can honestly say that never once throughout this whole fic could I have guessed that you were a first time HAA writer. This story has been so good and as kept me hooked from the beginning right up to the end. I am glad you didn't feel the need to add in extra drama along the way just for the sake of it. This story showed that you don't always need big and dramatic plots (which is great as well when written well) for a story to be good. I wasn't planning on mentioning each specific thing I loved in the last few chapters seeing as there are alot and this review would probably end up running half a page but I just have to mention that charmed bracelet. That is the best gift ever. I love how much thought he put into every charm.

Just read the last two chapters. The flashbacks are amazing. You truly made me feel how weak and pathetic Aden must feel because he couldn't defend himself. I like how open he was during the interview. It's good that you made Gavin a little more compassionate after that, it would have been very unrealistic if he didn't care cause I don't think anyone could listen to a story like that and not feel something, even someone like Gavin who doesn't seem to care about anyone. The scene with Aden and Rachel was really good. It truly showed how he feels like he doesn't anyones help. The scene with Belle and Aden looking at each other, I don't think I have ever read someone describe two people looking into each others eyes and getting lost in the moment so beautifully. I looking to the mystery about who's after Aden. They have sure gone to a lot trouble to make him suffer.

I'm going to have to have a talk to her about that. > He sounded like a scolding mother there. Really lovely chapter. I know nothing much happenned in this chapter but those chapters are the ones I almost always find to be the best ones.

I like how Aden's new found maturity has shocked both Martin and Miles. I can imagine Miles standing there waiting for Aden to lash out at someone.

Lovely chapter. Belle couldn't help but think how they got so domestic. > I thought the same thing when I read that he entered the kitchen and saw her standing by the stove. I can see Belle being upset about the fact that Annie didn't call her. Aden was really good at reassuring her about why they didn't call for someone who claims he is not good at that kind of stuff.

Like One Tree Hill, don't you?

How sweet is it that as much as she likes that he is more grown up she doesn't want him to lose his cocky side. That was brave of Aden, agreeing to tell Gavin everything. I am really interested to know what Aden wants Belle to know. Please update soon.

Aden keeping that piece of paper with him was really sweet. I was not expecting this to be the chapter where they finally give in and admit they want to be together but I am really happy you didn't make us wait any longer. It may not have worked out this time but atleast now they know it's what they both want. I like Emmy.

Okay now I am even starting to warm up to Sean. Why are you making me like them? I'm supposed to keep being convinced that they are evil for taking Aden away from Belle. The flashback was lovely and it definetly made feel for both Sean and Aden.

Aww Aden, seems like Belle really does have him wrapped around her little finger, he really is loosing the ability too say no to her. Aden going out there in the storm. I wonder how Belle's going to react to that.